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Wing Dancer
I like hanging stuff on cliffs. They dangle so nicely till the next chapter arrives.
Wing Dancer
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This is very interesting. Please, continue.
By the gods, Continue!
Woah. Wasn't expecting that. I thought that....wow. I am definitely liking this story.
Great keep going!
Well, this story just went to an 11/10 on the awesome scale.
I must say, I really like your update rate, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you all for the comments, reads and favs. I'm extremelly happy you find the story enjoyable
803153 I try my best to put at least a chapter a day. The story almost writes itself, I just help it type
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Then you, good sir, are talented.
I actually have to work at my stories, and I'm still working on the first one of any worth.
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It really isn't that special
Aww, don't make me blush like that
I wish you the best of luck on your story and shall keep an eye out for when it comes out
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Well, the current project, which I'd like to invite you to, is entitled The End of All Worlds and is turning into an enormous, multi-author project that will span hundreds of worlds, have deep conflict, interesting puzzles, and a prize beyond anything you could ever hope for: your world surviving when all others are annihilated.
And Crab People, because someone made one, and he's awesome.
Check it, out, at the least it's going to be a massive collection of various OCs and worlds, and is spawning a wide variety of worlds and cool characters with detailed backgrounds. there's even been an increase in the number of Equestrian slots available.
cant wait for the next chapter when is it
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Rest assured it's on its way
Also, I plan on re-writing the whole thing to be more readable (big warm thanks to the editor who aids me in this!
), so stay tuned to a more reader friendly version soon!
On that note I would also like to hug and thank all my current readers for putting up with the current form. I wans't aware that this style of punctuation and linebreaks I use isn't too good
Thank y'all for reading and cheering me on! I promise I'll do my best not to dissapoint!
Equestrian underground railroad.
Whoops, sorry for the late update! Got caught up in otherwordly events and finished just now. 1 A.M... Time to hit the sack
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I dun get it.
Dude, I don't understand why you don't have more likes. This is actually a quality story. Your idea is flowing beautifully, there's actually something of character development going on here, though I expect more to actually come about later (after all, I don't think there's much room for character development in the changling hive. The fact that you've got some character development going on is amazing.), and you can see the challenges the main character is undergoing (though it is a bit stinted by the lack of further character development, but again, the fact that you're getting any in a setting such as the changling hive is amazing).
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Thanks for the kind words!
The character development as we see it now is a bit stale because the last few chapters are still a flashback, explaining what Chip really underwent during Chrysalis's training. I believe his persona will flourish even more once he snaps out of it and meets the world, with all its flaws and beauty, head on
I think one of the reasons your not getting alot of reviews is because you dont have a picture for this Fic.
It's a sad reality that most readers DO judge a book by its cover.
Great story though.
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Thanks! I really try hard to make it the best I can.
But while words come easy, I'm afraid I have two left hands (that might as well be just hooves) when it comes to drawing. I barelly managed to put together the cover to my other story, A Royal Wedding. In nearly 1,5 hours. And I agree that visual aids are awesome.
Phew, think I'm finally getting out of this prolonged flashback
Bear with me for just a little while longer, okay?
new chapter yay
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As promised -- I wouldn't DARE to break a Pinkie Promise
821444 NOPONY BREAKS A PINKIE PROMISE lolwut
Chip retains a conscience, which clearly means that his friends of sorts will escape alive!
... I hope :(
(Great story you have going on here, can't wait for the next update!)
Sorry to say, today and tommorow ain't gonna be any update. I have some stuff going on concerning my job that keeps me from being rested enough and in the mood to write
Sorry everypony, as soon as things sort themselves out, I'll work extra hard to put up the missing chapters. Hope you'll forgive this small slip
cant wait for the next chapter
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Your wish is my command, my master
I'll try and release a third chapter as well, as it was supposed to be. Then, I'll start re-editing the previous chapters to a more user friendly format
good chapter cant wait for the next
I eagerly await more chapter-ness.
Well, I shall just have to wait, I suppose...
I'M-SO-IMPATIENT
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Worry not. Next chapter, we are going back to the present -- where Chip is going to be in for... Well, you'll read. Someday. Maybe
And Chip's cover is already blown, but by somepony who owes him one.
Well, that certainly explains why you needed to go back and explain Chip's merciful actions...
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To be honest, I didn't know that would happen until I wrote it
Chip is such a nice guy. I think he's having it too easy so far. Needs moar disaster
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"And then, Nightmare Moon, Discord, and TheMoon (from LoZ: Majora's Mask) attack Chip all at the same time"
Disaster enough?
No? Well then...
"And Trollestia shows up, and launches him to the MOOOOOOOOOOOOON!"
cant wait for the next chapter
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Is that, like, a Challenge? Coz I can make it so, you know
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well...
no, no it isn't, because then the story would be over, and then I wouldn't get to read more of your awesome work.
BTW:
You should check out a project of mine. I think this for two reasons:
One, you're a great author, and I think you'd do well adopting one of the teams from the project.
Two, I think you'd create some really interesting characters.
Find it here if you're interested.
Mating...
Haha, quite an unlucky chapter it seems
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Chapter 14 is just for you (and anypony else who wants to have a mild laugh
Dafuq did I just read
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Thank you.
Sincerely, that was awesome.
I liked the "Now Kiss" moment.
I literally LOL'd at this chapters.
Say, would you maybe be willing to to toss a shout-out for me?
I'm working on a project called The End of All Worlds, and it needs more characters (about 49 of them) and more people to adopt some of the teams. (about 18 teams still unclaimed)
I really think you'd do great as an adopter of a team, you're a great writer!
any chance of chip and the queen getting funky even if its a flashback it would be interesting to see the complications and also the sex scene would be sweat.
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Sorry, I don't do clops whatsoever
The whole motion of sex in MLP to me is... 
i don't mean clop fic
i was meaning if you inply that she forced him to do something don't go into detail,
but the notion that they had sex with her would be interesting and would make there already strange relationship more interesting
and its not clop fic we have hands its a wank fic
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Dunno about you, I have hooves
And I think the Queen didn't think much of changelings if she actually kept a colt to herself
To be honest, if they were all her children, the implications would be Oedypian
EDIT: Come to think of it... I smells another intermission
ok that is one screwed up dream
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far enough but remember that she isn't his biological mother and she shows more affection for him than any other if this scene took place it would be after her bad night with the stallion.
one again don't go into detail but it would be a major twist and i think people would like it
like on the last paragraph the queen asks him to step into her chamber then it ends on a cliff hanger. the next chapter could talk about him freaking out
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I never said she wasn't his biological mother -- mah changelings may work a bit differently, that is the reason I put the Alternative Universe tag to this story
Also, I don't quite understand why would that be a twist. In our human world, mating is kinda taboo and means some kind of commitment. Changelings? It's meh for them.
No new chapter tonight -- Sorry!
Will push out two tommorow, Pinkie Promise