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I live for these "Schenanigans Chapters".
Max just did something he might regret later.
For all we know, that could be a Pegasus Proposal. I've seen at least one fic where RD left some of her feathers for someone she was after.
Freaky but awesome how I was literally JUST thinking of this story then BOOM! An update. Aw yeah!
Awesome chapter, it was nice revisiting a lot of ponies in a silly and slightly heart warming chapter that was almost like a picture perfect slice of life. Thank you! I end my day with a smile on my face. :D
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I agree, sometimes it's nice to have a little distraction and light hearted moments before tackling the deeper and darker moments. Also, I love to laugh and that was the best note at the end. Although, I'm thinking Dash may be a little kinky if her reaction is anything to go by :P
if only Rainbow can truly express herself will this story get very hilarious (In my opinion).
When will there be kissing? Seriously when!?
JUST KISS HIM ALREADY RAINBOW! YOU TOO TWILIGHT! KISS MAX AND BE HAPPY!!!
first and it was a great chapter only bad thing is now I have to wait a whole week for another.
Hey! Max made it through a chapter without getting sent to the hospital! RD may want to get that eye looked at though. Also either she or Twilight's going to have to say something to make things official, cause you can cut this sexual tension with the broad side of a spoon.
I'm not seeing the "little rough"ness in this chapter it looks great to me
A good chapter, much fun to read. That note was the best part. I eagerly await til next week you magnificent bastard.
OML THAT WAS AWESOME. the image the bits oml that was priceless.
Before I even read this chapter, you sir are rude for posting this at this current time.
It is late where I'm at and I have class tomorrow
Now I have to read
thanks a lot
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Don't pay attention to that last comment
It was worth it...
I love this chapter. It's so fun.
Make Twilight kiss him first! It would suck if someone else does it before Twilight. Considering what they have been through together.
That was a good chapter..... but please, don't make Max fall in love with Twilight, while she HAS been one of the few characters being nice to him, I don't believe, nay CAN'T properly believe Max has any REAL reason to fall for her, hell as a human, Max shouldn't feel any kind of romantic feelings for her. then again this is just IMO but honestly it would actually been fun to read what would happen if Max DOESNT return the feelings of love/lust or whatever
Good chapter
You sir, are absolutely horrible. It is dark, everyone is asleep, and as im laying in bed reading the newest chapter, I had to constantly fight to not laugh... this was a good chapter... xD
Please, continue... next time I will make sure to laugh, and not just grin stupidly xD
OH, and thinking back to it. Rainbow dashes tail was twitching... she seems to be feeling an emotion... just like twilight! xD
Hmm, perhaps a new character could be introduced soon? Maybe one with some actual fight towards his or her pony overlords? I'd hate to see this story stagnate
There's a love triangle a brewin'.
Man I love chapters like these, had me smiling the entire time
3586387 Twilight doesn't kiss him because she is too embarassed and Rainbow dont want to get killed by Twilight when she kiss him.
Dont worry. It was a good chapter
The funny Things I found were:
1) The "running" gag with Rainbow crushed in AJ
2) The note he wrote in SugarCubeCorner
3) The point count from the Ponys in the town and the Bits Exchange^^
4) And last but not least: The note from Max in the last part with the tied Rainbow Dash... FUNNIEST THING EVER!!!
Nice chapter. 3586674 Sure I can agree on Max reason to fall love Twilight could use some work, but saying that Max never gonna fall in love her because he is a human,
I do wonder what cave of ignorance you been living in this past years. Some humans seems to fall in love "with" everything and I´m not even joking on that part,
I even saw an article about a girl who married the Eiffel Tower and an another about a girl who married Sonic The Hedgehog and to not talk a bout the love interests some humans has with other animals.
So saying Max can "never" fall in love with Twilight Because he is a human is just rubbish.
I'm still trying to figure out where the hell Twilight is getting all the meat. It's apparently quite good and not gamey at all so it's not other humans or most woodland animals... Tho, knowing Twilight, it could be test tube grown meat. She would do something like that.
