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Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.


Hup is a changeling that occasionally suffers the hiccups. Caught in the act of shapeshifting at a young age, Chrysalis mistook his involuntary shapeshift as natural talent. As problems pop up, one after the other, Hup's going to find out that infiltrating Equestria will be the least of his troubles.

One of a series of gifts to my followers, specifically:
Listener and RadicalThestral

Rated E for weirdness.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 156 )

I look forward to reading more of this! Thanks Sunny!

5865814 You're welcome :D

Awesome. Pure awesome.

I like this story so far. I hope to see more Sunny :derpytongue2:

Metamorphius? Hip hoc hup?
I see what you did there.

5865980 Wasn't there like a similar story to this but with sneezing?

5868500 Was there? I'm just following a prompt, I didn't check to see if this was done before. If it was, I apologise.

This was awesome! Thanks for sharing!

hmm story number 4 is read i will continue onward but before i go...

*throws like and favorite at author

till the next time....

5972501 True I don't really mind.


Interesting, tracking for moar.

[...]viridescent eyes.

I believe that should be iridescent.

Ohhh... nice start. Gonna track. :twilightsmile:

Please continue the story, I already love it!

Nom Nom update! Thanks!

An amazing chapter as always! Thank you for the update. :twilightsmile:

I love that little changeling! :rainbowkiss:
Wow it's been a while since the last update how've you been author?

6371843 Hiya! Really, really, really busy!

That so? Well best of luck to you then! If I didn't mention this before I liked the new chapter as well :twilightsmile:

6372671 Thank you! I appreciate it.

Oh god. There's only two chapters. Ah crap..

I just found this,
I just read this.
I just enjoyed this.

And now I must demand more of this.

Thanks Sunny! *Huggles*

Ah I see you’ve found Philomena for me,” she said gently, holding out an inviting hoof. He hesitated, not knowing if he shook shake it, kiss it, or bow.

Replace shook with should and you'll be error-free.

Wonderful story as well.

Τηατ’σ φυννψ! Ψου φυννψ γυψ!

What a *hic* wonderful story with a *hic* relatable protaganist *hic* who gets into interesting *hic* situations.

Bug bug bug

It has been a whole 6 hours since your last update.

Where's our next chapter?


As soon as I get this image out of my head :D


6741814 N'aww you're getting into the spirit of things!

6741326 Thank you for reading!

I really enjoy incompetent Changeling stories for some reason. :)

It's endearing?

Not bad,simple,interesting and I don't get bored reading it.

6741972 Such elegance. Much grace. So alacorn. Wow.

:pinkiegasp: It thinged! It did the thing! It was there and the thing, it did it!
IT'S ALIVE! :trollestia:

So . . . When's the next chapter coming? The story's stepping forward so slowly it feels like it's practically dead.

Changeling Excrement? But they're emotivores!

6924713 Excrement does not necessarily imply faeces. :P

Oh. That was fast. Yeah, I suppose you're right, but the way it's described...

Hahahahaha...poor guy...
and Chryssy is in for a surprise

Oh, I'm so looking towards the chaos poor Hup will get into :D

6924713 They pee hatriol, the long-chain alcohol byproduct of metabolizing lovethane. You can run your car on it!

Of course, the magical hatriol will turn it into a cursed killer werecar... and don't get me started on what it does to trucks..



Also.... cherngelerngs... :pinkiecrazy:

This was a very nice update, and quite funny.

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