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Haze-man


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Twilight Sparkles learns a little too much about Fluttershy's personal life. Fluttershy can't stand the embarrassment and becomes frozen in fear. The only way to snap her out of it is for her friends to do some unmentionable things.

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DAT PUNCHLINE

DAHAHAHAHAHA

FFUCKAINFASFG

FUCKING FIVE STARS BRO

THAT ENDING. AGH WHYYY.

OH NO!!!!!! OH man! I Did NOT see that coming! Thumb for you sir! Thumb for you!

DAT ENDING
DEAR SWEET CELESTIA

There goes another chunk of the already minuscule part of my brain that isn't stuck in the sewers.

That last line got me! Also, Twilight should totally date Pinkie.

*sees title* you have my attention.:rainbowhuh:

Rare is it that a final line can just make the punchline like that. Superb! :rainbowlaugh:

......*picks up all internets* I thin k these belong to you sir :moustache::moustache::moustache:

Great story. That last line was one of the funniest things I have read all year.

And then, they all fucked.

That ending was hilarious!

278870 Yea, I'm guessing that's what happened. :rainbowlaugh:

that ending made the entire story

*Reads this story*

*Flips table*

WHAT THE FUCK!? SERIOUSLY!? HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO GET PEOPLE TO GLANCE AT MY STORIES WHEN EPICNESS LIKE THIS IS ON THE SITE!? :flutterrage:

Why can't I be this good!? :raritycry:

While debating strongly about whether or not to read this story, I scrolled through the comments. I was expecting some weird sex pun or that Twilight had some how mis-interperated the situation.

The last word hit of the fic hit me like a shitton of bricks.

WHAT! LOL! THAT ENDING! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

Oh god, that was amazing. :rainbowlaugh:

:twilightoops:Dear lord I did not see that coming

HOLY SHIT! :rainbowlaugh: THAT WAS AWESOME! XD DO IT AGAIN! Thank god no one else was here because I just L-O-FUCKING-L'd

Wow, the story itself was pretty good, but that ending... wow
:rainbowhuh:


It made it AWESOME!!!!:ajsmug::yay::heart:

Twilight Pie. Pinkie Sparkle. Hmm. Could work.

But Fluttershy? With RD's dad? :rainbowderp:

doing anything later twilight? :pinkiehappy:
:twilightblush: :facehoof:

and then that :twistnerd: ending.... :moustache: :heart:

and when that sinks in to fluttershy's brain in 3..2..1 :fluttercry:

I thought this was going to be Twilight's mind interpreting a massage from an expert messeur as the two having sex. I did not see this coming. At all. :rainbowderp:

What can I say? That was pretty damn hilarious. Twilight was a bit out of character, but it led to some of the funnier lines in the story, so I can't complain. You wrote Pinkie perfectly though. The ending was funny, though perhaps a bit cliched; at least I wasn't expecting it, though.

Good job. :)

I...
What.
What.
WHAT.
WHAAAAAAAAAT.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT.

278998 I know exactly how you feel, I am trying to become better known on the FIMFiction site, with my Guild Wars crossover story but when theirs awesome stuff like this, who's going to read my story?! THIS IS AMAZING!!!

Okay, this was kind of good.
*epilogue*
MOTHER OF JESUS HOLY SHIT !!!!!!!!
MY MIND JUST... JUST...
hixby.com/x/his_mind%20blown.gif

.....That ENDING!!!!

*not looking at comments*
<Reads title>
Oh, god, what happened to her this time?
<reads chapter title>
PFFFFFTHAHAHAHAHAWHAT?
will read soon XD

AHAHAHAHAHA! :rainbowlaugh: Best. Last line. Ever.

Ending was absolute win.

MY EYES.

IT'S TOO BRIGHT FOR MY GLORIOUS, FANFIC-READING EYES.

IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL.

I'M SCREAMING LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT MADE ME BLIND.

THUMBS UP.

I'm trying to laugh as quietly as I can at 9:14 at night.
It's not working.

AHAHAHAHA Oh god. This was comedy gold.

Cant. Stop. LAUGING!:rainbowlaugh:

D: WHAT THE FU- *HEADSPLOSION*

...

...And now we need a sequel.

...Where Fluttershy gets knocked up by her 'Pegasus Friend'. :rainbowderp:

Oh my, that ending! :rainbowderp: :rainbowlaugh:

Not the best fic ever by any means, but an excellent quickie on the adult side.
Liked.

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