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Wing Dancer


I like hanging stuff on cliffs. They dangle so nicely till the next chapter arrives.

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Cosmic balance is a fickle thing. Sometimes, creatures like Luna and Celestia can work as independent agents of Harmony, at least one of them present assured the element's presence in the world.

But what of Discord and Chaos? What happens when the master of the matter is sucked dry of his power, no longer worthy to represent it?

Simple. A foal is born.


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Image edits by Piercing Sight
Editing by Piercing Sight
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Featured on 09/08/2014 *flings some streamers and confetti* :pinkiesmile:

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Comments ( 186 )

I Love this!:pinkiehappy: Make more please! :moustache:

Oh man flutters is going to go crazy over him no doubt.

This is a pretty unique idea that I just adore! I made a chaos is a phrase that should be put on shirts. I will eagerly await new chapters.

This was a great pick-up for my day.:twilightsmile: I say yes to it being a series.:pinkiehappy:

4972095

I would buy that shirt!:yay:

“I did a chaos!”

HNNNNNG!!! *pop!*

If this is to be continued, I'd appreciate an editor x3

>It will be continued
Okay, I'm in. What wilt thou have me do?

Disorder is soooooo cute :derpytongue2:

Daw levels at maximum capacity

4972736
Uhh, edit :pinkiecrazy:
I'll forward you the gdoc in a little while, thanks :pinkiehappy:

You better continue this.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

4973109 I mean it, I have ways of making people do what I want.

You have been warned.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

4973130
Do you have a team of mercenaries that you send to people's houses as well? It's fun to do that.

4973233 I don't have any teams of mercs or other assets like that, but I do have a small team of accomplished hackers who know their way around a highly secure network. It is really fun when they cause someone's PC to have the functionality of a tangled slinky. But they can do other, less game ending things like cause popups to annoy you (Imagine having popups telling you to work on your fic popping up every fifteen minutes).

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

4973251
Hm, sounds cool, but I still think having someone's door kicked down by a heavily armed mercenary group wielding assault rifles is funnier. But eh, opinions opinions.

take my money.
Buy a chainsaw.
Go up to disorder.
Make sandwiches.

4973251
HA! The jokes on you! My network isn't protected AT ALL :pinkiecrazy:
Also my PC just told me it won't let me play Dead Rising 3, so I have half a mind to scrap it :pinkiesmile:

4973260 Well, I don't have the resources to get a merc team, although I have been thinking about starting a cult that is loyal to me, and slowly converting it into a paramilitary group, mainly because it would be interesting to see.

(Also, just for your information, I was neither sarcastic nor joking when I commented)

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

4973281
I didn't need to pay them, their leader owes me some favors. I hope to find a good reason other than some hacker decided to 1 hit me in the foot with a USP in CS:GO to use those favors.

4973295 My hacker team is fun, I generally don't use them, but telling people that I have one is generally enough of a bomb that they will do what I want without me having to pull one of my favors. The leader of that team is a good friend, so he would do things for me if I ask (as long as it has the potential for lulz or is a good idea, he has a funny sense of humor, and loves the concept of overkill).

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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With all do respect, throwing that kind of 'power' around just makes you look like a :scootangel:hole :pinkiehappy:

That cover image is so freaking adorable.

When I read the 'I made a chaos' part, I smiled so much that my face is stuck. I tried listening to pop music and I'm STILL smiling. I think something's wrong.

Sorry I'm no editor, but I do know that this MUST CONTINUE!

He sounds so adorable :twilightsmile: But what about Screw-Ball :rainbowhuh:

Either way can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Hmm, totally worth getting on this roller coaster.

That is the most :yay:ing adorable picture EVER! AND IT TASTES LIKE CHAOS!

I can actually believe that Discord can only undo his own chaos. Chaos is about plenipotentiality; making a situation you didn't create into an orderly, normal situation is order. Discord could make Disorder's chaos into different chaos, but he cannot make it orderly; the only reason he can make his own chaos "orderly" is that he can withdraw his own power and let the situation revert to what it was before he transformed it.

