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Ocerra


I'm a huge fan of My Little Pony, and an amateur writer. I sincerely hope you enjoy my work.


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When Sunset Shimmer brings the element of magic into another world, and introduces magic into the main six, she gathers the attention of a secret world of magic of which she hadn't known of, sending them all down a path that none of them could have foreseen.

Now the girls are being sent to school, to learn about their new magic, and their newly expanded world. No one knows for sure what the consequences of these newcomers to the magical world will be, but there is someone who may.


This is a Harry Potter / Equestria Girls crossover story.

The story's setting begins at the end of the first Equestria Girl's movie, taking a different direction from subsequent movies.

A basic understanding of My Little Pony and Harry Potter may make the story easier to follow or enjoy, but should be accessible regardless.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 189 )

"Oh my gosh, we're going to have so much FUN!" Pinkie shrieked happily, clinging onto the poor woman's arm. "Do they have joke shops?!" She gasped loudly as a new idea occurred to her, "MAAAGIC joke shops?! Candy? Magical candy?! EXPLOSIVE HATS!" Pinkie rambled excitedly of all the things she wanted to shop for, leaving McGonagall staring at Dumbledore with wide eyes as he walked calmly out of the room.

:rainbowlaugh: Oh, she's going to drive that poor woman crazy.

Dumbledore's reaction to Celestia's powers is really amusing. I Will Be watching it all through it of course. You've also nailed Dumbledore really well so that is a great thing. The intro is strong enough to show Sunset's corruption and the eventual repair that she will go through. I'm sure Hogwarts will get rocked on it's socks.

I don't know if you remember it but during the first movie, one of the girls mentioned Sunsets last rival being decimated at the last dance (or something like that). After the main 6 beat a little sense into poor little Sunset, Rarity specifically states that she is still waiting for an apology for the spring fling (I think that was the name of it). I don't mean to push it but Rarity has always seemed to be extremely nice to Sunset in the movies.

I can't wait until they all get to Hogwarts!

Knowing where each of the six are going and who else is going to join them is an interesting experience. I don't think I've ever really had insider information before, but I do definitely like it. I can always help pop idea's up whenever I'm around.

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She's a champ. I'm sure she's handled an equally difficult student... or two. :raritywink:

And the wands will be waiting for a little later. Rainbow why'd you go and blow up half the store? Oh well, I'm sure they can make the store better again fairly easily. The Harry Potter world is very simple... When there is a problem, blame magic. When the problem is solved, Hail Magic!

Did she just sonic rain boom with her wand...?XD

Loving this story.only problem I see is the lack of the American ministry....then again,havnt checked the date of this story so it may predate Fantastic Beasts.

Wonder if sunset will need one of her own hairs...?o.o for the wand.

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This story doesn't predate Fantastic Beasts, and before the movie it was still known about the American Ministry. Unfortunately, there is a lot of plot occurring behind the scenes, some of which may be covered later. Regardless, Dumbledore fought for their custody; his motives are unclear.

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I find it unlikely that a wand maker, such as Ollivander, would craft a new wand for a customer rather than match them with one of their fine, ready to use, wands. Unless of course, it is specifically requested of them. I do love the thought though. :pinkiehappy:

Who wouldn't want a wand with a core of their own essence. That sounds amazing! :rainbowderp:

This is really good so far can't wait to read more:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for the feedback. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it so far. :twilightsmile:

"She smells nice"... Oh come on now you are just teasing me aren't you? Teasing my shipping sense.

Anyway great chapter here, and much more Sunset monologue. It is the best type of monologue.

I do like seeing Sunset's inner thoughts and turmoil.
Also Sunset tears are the best tears.

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Sunset can't help how she feels. :raritywink:

I'm officially intrigued. Great job. Can't wait for more

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Thank you for the suggestion. The story is already featured in Harry Potter Crossovers. :pinkiehappy:

As for the other two groups, I'm unfortunately new to the site, and I'm unsure if I can add the story to those groups. If I can, I can't find the way to add them. Otherwise, I'm assuming that there must be a category for me to put the story in before I'm able to. :pinkiesad2:

8092901 Ask them to help or do it for you.

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I would consider doing so. However, each group is incredibly small and have been inactive for at least half a year. For now, I think I'll cut my losses with having the story featured on the largest and most active of the Harry Potter groups on the site. :twilightsmile:

Phoenix feather core, huh? Seems thematicly matching. Oh, I can only dream what Dumbledore's face looked like when Sunset teleported. I am pretty sure he wasn't expecting that, despite Sunset's world of origin.

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I tried my best to make each wand fit their owner, especially when it came to choice of wood. When it came to Sunset's wand's core, it was an internal debate between a unicorn hair or a phoenix feather core. You can see the result of that debate yourself. :twilightsheepish:

As for Dumbledore, even after witnessing a Pony in another dimension relocate a celestial body, I suppose it doesn't diminish the shock value of more mundane feats. :rainbowlaugh:

To be able to shock Dumbledore out of his normal Poker mask, Kudos to you girl!

This is going to be awesome and things will be funny especially with Sunset already knowing alot about magic.

Ok, this is one very good crossover with HP. :twilightsmile: Have a thumbs up. I wonder what the families and friends of the girls think about this change of school.

