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TalkingToMyself


Newbie writer and fanfiction enthusiast, brony since 2016 (always late to the party ;D)

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This story is a sequel to Crystal Note III What used to be home


After vanishing from a curse for more than 1000 years, little is known about the Crystal Empire and its inhabitants. Especially the final years of King Sombra's rule remain shrouded by mystery. Even to the crystal ponies themselves as their memories remain effected by the tyrant King's dark magic.


Now the Crystal Empire has returned and King Sombra has been defeated, but the aftermaths of his cruelty still linger within his former subjects.

One crystal pony begins travelling through Equestria to learn about her past and finds friends along the way. Will revealing her past help her understand more of herself and find a place in this new future?


During her visit to the Crystal Empire, Crystal Note not only revealed herself to the other crystal ponies but also faced the judgment of the crystal heart itself. While this helped unlock her burried memories, it also left her more in doubt of her true identy than ever.
When she returns to Ponyville to recover from what happened at the Crystal Empire, she is offered help from an unexpected source.

A lot of thanks to EchoWing and Peppermint frost for prereading and helping.


Welcome to the so far longest part of this project! More sequels are in the making.

This story is a sequel to Crystal Note - Welcome to Sweet Apple Acres! ,
Crystal Note II Memories and Magic
and What used to be home

Hope you enjoy reading and any feedback and suggestions are more than welcome!

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 10 )

sorrowful regretful MEMORY COMES AT A COST :derpyderp1:

8551083
:twilightsheepish: who wouldnt? its a good song. :)

If I was there, I would have KILLED her father!:twilightangry2:
Doesn't he know, Earth ponies are more powerful? Yep, that's right.
Hit em in the face Pinkie Pie!
(Saying this and my OC is a unicorn):rainbowlaugh:

8552933
Such violence :applejackunsure:

Let's hope for an happy end :raritywink:

Definitely one of my favourites!

And the story that goes with it is awesome too!

The lie was obvious but in the end, their gnawing hunger won and they split the food between themselves. The sick stallion made sure his daughter would get the better share of what was left. Luna remember what Cadance had told her in her letter and realized that it wouldn’t be long before the two sister would be confronted with the loss of a loved one once more.

The father didn't die, did he?

'Sister' should be 'sisters', by the way:twilightsheepish:

So I take it Crystal Note is the pony in your avatar?

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Nope. Just a crystal pony with the Crystal Empire flag. I thought it was cute :twilightsmile:

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