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After their defeat at the hands of the Rainbooms, the Sirens wanted to make a break for it, leave Canterlot, and regroup someplace else.

But with the authorities now onto them, that isn't an option.

Faced with being sent to juvy or worse, an orphanage, the Sirens are given an alternative they don't particularly like:

Being "rehabilitated" by their enemies.

At Principal Celestia's suggestion, the Sirens are separated from one another, and each is sentenced to live with one of the Rainbooms. Adagio is sent to live with Sunset Shimmer. Sonata is sent to live with Pinkie Pie.

Aria is sent to live with Fluttershy. One of these girls is in for a whole lot of trouble.

(A "dueling stories" fic exchange with Mirai-chan, inspired by Andrea Libman and Diana Kaarina playing twin sisters on Strawberry Shortcake's Berry Bitty Adventures.)

Rated teen for language, innuendo, and hygiene topics.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 166 )

Oh my...
Fluttershy getting even is amazing.

Five hours before getting approved? That has to be a new record. (I put it in my tracking library when you gave everyone a sneak-peak. I like it.)

6355799 That's an academy record.

6355810 I feel if any story ever got approved after one minute, that would be an all-time record (never gonna happen though).

Holy god this is gonna be amazing.:rainbowlaugh:

AND IT HAS BEGUN!

This isn't a clop fic is it? I don't really read that stuff but the rest of the plot seems interesting enough.

Woo! Its here!

I'm excited!

They say revenge is a dish best served cold, but in this case I think it was better served flaming hot. 41.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lxuyq4hERJ1r3k1m8o1_500.png

Let the war begin

And it begins. Let's see where this goes, though I think we all have a pretty good idea of the options...

6355828 the combination of Sex tag and Teen tag denotes otherwise. If it had actual depictions of sexual acts, it would be Mature.

"I don't WANNA go to jail!" Sonata wailed, clutching her balled-up fists beneath her chin. "They DO stuff to you in jail! BUTT STUFF!!"

Faved.

How interesting. This Fluttershy is becoming my favorite one, though I wouldn't have thought she'd be so forward. But I'm not complaining! Show her who's boss, Fluttershy!

6355799 I've seen it take longer, but yeah. The approve queue was moving pretty slowly yesterday.

6355828 If it were, it'd be rated Mature.

6356126 I've noticed that the Equestria Girls Fluttershy is overall more assertive than the pony Fluttershy, and has a distinctive bitchy streak. Her claws come out more in two movies than her counterpart's did in four seasons.

6356247
Hmm, now that I think about it, they might have tried to correct the mistake of keeping Fluttershy's character so complacent over the seasons by making Fluttershy from Equestria Girls more assertive. Who knows. Either way, I think I can agree with you.

"JAIL! JAIL! I WANT JAIL!" Adagio screamed, shooting out of her chair. "LOVELY, STONE-WALLED, LOCKED-CELLS, COCKROACHES-ON-THE-FOOD JAIL!"

That line right there automatically makes me put this in my favorites.

6356247 When the pony version of Fluttershy DOES get mad though, things go south. And the fact that it only happens occasionally makes that even scarier.
If I had to choose one to deal with, I'd rather take her Equestria Girls counterpart.

6356259 If you look too deeply into it (as bronies are wont to do), it could be a combination of her age and different hormonal makeup compared to her pony counterpart. Not to put too fine a point on it, EG Fluttershy is younger and has a human reproductive cycle, with all the hormonal and emotional baggage that brings. Even the nicest, most polite girl on the planet can have her moments, and it isn't always her fault. (Nor is it necessarily biology. She could really just have a slightly different temperament.)

Biology and hormones or not, though, she IS younger than her pony counterpart, and that accounts for a LOT.

6356270 Agreed. EG Fluttershy's mood swings are relatively subtle and benign compared to her pony counterpart.

6356308 Although, now I wonder which of them would actually win in a fight...
That would definitely make for an interesting scene.

6356312 I don't think they'd fight, because EG Fluttershy would be too busy squeeing and brushing pony Fluttershy's mane, and pony Fluttershy would be too busy enjoying being the pet for a change. :yay:

6356315 Yeah, probably.
If any pairs were to fight it would most likely be the Rainbow Dash's, and even then it probably wouldn't go too far.

Oh, goodie, a bit of sociopathic comedy. Funny up to a point, toxic afterwards, imo. Will just have to see where this goes, I guess. :derpyderp2:

EDIT: In light of the new ending to the chapter... Wow, that was actually kind of touching, Fluttershy's little sentiment with using sundaes to cope with the old Sunset, how they probably found new foundation when Aria showed up. I wish to redouble my See Where This Goes statement. :pinkiesmile:

6356247
That's why I didn't pass up the fic, thanks for clarifying.

Why would Adagi hang out with Trixie?

