Shortly after the Battle of the Bands, a new student arrives at Canterlot High School. Nobody knows her and she's not in a mood to make any friends. On any other school, she'd end up as a loner, but Canterlot High School isn't normal.
Of course, shenanigans are inevitable. Friendship, feelings and magic, whether she likes it or not.
Another EQG self-insert that starts right after "Rainbow Rocks" and moves forward from there. Since the events from the movies and mini-series won't all be included, I'm giving this the AU tag, just in case.
Tagged as "Teen" mostly because of foul language.
"Violence" and "Suicide" only happen in the later chapters, I will give a warning at the beginning of those.
This story is dedicated to a friend I haven't heard of in almost half a year now. I met her while I was in therapy for depression. She wasn't into MLP at all, but we bonded over music we both liked and I showed her some of the stuff I've written before. We even watched a few EQG videos and even if she wasn't ever "into" all this stuff, she felt pretty strongly when I showed her some Anon-A-Miss fics.
Turns out we both had out problems growing up and going to school.
We started talking, making up stories and I wrote some of them down. I made the suggestions to place them into the EGQ world, and Ocean Blues was born.
That was more than a year ago. We kept in touch, even after therapy, thanks to the internet, and we kept writing this "thing" together. Until, almost half a year ago, contact suddenly broke down. Her social media still exists, but there's no reaction. Her phone number won't connect any more. I have no idea what happened to her, and with all that corona and world wide crisis going on, it scares me. I know people sometimes just move on. I know people stop using their social media or change their phone numbers all the time. It still scares me.
So I've decided to publish this. It's not all finished and there will be gaps in the story line, although I've been trying to fill some of them on my own. This story was originally written in German, so the translation might sound weird at some points, please bear with me.
Maybe I will never finish this, but at least I want to post all I have from our work so far. To get it off my chest, and maybe so someone else might find it and get something out of it, even if it's just a chuckle.
Well I hope you find out she's OK soon. Please respond to this comment.
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Thanks. I really hope so too.
I hope you get in contact with your friend again, and continue this story. I hope things go well for ya chief.
In the description it says that this is another eqg self-insert, is there another? Also, I sorry, but ocean would be getting the hands if that was me.
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Thanks, and I will!
10369974![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Well, you can find a lot of those here on fimfiction in general is what I meant
What parts didn’t happen?
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Mostly the end of the chapter.
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Oh ok
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Oh
Okay start. You might wanna look into getting a pre-reader or something. I saw a few spelling mistakes .
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It's so frustrating, I've re-read every chapter dozens of times before I posted it, but I still miss some mistakes... sorry for that.
Thanks for the advice.
They mind as well give up, because at this point blue is a lost cause.
Another great chapter, hope to see more soon. Great job.
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Not really, its only been 3 chapters. She can have some character development and be friends with people.
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I hope so.
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Plus, in chapter 2 there was some semblance of her seeing that people werent all that bad there but in this chapter sunset kinda messed that up.
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I wouldn’t say it was all her fault.
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Me either but she still played a major role in it.
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I’d say 50%.
Honestly, I feel like bringing her to the music room and showing her was unnecessary. If she didn’t believe them when they told her, then there’s nothing else for them to do.
I wonder how Blue will react to learning that despite the actions Sunset did, she was forgiven while the sirens weren’t given any forgiveness. Will she say did Sunset was given a chance for being a pony while the Sirens are floating pony mermaids? (That’s how I see the Sirens in their Equestria forms)
Another great chapter, great job.
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Sometimes, seeing is believing.
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Idk, I guess I was never the type of person to go that far for someone to believe me.
I’m liking this story, tell me, will Blue ask why Sunset and the others are giving her a chance and why didn’t they gave the Dazzlings a chance?
I’m sorry, but at that moment someone should have socked her.
Technically, they’re forcing her to accept their help, so does that mean they’re not good friends?
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I think because the dazzlings ran away before they could.
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No, she won't. The Dazzlings won't be a part of this story, because frankly, we don't know anything about what happened to them between the battle of the bands and their mini-appearance in Backstage Pass.
Even though I have a few personal ideas of that, I don't think Blue would have them. She's very self-centred and "living in the moment" with all positive and negative consequences. Being where she is right now, she's got a lot on her own mind she needs to figure out first.
The Dazzlings are past, so they don't concern her any more, and so it's pointless to ask about them. That's how she would see it. She had to ask about Sunset, because Sunset is going to hang around her now, but she's not going to overthink something she can't change any more and that won't affect her at the moment.
Sorry for that wall of text, but I hope you get where I'm trying to go with this.
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Its okay, I only said it because Score did say about Sunset's actions in part 1. I figured someone else would talk about them and imagine her like The Sirens without the mind-control singing and don't want another like them it Sunset. Hey don't make an appearance, just a cameo.
Even social workers would do anything to remove plagues from society. Asshole
This is where anon-a-miss comes in. Also, the rainbooms are the only group of friends I know that would get detention on purpose just so one of their friends wouldn’t be alone.
The way I see it no one should be getting mad at anyone, because no one in this chapter is innocent.
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What did Blue do?
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Nothing, that’s the problem.
And at that moment I would have to kill blue. And honestly, I don’t blue had the right to talk that much sh*t. And what does she mean by sunset’s fell in? And who else did she know that committed suicide? Also, I’m glad this got updated on my birthday.
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Happy Birthday!
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Thank you
Great Chapter and great idea for Blue to tell Twilight that her actions will not make Sunset feel better. The part about taking her back to Equestria I mean
What unpleasant memories?
Sh*t, I’ll hold it for a whole minute.
Honestly, I don’t care if she a princess. She got no right to talk sh*t.
Ok, fluttershy is talking to much sh*t for my taste.
I don’t know if I can agree with that.
I’m curious about that talk.
I still don’t know what they’re talking about.
No, they are definitely like you friends.
Ok, at that point I would have to tell twilight to “shut the f*ck up.”
She’s not wrong.
I don’t remember her apologizing for anything.
Because they are the counterparts of your friends.
Also, I’m sorry this comment is long, I just had a lot to say about this chapter.
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Wow... seems like there is barely any part you like about this chapter. Sorry for that. I don't know if you've ever been in a situation like any of them, but when your best friend tries to kill herself, you don't behave like you normally would.
Still a downer that you think half this chapter is just shit, not gonna lie.
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Glad you like it. I just felt like this was something none of the other girls would tell 'the princess' off, but Blue doesn't have these restrictions.
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I wouldn’t say I hated the chapter. There were some good parts. More of I don’t agree with some of the things the characters are saying.
Great job, this is probably my favorite chapter so far.
Finally, someone brought the point up, I always thought about this and it never made sense.
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Glad you liked it!
That’s her sister, right?
Honestly, I feel like no one should hate no one in this situation.
How?
Is she saying that the tension is stopping her from crying?
Is that possible?
I would have felt offended by that.
Someone needs to smack blue around a little bit.
I’m guessing rainbow is the one in tears and sunset is the one with depressing thoughts?
I don’t
Wait, so how old does that make sunset? Also, didn’t she have snips and snails?
I honestly don’t know what they are, so that’s a good debate.
That’s debatable
Wait, so they were just screaming at each other the entire time?
WTF?
Is that true?
I would have never gotten the clue. Also, I’m surprised this chapter created this entire story.
Loving it so far, another great chapter and cant wait for more from you :)
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Glad you like it!
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I appreciate the input, but going through all of this massive post and responding to everything would take so much time, I hope you understand when I don't do that