• Member Since 17th Jan, 2012
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GoesKaboom


Cosmetics saleswoman/makeup artist by day, fanfiction writer by night.

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Ascension to Alicornhood. For thousands of years it had been thought impossible. How was it that the unicorn mare would have been able to achieve something that had never been done before? Princess Luna knows, and she will do anything to keep the knowledge from getting out.

This is the story of an alicorn, an insane unicorn king and his allies, and a unicorn filly. This is also the story of the world's newest alicorn, and how she is connected to it all.

Please note that this story does contain some mature themes, although nothing that I feel warrants a mature rating. Let me know if you have concerns, however.

Cover art by TheWolfPack15, originally found on Ponychan. If the artist wants me to remove it, please let me know.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 36 )

Interesting premise-- I could see that being possible, yeah! :twilightblush:

Ok, now I have three competing headcanons. This is one of them. In another, Discord sparks Luna's fall to darkness. In the third, Sombra, just before he was defeated by the princesses, throws a final insult at Luna, which causes her to realize that the night was unapreciated.

In short. you get :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it enough to make it one of your headcanons. That's one of the nicest compliments anyone's ever given my writing. :heart:

Honestly, the idea of Twilight being the descendent of King Sombra has been lurking around my mind since the season premier. She used his spells so easily that I started wondering, and the idea wouldn't leave me alone. While we didn't get to see too much of him, King Sombra seemed like he was a pretty powerful unicorn, and that his power would have passed down through his descendants, at least partially.

At first I had thought that the mother of Twilight's ancestor would have been a crystal pony, but then she became an alicorn, which, sure, might have been possible with magic, but it would make more sense if somewhere in her family tree, she had actually had an alicorn ancestor. That's where the idea for having Luna be the female ancestor came in.

Hopefully that makes sense, and wasn't too out-there of an idea.

2132437 I also have a headcanon where he is her great grandfather. In that particular headcanon, his pregnant unicorn wife got caught in the statis spell he cast on the Crystal Empire, but she got out early. Her daughter becomes Twilight's grandmother.

:pinkiehappy: Huzza for comparing Headcanons! :pinkiehappy:

(I am not interested in canons that fire heads out the barrel.)
(Sorry if that was a bad joke)

please continue this
in my opinion this is a interesting prolog/idea for an great story
...i´ll be watching you

I would like this to be more than a one-shot it would be really good!:pinkiehappy:

this was great where did you get lousy.

I would doubt that Celestia wouldn't know Twilight's blood line intimately.Heck I would expect she Knew Twilight Obsidian personally, possibly even being the one who got her out of the empire before Sombra was vanquished. Also i think Twilight could handle the idea she descend from Sombra, she's smart enough to realize what our ancestors did does not define us and Sombra needed to go down.

This is a nice idea. There needs to be a "sombra is an ancestor of twilight" story.

Duuuuude. THIS is... wow.

Nice job. You win my respect.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Thank you! Added to the description!

I find this interesting...
Please, continue.

I gotta say i was halfly expecting something I herd before, I cant say i was expecting this amazing job I gotta say I hope to hear more from you and I'll follow you jsut in case. I am realy impressed even with you nto trying i gotta say :twilightsmile: . (did i forget to say I was impressed! :twilightblush: )

I enjoy where you go with this personaly, I like the world your painting. :twilightsmile:

Exactly, what Rozen have said.

I personally am waiting to get to the part where Twilight finds out.

Buuut, I also am kinda interested in how this part is going.

Maybe if there was more Luna, and more plot advancement, I would like this prolougue-ish part better.

I personally am waiting to get to the part where Twilight finds out.

ditto
cant wait fotr the next part (this story deseves more attention)

I DOTH AGREE WITH THINE LAST STATEMENT!

Agreed.....:fluttercry: you scary people.


MAY A GENTLE BREEZE GUIDE YOUR PATH,AND A WARM SMILE TO LIGHT THINE HARTH! :flutterrage: .... sorry :fluttercry:

I can't wait till we see some Lunbra!

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It's coming up, I'm just in kind of an awkward position at the moment since I'm in the middle of filing a ton of paperwork for a two-month overseas trip, and my final exams are coming up. I have to write three papers (one in Japanese), and I don't have a ton of time to do... really, much of anything else. :derpytongue2:

This is a pretty good one so far. The way you write, it could turn out pretty good.

Now that I think I've finally gotten back into the groove, expect at least one more update by the end of November, and we'll go from there, I guess.

Yay:yay:

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

Pretty good overall. The constant references to diamond dogs (not) eating ponies were getting a little annoying by the end, and there were a few parts that weren't really necessary (ponies don't like diamond dogs. We get it), but it was still an enjoyable read.

Court is done for the day. Return to thine homes and have a restful slumber. I shall see everypony in the morn when we reconvene

I can't help but notice that she failed to mention that fact that THERE'S ANOTHER COURT to the petitioners.

Yeah, you've got to be really stupid to forget something like that, it'd be like a priest forgetting he's a Christian.

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