I vote for discovering their wands over the course of the story. :raritywink:

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Thank you so much for the high praise. :raritystarry:

The story actually began as a joke between a friend and myself. The joke eventually grew a little out of control, and I started realizing just how much it was plausible and believable to tie the worlds together. I've never once thought about dedicating myself to an art form like writing until this idea presented itself to me, even so I decided I would take a crack at making it a reality. So far I'm very happy with how it's been received. I have so many ideas and fun moments swimming around in my head that I'm trying to work toward, but we all have a long journey ahead of us until those moments. :ajsmug:

I'll make sure to include their family and friends into the story when they have an opportunity to become relevant.

To be fair, apparition is a lot less useful than teleportation...

Teleportation uses multiple quadrants for the calculations to translocate from one point to another instantly literally swapping the matter. Imagine the flash is everything should inking inward toward a single point, and the other teleport flash is arrival,unshrinking from a different point...the points simply being two atoms that were swapped.this is how teleportation works without fusing into someone or something. The quadrant spheres are the coordinates used however.4 quadrants....your 2 basic coordinates,your elevation coordinate,and a final one accounting for the universe's constant expansion.(movement of the earth is part of the last one)

Where apparition is just making a small tunnel between two locations then squeezing through it...literally a person apparating could pancake against an airplane window passing through the tubes path at JUST the right second.XD

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Whoa, what a thorough explanation. :rainbowderp:

Took me a few read throughs of your description, but I understand the concept. I'll have to make a few edits to keep things accurate to my intentions. Thank you. :pinkiesad2:

8095272 the complication of teleportation is why you don't see every unicorn just spamming it... Twilight ,Sunset,and Starlight are the only unicorns I've really seen use teleportation, and two were celestial students,the third was a unicorn that was capable of fighting ALICORN twilight evenly. Oh,and Sombra.

For these level of unicorn...or any alicorn,the spell is difficult maybe the first time but then it just becomes instinctual after a few uses once a feel for it is gained.Twilight obviously had a good handle on it her first time using it...she played chicken and teleported past Nightmare.

Also...I'd say magical energy spent equals distance...when Twilight had ALL the alicorn magic,she was severely overshooting her targets before the Tirek battle.During the battle she had better control of her teleports but I think it's because she drained a good portion of magic with that first KAMEHAMEHA worthy beam...

The magic also seems to effect the flash of teleportation...in lesson Zero ,Celestia showed up in a blinding flash.then again...she may have just been peeved and venting her anger.

:twilightsmile:

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If I remember correctly apart from splinching it's also possible to apparate yourself inside out.

This is only the second HP crossover I've read, definitely going to be looking for a couple more to tide me over till the next chapter.

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I'm very happy to have caught your attention. :pinkiehappy:

I tend to fall into a schedule where I release a chapter every two to three days. It's not that I 'have' a schedule really. That's just how long it takes before I feel satisfied with the amount and quality of what I have written.

8096274 considering the other one I read hasn't updated in about three years that's more than great. This one's even a better plot too (that Rarity moment was sweet) so I'm looking forward to where you take it.

but the mirror delivered it's promise in the end
but you cannot wield it's power

1. Its.
2. Its.

Tomorrow, we're preparing you and your friends for school?

1. Better meant to be as a fullstop.

He returned the wand to it's casing

1. Its.

before having a new one take it's place

1. Its.

and suddenly i can't wait for school to start

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You and I both. I'm trying not to rush the pacing too much in my excitement to get to the juicy bits. It's a tough battle. :ajsmug:

I don't know if you can maintain this pace, but it's a so!id start. I look forward to reading more.

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I'm just worried at times that it's a little slow. I know people are here for Hogwarts. :derpytongue2:

I'm very happy you're liking it so far. :scootangel:

That seems like a nod to legend of everfree This is really piqued my curiosity

8097091 Oh no, Diagon alley is a huge part of the experience too. Especially when it's new witches and wizards. That sense of awe on the first time is always great. Even Harry Potter fans get to enjoy the wonder through a newbie's eyes. It's sort of like how Doctor Who loves that moment when they say it's bigger on the inside.
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) just realized how that sounds when you say it like that.

On another note I am both glad and disappointed you didn't give Sunset a phoenix yet. Glad because deep down I know it would be bad writing to jump that shark so soon, feels like it'll be better off happening sometime during the year. And disappointed because on the surface Sunset with cute pet can only end in dawwws.

Sudden Applejack is best Applejack.

You are doing great with the story so far. Continue upward and onward and so forth and forsooth!

Anyway, kinda glad we got to see the others in this chapter. Rarity might be my favorite pony but seeing everyone is still a great thing.
Seems McGonagall is planning some revenge jokes against Dumbledore, hope we get to see at least some of them.

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She has a loooooong way to go before we're even going to consider a phoenix pet. :rainbowderp:

Phoenixes are extremely rare creatures in the first place, and only two have ever been known to be domesticated in the Harry Potter universe. Luckily there are a few phoenixes around and handy already without introducing an unplausable scenario like Sunset somehow domesticating a phoenix.

Thinking back on it though, it's funny how I never thought about the fact that both Dumbledore 'and' Celestia have a phoenix for a pet... just how perfect does this match have to get? :rainbowkiss:

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You'd be shocked at the sort of friendly antics the teachers of Hogwarts are up to with each other. :pinkiecrazy:

It may not show it much at times, but they are all very close with one another.

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