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TalkingToMyself


Newbie writer and fanfiction enthusiast, brony since 2016 (always late to the party ;D)

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This story is a sequel to Crystal Note IV Memory comes at a cost


This story is part of the Crystal Note AU that starts with Crystal Note - Welcome to Sweet Apple Acres!.
Although it's not necessary to read all the sequels to follow this story, there might be some names and details form previous stories along the way.


After vanishing from a curse for more than 1000 years, little is known about the Crystal Empire and its inhabitants. Especially the final years of King Sombra's rule remain shrouded by mystery. Even to the crystal ponies themselves as their memories remain effected by the tyrant King's dark magic.

Now the Crystal Empire has returned and King Sombra has been defeated, but the aftermaths of his cruelty still linger within his former subjects.

One crystal pony begins travelling through Equestria to learn about her past and finds friends along the way.


Crystal Note has regained her memories, but now feels more lost than ever. Unsure if she would be welcome in the Crystal Empire anymore, she follows her friends' advice to stay in Ponyville for now.

She soons finds out that she's not the only pony with a passion for music in town and makes some friends among the musicians of Ponyville. Can her new friends and her rekindled passion for music help her leave the terrors of her past behind?

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 21 )

Roadtrip to Canterlot! I wonder if Blueblood will play a leading role in the drama to come?.

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Drama to come, yes. Blueblood... not sure, to be honest. Maybe :twilightblush:

Great story so far.

Very sweet. I approve.

As always you know how to move a heart :heart:

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Thank you so much! :twilightsmile:
I'm glad you liked the story so far.

I can just imagine Cadence's reaction. She might even publicly flog them.


Edit/ps: that song was awful. She couldn't even make pain sound decent :applecry:

Crystal Note needs hugs. End of discussion.

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Agreed.

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Sometimes things just are not pretty.
To be honest, the song I used as a template is decent and I butchered it. It seemed more fitting like that.

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Yeah. This is one of those cases where bad writing (or rough writing?) looks better than good.
It just helps display the pain she feels.

“Go for it! Don’t hold back.” The pony blushed a little at first, but the she returned with a smile of her own and a nod. The turquoise eyes closed again and this time, her bow started dancing lively over the strings of her violin.

Not sure why, but when I read this, The Devil Went Down to Georgia started playing in my mind.

Indeed, welcome back. Of course, there's a few gaps that need a bit of filling in...

Glad to see you're still writing.

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Whenever I can :twilightsmile:
I just don't feel confident enough in my results to publish them.

I love all of the Crystal Note stories. Looking forward to reading more. Hope all is well with you. :twilightsmile:

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