That being said, I'd be a little surprised if most of Disorder's "improvements" didn't spontaneously undo themselves while the colt is asleep.

4972755 If you need a back up editor just tell me and ill get right to work. Good luck, although if the story is this good all the time, you wont need it.

Short, but sweet. The writing is a bit bland, but it's a good starting point for sure. I'd definitely read a story/series based on the exploits of Disorder. :rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by swyrl deleted Sep 9th, 2014

Poor Twilight, Disorder has already bonded with her, he wuvs his auntie Twi! Chaos plus innocence? Twilight is going to be completely unable to stay mad at the little guy. Now if she can only teach him to "clean up" after play time.

As almost everyone here has said, I shall say it once more, this needs to be continued.

An innocent being of chaos, or more so a childish one, who has to learn about his place in the world. Someone who can bring back some chaos into the world without going completely overboard . . .

NEED MOUR!!!!

MUHAHAHA!!!

This first chapter was such a joy to read! :ajsmug::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This little guys is discord except he's cute and wuvable

4975620 Actually their are plenty of them, yet they are so hard to find

This is too adorable to not continue.

That Cosmic Balance will get you every time. Very cute story.

So, Fluttershy. Did you hear about Discord's new kid? He's so adorable and looks a whole lot like his dad-.

...Okay then.

Ok so, i have a good explanation on why discords "son" was created.
when dicord lost his powers he was no longer considered a spirit of chaos, and the universe MUST have a being capable of wielding chaos to balance out harmony and vice versa so when discord lost his powers the universe created a creature with chaos abilitys based on the most chaotic and destructive creatures at the time (the elements and discord) thus resulting in the creatio of Discord "son".

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quotation marks on clean up?
Just what kind of playtime are you talking about?

4976097 Yes, except that the universe would not be balancing harmony, as harmony is balance. It would be balancing order, the strict progression of events and patterns, restoring the margin of error. For if there was to chaos to balance order, than the universe itself would have no powers, as it has laws and systems in place already. It would also eliminate free will, the very origin of chaos, and thus bring the universe, as a whole, not as an entity, to a halt. The sun would burn, and the moon would orbit, but nothing would happen.

4976183 Balance is balance.
Harmony isn't balance, it isn't good, its harmony.
Harmony is like unity, harmony is like friendship, harmony is like conformity
Ain't you played soul caliber? That blue sword isn't any nicer than the red one, they both kill everything if one gets more powerful than the other.

Discord: Look Disorder, everything the light touches is our personal kingdom to troll
Disorder: Wowey-zowie!
Discord: A draconequus's time as a chaotic-being rises and falls, zig zags, and does a loop-de-loop like the sun. One day Discorder the sun will finally run out of steam on my part, and you will put it in reverse for yourself... if you know how to operate a stick, on a firery gas ball, as the new Grand Poobah.
Disorder: Everything will be mine!?
Discord: Everything
Disorder: Everything the light touches.... what about that shadowy place?
Discord: That's beyond al- oh wait, That's just Sunbutt's castle covered in some spare pink chocolate clouds I forget to remove, you can have that too, when she is not looking.... or if is too funny to resist-
BOOM
Celestia: DIISSSSSSSSCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORD!
Discord: I might have also drenched all her cake supply in cake-flavored water, I was just doing a favor! I don't see why she has to-
Sonic Boom
Celestia: I WILL TEAR YOUR MISMATCHED BUTT APART DISCORD!
Discord: Ok, you can't go there!
Disorder: But I though a draconequus can do whatever he wants?
Discord: Son, Tartarus hath no fury like a fat alicorn with destroyed cake, now if you excuse me you will probably have to stay with your Aunt Twilight for a week-
Celestia: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Discord: Ok a Month, and remember: reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram, BUY GOLD, BYE! meep meep poof
Disorder: My father is such a great person

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