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TalkingToMyself


Newbie writer and fanfiction enthusiast, brony since 2016 (always late to the party ;D)

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Two worlds, similar but different at the same time, move closer and closer together. But every action has consequences. So what happens when the balance between the human world and Equestria is suddenly disturbed? Can humans and ponies withstand the consequences?

Sunset Shimmer finds herself lost between both worlds. Can she withstand not only her own past, but also the future ahead?

I'm a first time writer, so I'd love some feedback on comments!

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 11 )

Do evil versions of the mane six appear? If so, then when and where?

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Cool idea, haven't even thought about this yet.
So far it's not planed, but this would be a great setup for a sequel.

Awww Flurry wants to spend time with Auntie Woona.

OK Flurry was really cute in this chapter

There's been a lot of ponies learning friendship lessons over and over (sometimes too many, we can only be warmed by Sunset realising Celestia cares so many times), but not a lot of world fusion the summary advertises. While I always enjoy a good friendship lesson, isn't twelve chapters time for a long overdue return to the main plot?

Great chapter! Excited to read more!

You deserve more attention. Your story’s great!

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