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This chapter made me think of the last of us
Another amazing chapter, i cant get enough of this story!
A very nice way to take this tale indeed! I am now curious as to the rest.
Eh.....They might need to study us for that you-know-what infection. But still....
*Bad sign for the infection* YOU JUST GOT YOURSELF PWNED!
Something tells me she might enjoy that.
hah! take that magical pony land, earth humans are best humans
Wow, spores.
Like The Last Of Us.
AWESOME!!!
You can't stop it there!!!
Boooo Booooo.
/ rant.
Clever idea. Nice to know us good old fashioned humans are resistant / immune to the zombie infection.
Keep it up!
this is nice in all but MOAR!!
"No, Max. You are the demons."
And then Max was a zombie.
Eesh, dark. You sure know how to add the horror to a story.
Btw, AJ mentioned seducing. Was there something that happened in a previous chapter that I forgot or was this something that happened outside the mentioned story that we're not privy to because I don't remember anything seductive happening involving AJ. Mrs. Cake yes, but not AJ.
Anyways, you sure are milking that Dark tag for all it's worth. Another good chapter. I think this chapter needed a link to a dark soundtrack or something to go with the mood of being stuck in an empty snowy marketplace with life about to end.
Coldworld - A Dream of a Dead Sun
Jen Titus - Oh Death
These two off the top of my head...
Is that like zombies? Damn they should have told him about that
I think we've found a job for Max. Zombie hunter.
Good ole Zambie Virus to keep us entertained.
"Eat up" hehehe
First thought was a Smoker. Then that assessment changed to smoker/clicker hybrid... That's terrifying.
So Discord's black thorn vines that he planted centuries before to attack the Tree of Harmony also affect Equis Humans (aka Neanderthals) with a "Last of Us"-esque zombie fungal infection? Well then, nice spin on things.
And then a huge bio-mass combat knife sprouted from his hand and max went on his merry way, killing those that put him in a fighting Pitt. The end.
Mmmmore! *squee!!*
Why is it that just when you find a nice, relaxing idyllic place like Ponyville, freaking Zombies show up? I swear, it happens every time.
Wait, how does Twilight know Discord brought Max over to Equestria?
good ol' terran human immune system!
Wait, I thought Discord was free in this. Didn't Cadance mention him being in his room during the family dinner scene?
Oh snap! The "viris" is kinda like what hapened in "The Last of us"
with how many diseases and viruses etc on are world trying to infect are bodies not surprise that little fungus failed there. wait a moment does that mean later doctors and vets will want permission to study his blood and anti bodies later? for multitude of purposes to look in possible medical break through to study how the fungus infection and work on a ways to prevent it spreading to other humans one day.
man I just though of something just now I bet after that little stunt that gonna hit the news soon after he get better of twilight human surviving a infection of the fungus they might just mark him down as a rare unknown endangered lost breed of human or new branch of cousin species that have zoologist and biologist science curious.
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This is not Prototype! More accurately, this is Left 4 Dead! (Because Max is now a 'carrier' of sorts, kinda)
Your Human and You: The Trot Zone.
So the last of us and the walking dead burn yea out huh neaat. -tank
4361504 or make a cure with Max's blood as a catalyst <------(hopefully i used this word correctly :D)
Goddamn I love this story.
Zombies? An NOPONY tells Max? I think it is time for Twilight to give Max a crushh-course in Pony history and society. I mean, they didnt even tell him about the alarn bell for infected humans our what he has to look out for. Then it is no wonder he gets so often in trouble.
This chapter was so metal, I couldn't handle it! Hopefully more soon!
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its not antibodys or white blood cells fighting it off his body is making a fever which is actually just micro contractions in your muscle and using basic friction to heat your body up which is all regulated by the brains version of a thermometer which has some fancy medical name. its why when you run a high fever you sometimes get chills your muscles over spasm.
so no using the blood would just spread the spore and therefor the infection.
it was funny though all that build up the bite and bam fever kills the big bad spore right away. go team evolution. excellent beguilement.
you know, im sorry I have to say this but I've really just lost interest in this fic. I mean come on Zombies? You would think this would have come up earlier. Regardless, i've been skimping through most of the chapters since they found the phone, I know your pacing this slowly but there is such a thing as too slow it feels as if the plot is just hobbling around not really going anywhere. Couple this with the fact that Max is starting to look more and more like a stu its just getting...
meh.
I still like this 'your human and you' universe and i'm keen to see what's done with it, but this main fic has just lost all its charm. Sorry.
(Now I wait for all the replies that shout at me.)
Damn son this is how I felt after reading this
I got some last of us vibes from this one
4361696 just imagine if they somehow saw the effects of some of OUR diseases.
EDIT: and if max bit a pony or something pre-infected. they'd be screwed by that as well!
http://emedicine.medscape.com/article/218901-overview
Well, I would say you have to add in aliens now that zombies are confirmed but technically Max is an alien. Also no technology for Skynet. Hmmmmmmm.
Your story gets better with each chapter. Keep it up.
4361519 chaos magik.
You know...Pinkie Pie wasn't around when the infected human attacked, so technically Twilight wasn't wrong.
4361704 it was hinted at.
I'm just gonna leave this here...
great a zombie virus. max you lucky son of a bitch >:)
I was afraid Max was going to go full Clicker.
4361622 or make a vaccine by injecting the bacteria into a horse and using its blood since its immune
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1. It's a fungus, not a bacteria.
2. Vaccine wouldn't help since it was the fever that effectively killed the fungus, not Max's antibodies. You can't make a vaccine that would allow Equestrian humans to develop fevers, that's not how vaccines work. At least not without bullshiting your way through with the excuse of "lolmagic".
Just because it's been mentioned in 86 percent of the comments so far, what the junk is "The last of us"? Some post-apocalyptic virus story everyone else but I have read?
In other news, looks like nurse Redheart has been clued into Max's uniqueness. Luckily she's too tired to really care at the moment.
Keep going! ;)
Now I'm imagining a scene later on where more infected humans appear and when the guards have trouble taking them down, Max acts more than a 'little' ditzy and starts splitting skulls with an axe or pipe or something. Damn that would be awesome.