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Spacesword16


Just a person who writes stuff to escape the thoughts running through her head.

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While dealing with the mess after the fall formal, Sunset Shimmer must also find herself struggling with issues that she had thought was long forgotten. Will she be able to overcome her past or will she be destined to repeat the mistakes she had in the past?

edited by QuillsAndSofas

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 20 )

This is really good so far can't wait for the next chapter

Good start so far. I'll be following this one.

Hey dude, loving the story so far. I don’t know why but the idea of ANON A MISS really appeals to me. Keep it up! 👍

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I am glad that you like it so far. I wasn't sure about posting it because I have never written anything with these characters before.

Decent story so far. Couple of grammar issues here and there plus a couple of parts felt rushed but I see a lot of potential in this story. Keep up the good work.

I like how the story is progressing, maybe a bit rushed but nothing that is a big problem. The chapters seem a bit short though

Once again I have to say that this story is awesome! :twilightsmile:

Of course, Sunset! Pinkie Sense can tell whenever you log into social media. In case of social media emergencies! :pinkiehappy:

It seems to be a bit rushed into a frantic pace forward. It seems to skimp out on a lot if details. It has a good premise, but it is just rushing towards a goal a bit too fast. Still will keep reading to see of it ever does slow down enough.

Might want some kind of transitions between all of the flipping between Human 5 and Sunset.

“Uh no. Maybe she went home early or something. She didn't take a pretty bad fall today in gym class.” Rainbow dash retorted before sighing and adding

I don't think didn't is the right world there more she did take a pretty bad fall

I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

Just realized that this isn’t an ANON A MISS fic, crap!

Please continue.

Please update!

Aww just when find a good fic to read you find there is no next part! MORE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS🙏😭😍

Something about Luna’s tone surprised Sunset. Never would she have imagined that the school's disciplinarian being capable of being sarcastic.

You've clearly never met Luna

Clicking on the now highlighted icon on her Mystable account she saw it was a request from Pinkie pie.

Do I even want to know how she knew about sunsets account:pinkiehappy:

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