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It's getting more and more obvious too. Rainbow all but jumped him after their 'playtime' turned into minor bondage. Probably just as well humans have a terrible sense of smell (compared to most animals like equines) and isn't picking up on the veritable fogbank of pheromones RD is putting out at the end there. I just hope Equestrian romances can handle a love triangle without it devolving into a friendship threatened to be ruined over a man-- I kind of suspect this drama is going to happen once oh-so-innocent Twilight realizes Rainbow Dash has the hind-leg squeezing hots for her human.
p.s. Sweetie Belle is best ponyhat.
3586792 so because I dont agree with something means im ignorant? geez when I posted the comment I KNEW someone was going to say this, what I MEANT was that a human wouldn't just fall in love with another creature willy nilly, a human would have almost no reason to find a pony physically attractive and those that do... well im not saying it doesnt happen but I don't think with all thats happened he would be willing to think of anypony in that light anyway. (note im half alseep and may not be getting my point across correctly)
Rainbow's heart's gonna be broken.
Now this was one hillarious chapter.
3586808 Sorry if I went on to hard with my comment,
me being a guy with Asperger syndrome just completely took your comment the wrong way,
but you´re right in not be getting you´re point across correctly.
And again sorry.
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She could be importing it from a country that would potentially eat meat, gryphons, or minotaurs maybe?
ppppplllllzzz no pony sex
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already happened, applejack was getting freaky!
Wooohooo!!! *Dances a jig* You took my idea
Though I think you meant "wondering" and not "wonder".
I hope this story is getting somewhere soon, Max is a boring character and i just want to see what Discord's deal with him is and if he really manipulated Max to act so submissive.
Right now the story kinda stagnates .
I really like Twilight's and Max's relationship, good job on that one .
HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-*cough!* *wheeze!* Can't... breathe!
That was funny as hell
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I was reading this in class... Had to try and keep quiet.
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I was thinking a bit more and if Applejack apparently has no qualms with helping herself to the breeding stock, what's to prevent Rainbow Dash from thinking the same? Even if RD isn't looking for a mate in our human, she might still be just wanting a roll in the hay, especially after 'wrestling' and moreso when he ties her up; she considers him a friend with benefits. Twilight is going the opposite direction, not caring too much about the sexual part and wanting him to be more than a friend. Such a triangle just might work out after all, if he doesn't mind getting nasty with RD and cuddling the rest of time with Twilight.
If this was a clopfic, he'd already have 'done the deed' as it were. I'm gonna estimate two more chapters before something naughty happens.
3587180 "Plot Pacing"
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What about it ?
Upon seeing the title I thought of the song.
And then Chopin.
I'd hate to say it given the amount of dislikes similar comments get, but please, please, if you are going to have a love triangle, don't resolve it as a polyamorous relationship.
Despite human social customs, it's practically cliche at this point.
3586591 ...I might have to... "borrow" this... with no intent on returning it...
3586771 I can't really take credit for the note at the end though. It's sort of a shout-out to Ghost-091 for his comment in Chapter 12.
3587118 It was a good idea, and when I realized I would be having a Rainbow Dash vs Max chapter, I knew I had to put it in.
3587479 There are no plans to have a polyamorous relationship, nor a herd, in this story.
3587576 Then I thank you that you have put his Idea in the story^^
3587118 Thank you that you gave him this AWESOME idea!! It was just brilliant!!!
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same here3586699 A twitching tail, means an aroused pony. Both RD and Twilight are ready for the D, yet Max hasn't realized what such an obvious sign means.
This will make for an... interesting love triangle.....
Hmm...
*ahem*
*in announcer Voice*
This Sunday, Sunday, Sunday see Twilight take on Rainbow in an all out battle to mate with Max. Who will win? Place your bets now. Tickets on sale at the box office.
Warning, Contest has tendencies to show violent and potentially obscene material. No one under the age of 18 may enter. You are responsible for any damage this may bring
Awesome chapter, plz update soon...