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Mirai-chan


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After the events of the Battle of the Bands, Adagio and Sonata have gotten over their loss of power and are building lives for themselves. Aria however, hasn't accepted the failure. When she is cast out by the other Sirens, she finds herself living with Fluttershy.

A fic exchange thing with MythrilMoth

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 63 )

Wow, I loved it!!!!:rainbowkiss:

Tracking. Needs some improvement with punctuation and stuff, but I don't have time for a full scan right now.

You've got me hooked, looking forward to the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Also jeez, how long did it take you to crank this out? It feels like the blog post over at Myth's was just such a short time ago. I feel like you did this really fast XD

I like it though! Also, I thought it'd be funny if instead of "Power Hungry" at that part, she just said "Hungry", and it just prompted Aria's stomach to gurgle :derpytongue2:
I'm just being silly, so don't mind me. :twilightsheepish:

See you next chapter! *watchlist'd*

6351101 Thanks for reading! I appreciate it.

6351132 :rainbowlaugh: I don't know how I did it, just watched the video and boom! Inspiration! So I just spent the next couple hours writing, asked my friend to take a look and submitted it. It seems to be going down well. I was worried it might be boring and dragged out, but it felt necessary. Thanks for reading.

6351159

Thanks for reading.

Thanks for writing :twilightsmile:

So, you feel inspired enough to make this more than a one-shot? Or is the incomplete mark just there to tease me? :ajsmug: :derpytongue2:

6351290 Don't worry, I'm planning to write more soon. I don't know how long this is going to be, how many characters will be in it etc

6351376

Don't worry, I'm planning to write more soon.

:yay: Can't wait, and I can help you figure out the rest if you need me to. See below :derpytongue2:

I don't know how long this is going to be,

37 chapters, 2 sequels (one of which is actually a prequel), and a spinoff :raritywink:

how many characters will be in it

All of them :rainbowwild:

Hopefully this helps :scootangel::rainbowlaugh:

This should be interesting, cant wait to read.

6353671 I take it you enjoyed my story?

That happened a little abruptly, but it's a good setup.

Hmm... A lone siren story in which Sonata isn't the one thrown out, it isn't purely on account of the other two being complete tools, and the first character she meets is actually the most likely to do exactly what she did here?

I'm intrigued. :moustache:

Why do I get the feeling this is exactly what Adagio and Sonata were hoping would happen? Was an encounter like this what helped them change, or were they just fed up with her perpetual sourness and refusal to move on? I am intrigued further!

Ahem.

If you remember the voice of the episode re-cap guy from Legend of Korra, now's the time.

Will Aria succeed in her efforts at freeloading?!
Will Fluttershy wise up to these dastardly plans before her kindness starts working against her?!
Will meeting Angel Bunny* be a problem for the laziest Dazzling?!

Find out** in the next exciting episode of, "My Roommate, the Evil Siren!!"

*I'm guessing this world's Butterfly Girl has a bunny too. Maybe not?
**Or not.

6354200 It was a little rushed, but I'd really like to get the set-up out of the way. I may re-do it later.

6354231
6354275 I'm glad you're enjoying it. :yay:

Loved the new chapter! Love how Fluttershy silenced the animals. Now it makes me wonder how Aria would handle ' The Stare '

6354275 also love this :derpytongue2:

I'm loving this!!! Maybe the pacing shouldn't be so fast with the relationship, like... Aria's a loner in Flutter's house, until Fluttershy's little acts of kindness cause her to open up a bit? :twilightsmile:

Update? Pretty please?:applecry:

Fluttershy stifled another laugh.
"Nice?"
Aria visibly tried to maintain a neutral expression.
"It's okay."

I wonder how many of her animal friends (if any) Fluttershy has tamed with food? It's certainly worth a shot with Aria.

Aaaaand yes, Aria and Angel Bunny; not Super Best Pals. That's sure to end well. :twilightsheepish:

"I'm super-duper happy! I can't believe they would let work for them!"

Should be "let me work for them!"

The source of the voice had a concerned look on on her face.

Only needs one "on".

*rolls around* THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME

"You may be able to get away with this under her watch, but I'm pulling punches now, and you. Answer. To. Me!"

Bit of a mixed metaphor there. "Pulling your punches" means holding back and softening the blow. Which I'm pretty sure is not what you meant to say.

Also, that whole scene needed a bit more...anything. There's no description of what's going on. You don't show the reader ANYTHING that was happening. So it doesn't really have any impact.

6369127 That's not what I meant to say, I'll try to improve the wording. Any advice as to how to expand on that scene? Setting, appearance etc? Thanks for the honest feedback too.

6369278 Just needs some action. WHAT are the animals doing that's annoying her? What's the scene Fluttershy walked in on? Things like that.

I'm liking this so far, it has a lot of potential.

6436700 *scoots over* No problem, just bring some popcorn.

6369278 wheres mah fanfic fix author

Establishing the setting tends to make things a bit awkwards, EQG having to reintroduce the Humane 5 and the world of Canterlot High suffered from this to a degree. Granted, I'm not saying if not for that it'd be flawless, far from it, however, it may have helped. Just thinking out loud.

6541078 I'm not sure what you mean, do you mind explaining?

6541192 Okay. I hope you're not disappointed.

6541266 O-kay...? Pretty sure that's a compliment.

6541268

It is. I'm just eager to see where this goes if only for more shenanigans.

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