6356701 That was a shout-out to Justice4243's The Dazzlings Are Insane. :moustache:

6356898
Hmm okay. Trixie just doesn't have that "control" behavior, unlike Adagio or old Sunset. And honestly, she was rather dumb in Rainbow Rocks. So only way I see Adagio being around Trixie - only to use her for something.

6356922 As it says in-story, it's a narcissism-based friendship.

6356938 Not sure what exactly it means, but Adagio should think about Trixie as someone pathetic. Seriously, you are an illusionist in a school that has real magic. On my scale of miserability that will be "pretty pathetic", and I'm sure on Adagio's too.

6356994 :facehoof:

nar·cis·sism
ˈnärsəˌsizəm/
noun
noun: narcissism

excessive or erotic interest in oneself and one's physical appearance.
synonyms: vanity, self-love, self-admiration, self-absorption, self-obsession, conceit, self-centeredness, self-regard, egotism, egoism
"his emotional development was hindered by his mother's narcissism"

Adagio is narcissistic. Trixie is narcissistic. The joke is they have this in common and bonded over it.

6357002
No, I undertand what termin means. But they are narcissistics for different reasons. Trixie think that she is better than others because thinks that she is better and talented than everyone else, which is not true. Adagio thinks she is better because she is smarter than most people and could manipulate them, which is, well, rather true. Trixie's level is somewhere around Aria's, and I don't see why would Adagio should be interested in her. In that way, I rather see Adagio hang out with Sunset, despite hating her :|

alright, that was pretty friggin' hysterical. Fluttershy's dad really pushed it over the top. :rainbowlaugh:

I'm glad you acknowledged Sunset's equally-illegitimate situation, and brusquely cast it aside - more room for fun! I absolute loved that scene, and burst out laughing at least twice. That Adagio saw it coming was literally breathtaking.

"JAIL! JAIL! I WANT JAIL!" Adagio screamed, shooting out of her chair. "LOVELY, STONE-WALLED, LOCKED-CELLS, COCKROACHES-ON-THE-FOOD JAIL!"

Then Sonata... "Everyone, even Pinkie Pie, edged away from Sonata."

6357028 Could wanting to see Adagio hang out with Sunset be because you ship them together ultra hard? :trollestia:

...So who's the judge supposed to be?

6358121 Judge Mint. :trollestia:

No, the judge is nobody. She's a blank character. There for one scene, we'll never see her again.

OH MY GOD, the revenge is too sweet...or spicy as it were :rainbowlaugh:

But something tells me this isn't going to work out in Flutter's favor so quickly. Though I wonder if she'll ever bust out...The Stare :twilightoops:

So yeah, already loving this. I'm hooked.

Oh also, I really love the baseball bat thing with Sonata. Just so matter-of-fact about it. Though I guess the context being they were immortal and supernatural at the time? Not sure I'd advocate that now :derpytongue2:

6357885 I admit, you raise a good point. I thought about it after I left the house for a bit and have to agree. I'd expect Adagio to want to hang out with someone like Trixie because Trixie herself is so prone to antagonistic behavior toward the Rainbooms (but looking in from the Rainbooms' perspective, their shared narcissism is a good-enough write-off reason).

I read the beginning and died laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

Nice job...

6357028

Really? Adaggio seems pretty pathetic in convincing people without her jewel.

6361612 We've never seen her convice people without her jewel, therefore we don't know how good she is without it. She seemed to at least be capable of getting Aria and Sonata to co-operate, most of the time.

Yeah season 5 fluttershy:pinkiehappy:

6361612
Have you seen her doing it without gem? Where? Sunset doesn't count obviliosly, because she is just as smart\strong as Adagio.

So, if Fluttershy didn't shave, would her legs turn pink, or just a more fuzzy yellow? Given the weirdness of technicolor humanoid biology, either possibility seems likely.

In either case, quite enjoyable thus far. Fluttershy's passive aggression should make this incredibly enjoyable to watch. Also, descriptions of Fluttershy's parents would be nice.

Ok, the sundae thing was amazing. Maybe a tad bold for Fluttershy, but I'm not complaining!

Some of it is a tad crude for my tastes, but I saw the tags, and read anyway, so it's fair enough.

Overall, a story I'll be keeping tabs on for sure!

6358899

OH MY GOD, the revenge is too sweet...or spicy as it were :rainbowlaugh:

sour?

Oh god.......
I wonder what Aria did to the chef.....:rainbowderp:

Did she blow up the restaurant? I hope she did.

6370294 The chef was Suri.
Whatever she did, I'm sure she deserved it.
I just hope Coco got out in time.

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