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Airy Words


Co-author of Off The Mark with Goldfur. Proofreader for Goldfur, vdrake77, and KevinItk. Occasional spin-off writer.

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What happens when a young filly wants to learn her friend's native language? Or is it languages?

A 100% non-canon alt-fiction inspired by the characters Minuette and Fangs from the story The Bug In The Mirror by Skijarama who has graciously given me permission to publish this story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

Oh man that's good. I could totally see this happening, very well done.

This was better than I could have imagined. That ending is absolute perfection! I don't care if this is technically non-canon, I NEED to live in a universe where something like this happens!

Gaia, Minnie is so precious in the first part, and so badass in the second. Kudos for this.

Minnie R E K T Chrissie. I appove.

Honestly this was great. Love Minnie sassing the Queen, itโ€™s great.:rainbowlaugh:

This was perfect! Here, have an upvote :twilightsheepish:

Hmmm, maybe this could be considered canon, even if it's not put directly into the main story? Referenced, perhaps? Whaddaya think, Tone Shift? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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It directly conflicts with several aspects of my plans, so alas, no, it won't be canon to the actual story.

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That's kinda unfortunate.
8/10 very good job author. It was quite funny.

Chrysalis turned to Lacewing. โ€œAh, I understand. This is the entomologist Topaz Showers. No doubt experiencing some fantasy about studying oversized insects.โ€

Don't think I didn't see that CoTG reference :D

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An unabashed shout out to that story!

I'm surprised it took this long for someone to comment on the matter.

Idol sneezed, as if someone was making references to his story.... ๐Ÿ˜‡
Sad she never did deliver the message. But her assured behaviour was hilarious! She'd totally not do that, but it's funny.
In this AAU she'd certainly become an honorary Queen...
Very telling how Thorax took a shine to her as well, so much stuff being set up. Would this spinoff have a chance at continuation? ๐Ÿ˜˜

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Yeah, I think queens don't quite realize how their subjects perceive them. Having that thrown back in their faces is a bit of a shock!

Most likely not going to be continued, sorry.

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No worries! It was a pleasure regardless. ๐Ÿ˜‡

Ooh, and the reference to Idol Hooves, too! This was a funny story!

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Thanks!

Yes, I had to toss in a reference to one of the other stories for which Iโ€™ve written fan fiction.

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Oh, you wrote that one, too! I actually read that one offline when I knew I wasn't gonna have a stable net connection for awhile. You're good at funny changeling antics!

Chrysalis turned to Lacewing. โ€œAh, I understand. This is the entomologist Topaz Showers. No doubt experiencing some fantasy about studying oversized insects.โ€

Yeeeee nice reference.


Also god this was such a cute little story!! I can only hope to aspire to this level of writing.

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My first FanFic of a FanFic story is Idol Hooves at a Canterlot Wedding. So, absolutely, a Topaz reference is a must!

Just let your Muse take you places and write it down! This is a very supportive community on FimFiction. The grammar, story components, and delivery come with time, practice, and study. Everyone starts at the same ground zero.

Awwww, adorable! And it turns out those lessons did not go to waste, did they, Fang?

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