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DEAR GOD.....:rainbowderp:

What was this? I don't even...



Okay, that was pretty awesome.

“Silence, lesbian!” :rainbowlaugh:

A completely ridiculous and hence very funny story!

So much more could have taken place. :facehoof:

Ok then.....Yeah

This was pretty darn funny I must admit I wouldn't mind reading more. :rainbowlaugh::derpyderp1:

...Not sure if want...:twilightoops:

I've read this before, and I'm pretty sure it needs the "random" tag.

"I’m warning you, I have a bunny and he can be very forceful"

Love this line! :ajsmug:

Dis preses meh.

Not sure if on fimfiction or reading book of Mormon..

Not sure why. But I'm okay with this. :rainbowhuh:

It's not bad. Could use a little proofing. It's got all the makings of greatness what with ponies and panties and all. Just needs to be proofread.

If a complete confusion was your target, then you have reached it. Stalin's expression while he read that fic was like :derpyderp2:. But humor is fine. You should really add tag "random" though. And gaps between paragraphs are too big

this fic is lawl!:rainbowlaugh:

BAHAHAHAHA!!! This has to be the silliest fic and one of the funniest I've recently read:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Particularly love the "Silence, Lesbian!", The Twixie Reference, Twilight accidentally "clopping" and the Rarity Striptease. This was too funny.

10/10 for you, Mr.

"She grinned insanely, “I need all of the panties in Ponyville.”"

Best line I've read in a long time. :rainbowlaugh:

And Big Mac is da man- er, stallion. :eeyup:

So this fic finally makes it onto Fimfiction.net

Haven't read this in a while, and I've only read it twice :rainbowlaugh:


Bahahahah, oh god. This is insane.

This was win.
And silly Boss Pony, true happiness isn't in underwear. It's in a box.:derpytongue2:
It's always been in the box.

i like how big mac just accepts freeballing

Lol. Rarity'll be so confused.. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::rainbowdetermined2::facehoof: have a like and a favorite, you earned it...

My thoughts exactly. Though I would have tacked a :twilightsmile: on the end there.

What the hell did I just read?:rainbowhuh:

A hastily written tale from a year ago.
It had something to do with horses in underwear.

326855 I was just a little confused. It was extremely random. Good, but random.

I would love to read story where gilda fights dirty and embarrassingly beats somepony.

Mmmmmm i wanna eat that so bad

Oh my goodness gracious, an actual review!

I agree with all the things you said. This was a story written over a year ago back before I discovered the magic of editors. Without my team of folks to tell me that "This joke could be clearer" or "that isn't sexy enough" and I basically just hammered it out, spell checked it and called it done.

Glad it can still give some laughs, flawed as it is.:raritywink:

“I just felt like I had to. Like I’d never know what true happiness was until I had these for my very own. It’s like how when you wake up in the morning and all you want is a muffin and when you don’t have one you just want one so bad that it hurts. You know?” :derpyderp2: oh derpy....

Oh Jesus, that premise, those situations, the shipping everywhere! :pinkiegasp:


This one goes to my favourites :pinkiehappy:

I'm okay with this.

What is this...
I don't even...

Well it was interesting to say the least :twilightsmile:

Also, for those interested, here's a lost of references:
It was mostly inspired by the Ponies in Lingerie series by Kloudmutt (http://kloudmutt.deviantart.com/) which you can view here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/art-drawfriend-stuff-ponies-in-lengerie.html
It also drew a lot of inspiration from every dark corner of this fandom! In fact here's a list of everything this story celebrates and how:
Trixie and Gilda as partners (http://brotherprickle.deviantart.com/#/d39kts7)
A magical Malady getting every pony hot and bothered (http://brotherprickle.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d38vr4k)
Twilight discovering the joys of alone time (http://buttersc0tchsundae.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3ahhmy)
Twilight having a thing for Big Mac (http://ebonmane.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d39vwau)
Rarity and Applejack in a secret relationship (http://buttersc0tchsundae.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d38u3ir)
Trixie in a relationship with her mirror (http://fim.413chan.net/fic/src/129967933462-trixie_x_mirror-%28n12.png)
Trixie harboring secret feeling for Twilight (http://ponibooru.413chan.net/index.php?q=/post/view/2539&search=Trixie)
Derpy stealing Trixie's panties (http://ponibooru.413chan.net/index.php?q=/post/view/1177&search=derpy_hooves)
Derpy mixing up her own bra and underpants (http://ponibooru.413chan.net/index.php?q=/post/view/1651&search=derpy_hooves)
The whole pursuit around town could be seen as an inversion of Everypony Loves Rainbow Dash (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-everypony-loves-dash.html)
And the whole Lyra and Bon Bon thing has too many sources to name.

Now whether this was a celebration of our weird fandom or a collection of rip offs is totally your own call to make.:heart:

326738 Derpy's line about the underwear reminded me of Big Boss's monologue to Sigint about the box.
I feel like its my destiny to be in the box! -Big Boss

>that feel when you recognize a majority of that


And now, everybody can shutup with the, "Lol wut" comments. I understand your intent in writing and raise you one Rainbow Squishy Face: :rainbowkiss:

I unfortunately broke 69 thumbs :rainbowwild:
Wonderful, if a bit under-polished.

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