Death died and in doing so he found himself in another more colorful world. A world that has magic leaking into it, a world where Death can finally find peace.... Or can he
Cross over between my little pony Equestria girls and Supernatural might add more later
I do not own either respective properties go to there respective owners
EDIT: Because of the new chapter Siren Song I felt it best to move the story to teen if this discourages you from reading I am truly sorry that chapter was how I felt I wanted the story to go...besides you can't have story starring Death without...you know. So again I apologise to my readers
Edit: 1000 people views wooo, thank you guys so much, I have no words that could be enough to describe how happy I am
Chapters (16)
Well, this certainly looks interesting. I can't wait to see what direction you take this.
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Thanks I had fallen out of supernatural for a while so I've been binge watching and I always liked og Death and I hated that they killed him
Nice
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Thanks this is my first slice of life story I hope I don't disappoint
Feel like you need to have Death state to the Principles why he suddenly appears out of no-where, but other than that pretty good.
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I thought I did but I could have the Principal's look into in the next chaoter
Good good
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Thanks the next chapter is going to be the Principal's doing research on Thanatos aka Death and I figured I'd give him more personality than just I'm as old as god and don't really care
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Thank you and things just got even better
So the race has begun
Thank you.
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Your welcome though I don't know why your thanking me I just literally threw this together,I thought people wouldn't like this chapter,and what do you mean by 'race has begun' did you find something I didn't realize?
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The race to find out who he really is. Also I was thanking you for following me
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Oh lol your welcome
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👍
A happy Fluttershy is a cute Fluttershy
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Fluttershy is the hardest character that I've ever tried to do, like I want to right her like I do ally other characters but then I have to remind myself it's Fluttershy she's shy,so I figured I'd give a little confidence boost by our resident apocalypse member,that and certain music can really give you courage
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At least you're not writing Zecora
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Yeah I don't even think I'd ever want to write zecora
Anon-a-miss Vs Death.. I think we all know who is going to win there.
It's funny because EG Flutteryshy being a metalhead is cannon.
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I know I just start her transition early, and A pissed off Fluttershy might be a bit more scary than death
So, Death is angry...
RD and Mac put Sunset into the hospital...
Why do I hear Jen Titus' music in the background.
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Oh they'll be hearing more than that *the rumble of an all black beetle is heard in the distance*
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Did you not like this chapter? I thought it turned out good plus I knew I wanted Sunset in a car accident to progress this specific ark, don't worry she lives and death deals with more than people
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I like the chapter I'm talking about Big Mac Rainbow Dash and the CMC
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And make me feel like I want to go inside your story smack Rainbow punch Big mac and give the CMC a talking to
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Hahaha good, I figured hey RD and Mac two characters who I don't really see story's of let's pair them and make them the villain of this ark to be honest I kind of came up with that on the fly and have the crusader's make a mistake cause that was going to happen regardless of if sunset was hurt or not
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More
YESSS MAKE THEM SUFFER
death has come for you
I am still waiting for the hammer to drop.
The karma police have finally caught up with them
Well, it looks like Judgement Day has come for the students of Canterlot High.
I like you.
Krieg - German for war.
Nälänhätä - Finnish for famine.
Zaraza - Russian [зараза]? Polish? (One of the Slavic languages. Quite hard when many words are similar.) for plague.
And finally Thanatos - Greek god of Death.
Your naming convention is really nice.
(If they had these names in the show then I'm sorry. Didn't watch it)
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I see it like this:
War in the school between students.
Famine on the farm.
Pestilence... some obscure connotation with Dash.
And Death takes them all at the end.
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We'll see where I go with it and none of the horsemen in supernatural had names besides what they represented, I gave them their names and your correct Zaraza is Polish, I decided to give them all names, Death was easy just looked it up the others I decided let's choose something in another language that sounds like it would sound like a real name and I'm glad you're liking the story so far 😁
This puts a smile on my face
let the suffering begin.
Hey this story is pretty good just started today and I'm already excited for the next chapter keep up the great work
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Thanks, I'm already working on it and I hope to not disappoint
Love the chapter, also nice song choice
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Thanks that was the part that I had some trouble with, I find music with specific scenes helps set them better, so it took me a bit to find the right song after that it was figuring out the rest of the chapter and I'm glad you liked it
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OK. Some advice.
Capitilize names. Death. not death. God. not god. Etc.
Second. use italics for expressing thoughts. not ' '
third. check your spacing.
aside from that, I got no real complaints! This is the good good. Death has always been my favorite Horseman.
first off. Just use the third person. Don't switch POV's too much.
Missing spaces for your commas.
Mrs is for someone who is married. Ms is for someone who isn't. Also. a period after both. and missing a comma at the end of the quotation.
don't switch POV for cahpter's. and use a transition marker like
"
"
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Most my chapters are like this but I'll implement you're idea in the chapter I'm working on, I like doing POVs of different characters and giving the readers the perspective of the characters and the interactions and thoughts of those characters
Links. Links. Sooooo many links. Just describe it in-chapter. Or insert a picture. Aside from that.
Death is gonna kill some boi!