The mane 7 were having a fun summer vacation in the beach. Sunset Shimmer was happy that she had come so far. She was admiring the view, until she saw something shiny from afar and decided to see what it was. She stops on her tracks when she had finally found what she was looking for and picks it up to see it was just a mirror, she examines it and saw a cracked lapis lazuli gem behind the mirror. Sunset decided to keep it because it was rare for her to see, what she didn't know, is that someone is trapped and needed to be free.
Chapters (10)
Question, if this is a crossover, do the other gems exist or is this just Lapis?
You have some tense issues going on here.
It's fairly prevalent in the whole chapter.
Carduus Krodolf: “You have gained my interest.”
Sorentis: “Please continue at a steady pace!”
Carduus Krodolf: “did I just say not to interrupt sister?”
Sorentis: “sorry brother.”
So far, so good. You did a good job. I'll keep my eye on this one.
This is gonna be fun to read
Favorite it the second I saw this show ^^ this is gonna be interesting, I can tell ^^
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Well as for now, Lapis only exist
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Alright. Just checking. Also, I think I see where the drama will come from: Lapis, or Twilight.
Yeah. Sunset your in trouble.😂
So is this before or after the memory Stone?
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after
Wow, who knew there was a so much information about the Lapis gems, and that history is just based on their normal ones in real life
So...why is Sunset going crazy about the mirror? Was the mirror supposed to do that, or...?
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Fixing the mirror is making her crazy
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But why is fixing it making her crazy? Is it just because Lapis is cracked? Or is there some sort of magical spell on the mirror or something?
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first option
Finally! Lapis has made her physical debut! Is it weird that I find a more amazing that Sunset was losing her mind better than Steven? Anyways, fantastic chapter and I can't wait to see how much more conflict Sunset will have with her friends
interesting story so far but the characters feel kind of OoC
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You mead odd?
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OoC means out of character
as in sunset is obsessing way to much over bob :P(lapis)
and the others just up and assuming she is bad is also out of character
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Well, I studied the first appearance of lapis and decided to mix it with the Eg universe
this can only end in good
Damn I didn't expect to see Sunset lose control like that, especially with those new powers of hers. This relationship is going to get more and more interesting
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Especially equestrian magic.
As this is a new power she didn't have be for, and thous no practice in controlling it.
She is susceptible to her magic taking control in fits of high emotion.
At this point it would be obvious that some form of magic would be kneaded to help.
Magic is often linked to ones emotions.
Speaking of equestria, when will sunset think of asking princes twilight for help in repairing lapis's gem?
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Whoa! You actually figured out what my intentions with the lightning power of Sunset!
I can't spoil anything though. Let's just say that it's going to be a surprise!
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So basically, she's a sith?
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Can't spoil anything
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Fine
another great chapter i loved it
Oh my God, those two are just so adorable!
It's good she tried sleeping.
It helps to rest and refresh the mind,
dreams are a way for people to work through some of the things that trouble them in life as well.
another good chapter keep up the good work
Stop making them so adorable, it's killing me!
Will any other Steven Universe characters appear?
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We'll see
SciTwi stay away from the green eyed beast it leads to nothing but trouble!
The romance was in the air, but Lapis was a salty girl to Twilight! Worth the wat!
i thought they where gona fuse there for a second
I was shipping them before I read this fanfic. Now you make my ship come true. I love this. I can't wait for next chapter.
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I swear to god if Sunset is a Sith, that’ll make my freaking day.
What the heck pearl!?
OK, Pearl, that was uncalled for. Really, really uncalled for.
Yep, that's exactly what Pearl would do
Well worth the wait, I love that it took a major rant from Lapis to convince Pearl to leave them alone
That chapter hurt my feelings. Why Lapis don't want to stay with Sunset. I love this ship, well that not a solid argument but still.
i cant see pearl killing any one
What a horrible nightmare.... Unless it was a vision
Some grammar needs to be fixed
But overall its a good idea and i look foward to read more
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Yes. That face
A brilliant conversationalist i see
NOOOOOO!! YOU SHALL NOT INTERRUPT MY NEW SHIP
Doesn't she need to touch people to hear their thoughts?
Also, cool info there
Always good to know more about best gem
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Like... some sort of OCD?
*insert papyrus-like laughter*
-ahem-
I mean... Meh, kinda cute
If you're having difficulty with English, I'd recommend you get a beta reader or grammarly (tho i dont know if it works on PCs, i only have it on mobile)