Aria Blaze, a new student of CHS was having troubles on the first day because it's the first time in her life that she will not be with her friends from Everton University. She had bumped into someone by accident and help the person to gather their things, their hands touched in the middle as both of them were about to grab the paper. The person she had bumped to is one of the popular girls in the school, Fluttershy. Aria learned that Fluttershy is the captain of the volleyball team (inspired by one of the scenes in do it for the ponygram) She decided to become a cheerleader so that she could show her support to her crush.
Special thanks to my buddy DavisSentoV5 for collaborating with me so that we can bring this story to FIMfiction!
Chapters (20)
I have not read yet, but the concept is really interesting.
I’m so happy how the first chapter is turned out
I love when hard work pays off & Vinyl's debut turned out better than expected
Very fun and interesting so far, curious to see where it goes and eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Needs a bit of editing but overall I like it
I swear, those two were made for each other! I don't know about you Artist, but in the future we got to a prequel focusing on Starlight and Trixie, because we brought out the emotion out for this one!
Sunset and Vinyl's official meeting was great and Aria's nosebleed gag, it's just gets funnier every time. I hope you enjoy the rest of your day and have a great birthday!
P.S. Artist, when you have the free time tomorrow, can you fix this small error here in bold?
that part right there should say "Vinyl"
First of all:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU, I HOPE YOU HAVE A NICE NEW YEAR OF LIFE!
Second of all:
You should probably decide on one time form for your writing, it would help the grammar a lot.
Third of all:
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AM I SENSING A SUNSETxVINYL SHIPPING IN HERE?! (Unusual and interesting, I like it
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Sorry Krieg, but Artist & I already have someone else in mind for Sunset down the road.
Also, most of the grammar errors are my fault, due to me not double checking for mistakes, before sent Artist a rough draft of my ideas/suggestions.
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Awwwww
Welp let’s see who it is
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It's going to be awhile before we reveal who Sunset will be paired up with, we hope that you stick around to find out. Thanks for reading and commenting
This is (so far) our longest chapter yet and it came out better than expected! Hard work really does pay off.
Oooooh dear...
Hopefully Fleur doesn’t try any real bad shit or things will become ugly fast
Although I don't like that Aria passed the final trial with ease, everything else was just absolutely perfect! I love how you set up Fleur & Fluttershy's new rivalry for Aria! Once again, our hard work pays off!
Hey Artist, while I was rereading this, I found another major error that I forgot the fix before I sent it to you
Those two words in bold should be replaced with "as she gave" if you have the free time today or tomorrow, could you fix that? Sorry I forgot to double check for grammar errors
Dang what a way to end a cliffhanger! So Aria save the girl who is supposedly trying to cheat on Sunset. The next chapter is going to be very interesting...
P.S. I found another small error
The words in bold should be replaced with Aria
I hope she ends up with Fluttershy. Fleur seems a bit like an entitled brat in how she basically thought of Aria as her girlfriend before even really talking to her. Aria deserves someone who will treat her nice and that's definitely Fluttershy.
Hey buddy this paragraph is in the wrong spot
this should not be the last paragraph at the end of this chapter
There we go, that's better now I could say what I wanted to say earlier. The emotion and tension between Aria and Twilight was intense. Thankfully, a trip to her favorite burger joint was what the doctor ordered.
I'm seeing a number of red flags that read "Celestia is a controlling my beloved smother".
I love how everything turned out well, despite a few grammar errors due to my part but I digress. I hope everyone reading this enjoyed! Artistkun and I put a lot of effort into the magic show scene & we hope we delivered!
P.S. Artist I found two small errors for some fixing
"Basically" needs to be "especially"
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"now" needs to be "not"
Well, you know what they say. Love makes you blind
They also say:“ All is fair in love and war.“ soooo...
Kinda worried how much the competition between Fleur and Fluttershy will escalate.
(Also, I highly suspect their reaction towards Aria’s bunny outfit included atleast a little bit of nosebleed
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Wait, what happened to the most recent chapter?
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It's getting a bit of rework.
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*Sigh of relief* Don't do that, man. I had the chapter open on one of my tabs that randomly had to reload. Damn near had a heart attack when I saw the 404 message, 'cause I thought the entire fic was gone.
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I'm sorry but the chapter felt incomplete. I take full responsibility for that and for your mini heart attack. I promised it'll be back up with some new improvements and edits
I hope everyone enjoys this rework of chapter 11 and I deeply apologize for any one freaking out that the old one was gone. I take full responsibility for that. I hope that extra Sunpie moment at the end, made the wait, extra special.
Poor Aria, what else are we gonna throw at her?
Nah, you already know her very well.
Hey Artist, Once again I found another error due to my mistake. The word thats in bold Needs to be replace with the word “noticed”
What was supposed to be a great day for Aria, has sadly ended with drama and violence
Oh the drama
Do you know the Anime Overlord? Because Fleur‘s and Fluttershy‘s rivalry reminds me of two characters from that, named Albedo and Shalltear.
For context, they are always ready to tear each other apart.
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A little bit, I've seen a few clips of it
It's been a while since we've done a chapter that has more than one part, so everyone be ready for the part 2 down the road!
Huh this is interesting. The Aria vs Siren felt like a climax moment especially since not everyone knows of Arias past minus Timber and her family oh and also the fact that Aria almost died I presume. I take it there's more conflicting drama than the one Aria just went through.
Wonder what the next part will be like with the confrontation of Timber and Aria along with more of our learning of Arias past and her other buddies known as Sonata and Adagio.
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We appreciate you took the time to read and comment on this chapter and to answer your assumption about Aria almost dying, it was due to the complex she was having with her other self.
Remember in the last chapter it was revealed that she only had minor bruises to the ribs. So everything was actually going fine, it was just that her siren cause the big enough mental issue with her health to cause the heart attack to happen.
As for the next chapter, Artistkun and I hope to do a good job with Timber trying to apologize to Aria as they try to bring this whole incident behind them. The two of us aren't too sure yet and how the conversation would go, so I can't promise you will reveal too much of Aria's past. Something like that might be safe for a future chapter down the road.
Thanks again for reading, Shadow and have a nice day
I hope everyone enjoy Aria finding closure with Timber as well as another appearance from Sonata & Adagio
We just turned up the drama level all the way up to 11, folks!
P.S. I found a error
The word of bold needs to replace with "to"
Another cliffhanger for you, guys! I hope enjoyed the chapter & we'll see ya in 2020!
To everyone reading this, we hope you enjoy this short chapter and we apologize for the long wait. Along with writer's block, a lot of things got in me & Artistkun's way ever since 2020 started.
Hopefully, with this, we'll be able to be stronger than ever. I hope everyone has a great day.
I've missed this story's energy.
I hope this was worth the wait everyone & apologies for any errors
I hope everyone enjoyed this chapter & are staying safe with everything going on in the world!
What's happening with this fic?
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Artist moved on to Owl House