• Member Since 8th Feb, 2020
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Vartil-Shadowalker


I write to let my active imagination out, but I'm learning as I go.

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  • 26 weeks
    Music?

    Hey guys I'm thinking of using some creepy music to set the tone for a scene in the next chapter. I just want you guys opinion on if I should use creepy Christmas music or a creepy music box song? Let me know what you think.

    3 comments · 69 views
  • 26 weeks
    Poll/Ideas for new story

    Hey guys if you're here you either follow me or have read my notice on Deaths New Life: Equestria's Apocalypse. Like I said there I'd love to hear your ideas about a new story you think I should write as well as ideas/my ideas to broaden my writing technique. My ideas are.
    -Horror
    -Displaced
    -Hero/villian
    -Grogar
    Again if you have an idea or you like the sound of one of mine, comment your thoughts please.

    7 comments · 79 views
  • 29 weeks
    Deaths New Life Sequel

    To all of my followers waiting on the sequel to Deaths New Life, sorry its taking so long. As many of you know from one of my authors notes I started a new job two weeks ago and I'm working nights five days a week so my schedule is messed up. I only have two days off to come up with ideas and write, and I'm having trouble starting the first chapter. That's why I wrote a somewhat bad one shot, just to let my creativity flow, but still no dice. Im also in the process of finding a new apartment so

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    4 comments · 61 views
Sep
6th
2020

Music? · 10:38pm Sep 6th, 2020

Hey guys I'm thinking of using some creepy music to set the tone for a scene in the next chapter. I just want you guys opinion on if I should use creepy Christmas music or a creepy music box song? Let me know what you think.

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Did you see the warnings I drew on your armours .

the darkest red means almoust certainly
Red means hight possibility ,
Orange is maybe .

The demonic armour well has very tiny chance of open orfices .
would draw that later where is exposd beside comment

I hope to make something to remain flexivility while protected .

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Your armour Evaluation is complete .
I prefer not to see what I draw a real injury in Those places where is less protected .
That is just warning .

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(Your armor image is STILL unknow) .
IS THIS THAT IMAGE

https://imgur.com/czi70CG

tHE back of the legs are exposed and the joint THE Elbow is expopsed

the neck has minor exposion

I'm sure your armour to draw where is weak, Exposed . orfices seemed weak spot. Still it needs precision to see and hit those spots and the chance is not very hight but the circled red is where is more exposed.

I hope I would not see red where is circled red.

Darkest red is almost certainly exposed weak spot.

Still it took a few minutes to look those armours for weakness and would aim where it has bigger chance.

If the face has the same chance than the armour I would aim in the face.

I would fight a bit dirty so if you say that warning
In my armor evaluation than actually hit where is exposed.

When the hand on the joint extends is more open to cut the exposed part, someone supported could trow a knive or hit exactly those places.

I allready mentioned those circled by red and orange. If you have asasin or something to evaluate
The armour or equipment for weak points just as critically as that.

Your welcome i always try to like and favorite story's that I like and enjoy reading

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