Wallflower Blush has always been used to straying as far from being the center of attention as possible. Away from a disgruntled family and preferring her own company, Wallflower finds solace in the park. But a typical day changes the moment she meets Sunset Shimmer, leading her to confront her own feelings in ways she couldn't have imagined. Through several trials and tribulations does she start to ponder over the possibilities that her life could mean more than what she's had in mind. But one question still remains: Can two girls with opposite personalities find common ground?
Written for Scampy's SunFlower Shipping Contest. Please go support her and the cause
Art by tzc.
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A wonderful story
10735882 Thank you. I'm a little surprised not more people commented on it/more votes were up
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Wait a bit, some are only on the site at ceirtain hours
10735965 True. That reminds me- What did you think of the story?
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It was charming. A bit rough around the edges, the more damaging being that I can't help but feel that Wallflower's change of opinion of Sunset was told instead of showed.
What I really like is the interpretation of Wallflower as a drawing artist, that's something that I haven't seen before and is a good connection between her and Sunset.
10736146 I see. I was sure I did more showing than telling. It appears I was incorrect. Oh well, at least it wasn't terrible
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If you want something more specific, I'm referring to this scene:
It mentions a change, and some posibilities of why it happened, but we never see what exactly changed Wally's perspective of Sunset, and the previous pharagraph
makes it more jarring of a change.
I like how everyone just instinctively refers to Sunset as Bacon Hair.
I don't think you need an exclamation point here.
Should be fling, not flung.
10736247 Tbh, its kind hard not to think of bacon with hair like that
. But yea, I fixed the areas you pointed out so thank you
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10736202 I see. I can tell where you're coming from but on the same note, I tried to leave it kinda vague as to leave it to the readers what she meant. I didn't want to flat out say what it was but I do see how you reached that conclusion
Should be walks, unless the memory stone made Wallflower forget she was human.
Should be lease unless they're into that sort of thing.
I was going to make a comment on how candles aren't all that bright, but on reflection, I think it fits quite nicely. Their relationship portrayed here is soft and cozy, much like a candle's light.
10739291 Ugh... sometimes, I feel like I forget things. Thank you for catching this. But I'm thankful you enjoyed the story despite the mistakes
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^Sunset’s inner monologue rn, probably
10785083 Well, can't say I expected that but can't say you're wrong.
As a fan of the SunFlower ship, this was an adorable telling of the tale.