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Ayla


A friend is someone who knows all about you and still loves you. - Elbert Hubbard

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When Luna finds a new prophecy from Starswirl, she and Celestia think it may have already happened, so they forget about it. They were wrong.

When they discover a comet is heading for Equestria and will cause all kinds of damage, they do their best to find a good solution, but when they can't, only an act of love will truly save them all.

Cover art by norang94 will take down if asked.

https://norang94.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-and-Luna-427487129

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 32 )

Very nice.

I am confused about why this is still marked as 'incomplete', for this chapter seems to be for a one shot.
But none the less, I shall await what will be.

It's so sad:raritycry:
But so beautiful.

It is labeled incomplete! The is more!? But it a perfect one shot!

"This is enough to make a grown man cry, and that's okay." - Earl Devereaux
THE FEELS!!!

A tip: you should to work on showing instead of telling.

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There's a lot of telling because much of this is what someone is thinking. People don't always think things out in every detail when thinking of something or remembering something.

Some chapters will have more showing than others.

YAY THIS IS BACK!!!!

MORE PLEASE

THIS IS AWSOME

Nightmare Night was the last day before the comet hit, and Luna came to her with a hopeful expression, wearing her costume. "Celestia, please can we not go to Ponyville?"

I think that you should remove the negative in Luna's statement.

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Luna often has an old fashioned way of speaking. Can I not, can we not, etc. Is often in such speech.

Are there going to be any additional chapters?

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Yes, things in my life have been a bit chaotic lately, but I'll be finding the time to work on this story.

Comment posted by Jphyper deleted Nov 20th, 2017

Why not contact norang94 and ask her for permission?

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Artist's are not always easy to reach, and I have seen plenty of other author's on this site do the exact same thing. I never take credit for someone else's work, and I always leave a link to the original work. If you want to contact the artist and show her this story and if she doesn't want me to use her work, I will gladly take it down immediately.

OW MY FEEEEELS! WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS!?!?

I love this story and it was under appreciated so i added it to a bunch of groups.

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Update and ending. I hope you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

This was awesome, great work and all that snaz.

That was a rather bittersweet but cathartic ending. Great work in this, dearest author <3

This story is so beautiful, I was moved. 💙😭

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normally i agree, but this works.

how dare you make me cry several times!!! as punishment, im adding this to my favorites! see if that sets you straight!

i came here after about 3 other depressing stories an i have lost all my tears

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