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The Crazed Werewolf

Lets see where this goes. The stories that i write are the kind of stories i like to read and are the kind of randomness that fills my head. I write primarily for my own satisfaction.


In the wake of the Fall Formal, Sunset Shimmer rediscover the family that she already has, and learns what it means to have friends and family. She also discovers the consequences of her actions and what those actions mean for two separate worlds.

Gore tag due to violent nightmare scenes.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 80 )

Pretty good so far. Can't really tell much from the first chapter bit I'm looking forward to seeing what comes of it.

I do have to say though, I think I already enjoy this one more than the original.

But, didn't Sunset already get redeemed in the first Equestria Girls movie?

This is a follow up set between EG1 and Rainbow Rocks

Why wasn't Trixie reported in?

I'm sick of Sunset turning the other cheek crap stories Luna and Celestia had every right to punish Trixie, she not going to stop ethier way.

Sunset won't continue to turn the other cheek, she will push back.

Whoa! That is a twist, yes Sunset didn't get raped, but she is scared, even a attempt can scare a person.
And like what you did with Luna at the end.

well... buck. If anyone hurts scoots or SS i will go all out depressed pinkie and fourth wall break on their arse

Wait for Discord"s and Celestia's reactions in the next chapter.

Lol, so far this is my favorite chapter.

"None of that now," Celestia said in a no nonsense tone.

"now"... Celestia! you should not be encouraging this kind of behavior

Who knows what could happen later, Hoops may have an "accident".

"Am I really that transparent?" Rarity asked trying to avoid Sunset's beautiful eyes. Sunset took Rarity's hand into her own.

just a bit more then glass

anyway, great chapter!

"Am I really that transparent?" Rarity asked trying to avoid Sunset's beautiful eyes. Sunset took Rarity's hand into her own.

just a bit more than glass

anyway, great chapter!

"Whoa, that was a boozy"


also I notice you make the mistake of typing "no" when you mean "not" A lot. just saying.

on one hand this wasn't amazing. It was good and on the other hand it was just interesting enough for me to star it so I can get updated.

Guess we'll have to find out in the next chapter.

Well shit you just cant win.

My fiancee read this chapter and looked at me with a straight face that I am evil. Now I'm sleeping on the couch.

for some reason im not surprised dunno why...

Gotta say, I'm loving the alternate interpretations of these characters! =)

..."Scootaloo Kennedy Discord". XD

Scoots is a bitch in this one. o_O

You always know you are in serious trouble when mom uses your full name.

Let me get this straight...Did Sunset nearly get raped as a child?!

In this story......yes. I'm not going to write about it.

That's all I wanted to know. Yeesh, as if she didn't already have enough on her plate.

Any guesses on who the final host will be?

Apple Bloom?
Cranky Doodle?
Wallflower Blush?
Flash Sentry?

I already know who the final host will be. Just stay tuned.

Whoo. This needs some editing

"No-I, I asked Do to leave alone,"


Celestia and Su set

Grrrr!!! I hope you plan to have Celestia tear into those three kids, and You should have her tear into Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell, if they going to abandon her, then she can ban them from ever seeing her daughter for that!

Rarity is amazingly insensitive. “So Sunset has been having nightmares where myself and Fluttershy get beheaded...right lets go with the “children’s” movie with the largest volume of severed heads we can possibly find.”

That...literally wasn’t an apology. Hell you’d have a hard time debating it was technically an apology.

Sunset reminds me of the main antagonist in the battle royale manga. Guy reads textbooks on anatomy and judo and then cripples a guy who thinks he will be easy prey.

I actually got the idea from a novel about the Marine Corps

Of the characters you’ve introduced I would bet on either Trixie or Hoops.

This kinda came out of nowhere. Scoots emotions are really all over the place over the story as a whole, and she hasn’t had anything happen that would indicate her family doesn’t care.

i mean i like this chapter but its short good job though

I'm guessing in this story Trixie never went to school with Sunset? Because it's surprising that Trixie isn't acting like she is to Sunset for her actions at the Fall Formal. Then again it could change as this is the first time reading this fic.

Nevermind, Trixie is back to her old self. The last 2 chapters with Trixie was complete opposite. Guess I'll have to read more to understand more about Trixie.

When’s the next chapter coming out? no rush I’m just wondering

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