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Hiver


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This story is a sequel to New Beginnings


Human turned Unicorn Blank Page is finally settling down in his new form and home and life is returning to normal. What a normal life is however might be relative, especially when you suddenly changed species, are living in the castle, dating a god-princess and is followed around by changelings.

Warning: Contains enough slice of life to make a entire cake of life.

Continuation can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/332488/consequences

AN// All the thanks to people over at Spacebattles.com for helping me beta.

AN2// Many thanks to mix-up for the coverart. His user page can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/mix-up and the deviant art page can be found here:http://amalgamzaku.deviantart.com/

Chapters (50)
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Comments ( 1874 )

Sweet, it finally got a sequel. Just wished it was a little longer though, but oh well. This is great nevertheless, hope that chapters can come out soon.

Yeah! I really enjoyed this. It's a nice change of pace compared to many other stories.

SANTA CAME!!!!

great to see the sequel to this story. I hope it will be just as good as the last one.:pinkiehappy: are you looking for a new cover art?

I love it dude!!! So good to hear from a
Page again! Do we get a better description of Skitter in the next chapter, wanna draw her!

6751744 I am actually.

Heh, this kind of conversation makes this story simply more... realistic? Yeah, not the right word for a story about magical ponies...

Cadence, you shrewd mare! )

I'm confused about somethin: what wouldn't Luna veto?

Letting him eat with the soldiers?

"The Art of Wingtimacy, by Twilight Sparkle"

6752877 well take a look at my deviant art page here and pm me so that we can talk about it further.

6753064 Him getting a noble title for the changeling peace treaty.

Took me a couple seconds after seeing the author name to realize who wrote the story and then immediately click it.

I'm here for the ride.

I am so looking forward to this story. The Crystal Empire coming up should cause a lot of changes, especially with the fragile peace treaty with the Changelings.

6753277 oh I get it. He had the moon medallion before but he became a noble because of Celestia, and Luna wouldn't not let him be a noble. Thanks for the clarification.

6753627 I for one am especially looking forward to Tirek's attack.

Woo! Time to get my reading glasses on!

LMFAO. Ha ha ha. That was a good joke. When is the next chapter going out?

So Roadie what did you do today?

I read them both... I READ IT ALL!

I love that you post to three places. So useful when the other are blocked.

Hells yes! War Mage (apprentice) Blank Page!!

You know that their is a pic of this coming!

6755569

Hey Sipioc, your previous fanarts had Blank Page with yellow/blonde hair, how comes he's gotten it dyed black here?

6756387 the story originally called for his hair to be blonde, but when I originally did it I missed that part and did it black. Once I realized my mistake I did one correct.

Hiver them told me that he likes the black hair better.

What do you think?

6756531

Both good really ^_^ I suppose I'd just gotten used to seeing the blonde in my head whenever I reread it.

6756756

Both, as in both blonde and black haired version look good. Totally not because It completely slipped my mind that those pieces had blank page with black hair, not blonde.

6756831 Hah! I see. Personally, I like the black best.

What do you hope to happen in the story?

I shook my head at my assistant/bodyguard. “You are always there, Skitter. Get a life.

:rainbowlaugh:

Learning combat magic from the moon warden herself, nice. :pinkiehappy:

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Not sure. I haven't actually watched the cartoons and only know a few main things. I suppose I'm mostly looking forward to seeing the changelings be something other than monsters and maybe changeling army vs tirek or something.

6757353 That would be pretty Epic. From the start I have always pictured Page standing between a depowered Luna and Tirek, murder in his eyes as he holds his ground.

"I will KILL you if you touch her!"

In the description, I noticed this:

especially when you suddenly changed species, is living in the castle, dating a god-princess and is being followed around by changelings.

The two "is" remarks should be the word "are", since the subject is "you". Also, "changed" should be, ha, changed to "change".

They clearly had the wrong idea. Changelings don't need to eat puppies, they need to be puppies.

She does need a throne!

Got featured! Congrats yo!

6759876 Ty. That was fast though. I have no idea what algorithm that decide it, the previous story was almost over before it was featured.

You got geatured! Congratulations!
Can't wait for the next chapter, not that I have to suffer in waiting much with the speed you work)

I am so glad I found the sequel, I love how it's going so far, also that part about Skitter being told not to call Page "My Lord" reminded me of Ax and Jake from the book series called "Animorphs" where Jake would tell Ax not to call him "Prince Jake". Still I love how things are going and now that Page and Luna are a couple, though I still wonder about one thing, will you turn Page into a Alicorn so he and Luna can stay together as a couple?

6759882 I have no idea what it takes, I've put up several stories that did pretty well, and haven't been featured once.

Expect a slew of fan art mate! You are inspiring the doodler in me!

There is a simple answer to this. Get some powerfull illusion magic, or magic paint that will change the apperance. Bam! Save you millions on renovations.

Good to have you back, I always appreciated the daily updates

It's here? Wonderful! But I'm curious about something. What kind of creatures are Chewie, R2D2 and C3P0 in Page's version? And Jabba?

Page you devil! You did some homework.

6762825 that's a good question.

is a good story

Great chapter as usual. The quick updates are awesome, but short chapters are short. I admit I have mixed feelings about it.

I wonder if Page has played the KOTOR series? I think that would make an interesting book. The CYOA kind.

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