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Midnight_Song95


Just someone who writes the same stuff they like to read.

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This story is a sequel to To start over


While dealing with her own insecurities and the fact that her friends seem to be excluding her. Sunset finds herself getting wrapped up in the mystery and chaos brought on by three new students. But can she handle it when her world starts falling apart right in front of her? and more importantly, can Twilight Sparkle actually help save Canterlot High again?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 33 )

Glad to see a sequel, can't wait to see where this goes.

le woot. i thought the wait would be longer

yert yert back at it again with the storys great chapter by the way

Man hope Celestia chews the Rainbooms out good, Dash most fo all for treating Sunset like that. Got dammit, they know how fragile she is, this could easily set her back.
Was bad enough in the original story/movie. In this fic it's worst.

Glad to see a sequel. Wasn't expecting it so soon. Great start. I can't wait to see how this goes. I loved the reference to Tiberius. And I wonder if you will develop Luna's and Chrysalis' relationship more.

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It will probably happen.

Crysalis plays a larger role in this story, unlike in the previous one.

“I love you but if you have her bring that thing over here I will personally find the most disgusting of creatures and put it in your bed when you're sleeping.”

Any chance for a side story?

It may have been short but it was still a cute chapter. I hope Luna does have those t-shirts made.

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With her own custom logo and then sell them $10 per shirt, eventually creating her own clothing line. I swear i would read that story.

that was awesome i love how chrysalis and Luna interact in these story's

noice. simple. cute

Awwwww that was adorable

This chapter was great! I hope we get more Tempest, Pharynx and Thorax. I am loving the dynamic between Luna and Sunset.

Oh no way hope you get well soon always sucks when health problems accure

Oh that was good

Good but short no pressure though

“Sunset Swimmers, Please report to the front office.”

???

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its all good, figured as much

9110641
Thanks for pointing that out.

Awesome chapter

I love the story! The only minor problem I have are the short chapters, otherwise no real issues. Keep’em coming!

“Knowing her, she'd just have it printed on a t-shirt.”

Me

i love this story i hope you return to updating some time soon and i notice you have not been on since may i hope your ok

Oh no! Haitus! The worst thing to happen to a story!!

I hope you find time to continue it.

I also hope you're well!

I hope this story get continued! I enjoyed reading ‘To Start Over’ you’ve done great, I wished we could see more!

I hope that we get some more chapters soon.

I am grateful that you didn't just copy the RR dialog.

Sunset sighed as she glanced at the clock, in two more days she would have to put up with her friends constantly talking about the band. She knew that the battle was supposed to be a reward for the students after the testing before winter break, but still, she couldn't shake a bad feeling about this. Stop overthinking things, it's just a stupid talent show...what could go wrong?

Now you've done it

“Why doesn't she just stop pretending and go die in a ditch or something?”

Everyone at CHS really forgot she could have died from a fall down the stairs

Salvation !!! here a French fan!!!🇨🇵🇨🇵 I sincerely hope that this story will continue!!! I love everything!!!!! especially Chrysalise and Luna!!! besides how many children chrysalis has, Tempest Is she his daughter? At one point Luna said that chrysalis had three children per husband, and she had had 5 husbands so she has 15 children? Or was it just a joke from Luna?? And you say she has Three sons thorax, pharynx and... Uh... Kevin? Anyway 3... So a little explanation? Besides, a little bonus for Tiberius!!!

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