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Oh yea that's the good stuff.
Wow. So ends one Discord, so will Max take his place as a Chaos God then? I get the feeling that the Terrain humans will have quite the tale to tell when they get home!
Is it bad that I feel sorry for riddick? I mean his actions were vile yet the fact that celestia played a part in turning him into discord does fill me with a certain sympathy.
I have no words to describe the joy I feel when a story like this gets updated... Excelent chapter, sir.
wow
I did.......not
Welp...I'll just hit the old dusty traillllllllllllllll
LOVE YOUR WORK
I approve of this reference.
At some point of the story later, Celestia really needs to realize her mistake about what she did to Riddick. It may make the other ponies angry towards her but who cares, she needs to own up to her mistake.
Is Max going to become a Chaos sponge? Cause I have a feeling that he's gonna be the next Lord of Chaos, except that he'll be a chaotic good. But that'th jutht thpeculation!
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7211312 I get the feeling that all of the Terran humans will end up in hostile/uninhabitable territory back on Earth, and things will only get interesting from here...
Oh, and R.I.P. Dissy.
Brilliant. Great chapter, I love it!
Darn it, what now?!
Of course, it's ALWAYS Ponyville.
Oh, sh*t, it's Vinyl!
You know... maybe if you spent less time plotting revenge schemes and more time reflecting on your actions, I might be the SLIGHTEST bit sympathetic about what's going to happen next. But lo... you are but a two-dimensional villain who has served his purpose.
And thus a light may or may not have been extinguished on this Friday the 13th. May ILoveKimPossibleALot shake her head in dismay, then proceed to gush about the real Discord 2 seconds later...
Anyways, this was a pretty sweet chapter, can't wait for the next one. See you later.
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She was young, dumb, probably more than a smidge arrogant, and likely had something of a crush on him (I'm not the only one who saw it, right? Curse these shipping goggles!). You'd have a harder time finding someone who hasn't made a poor decision like that, and she'd probably still be horrified at herself if he hadn't gone all MiB on everypony (minus one).
On the other hand, Vinyl pretty much spelled out
Paul'sDiscord's side of things: Celestia took his human body (as if there aren't people who would pay to have that done to them, even with the horrendously painful transition period), but he has no one to blame but himself for becoming a monster.I demand more death, the wheel of misfortune will always take another soul!
After so much time a new chapter came out! I couldn't wait anymore, i thought this was ir, no new chapter. It's The worst thing EVER! Eheh. I'm wondering, will new chapters be medium sized, or long ones?
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Yes, but he was still a scumbag.
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Yeah, and everyone will think there crazy and BOOM mental institution all around.
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I have a few, I need moar!
Good chapter, it seems we aren't quite done yet. Looking forward to seeing more.
Holy crap! We were wondering how far away the Elements were to reception. At that point I was like, "AU, don't worry about it!" but nope you had to tie in our fixed points in time! Bravo!
At least this time the Royal Pony Sisters aren't weirdly captured for no reason, it makes sense why they're unable to help.
Keep going! ;)
Vinyl sucks!
Bruh... I have no words...
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My mood was pretty down, so I'm glad a new chapter was here
now let's see what comes next.
Look at Vinyl, going all savage and junk, kill stealing from Max too.
Wonder how long it's gonna take for the opening scene to make sense...
Every dude's worst nightmare. The missus and the ex. It'd be worse (and highly amusing) if they eventually found some common ground and became friends.
*Shudders* OOoooooooh yeeeeeah baby... that is the stuff. What a damn good chapter man, damn good! Hahaha, this story rules. I feel like its ending however... pity... but it was a damn good run, and there's still a few more chappies to go until it does.
WHOOOO! Vinyl, smexy vampy *shudders violently*
Keep it up!
Pretty sure that Paul's gonna be more than 'tasted' when Vinyl's done.
Probably an unnaturally pale little horsie with most of his blood gone.
"And Death himself will ride in on a pale horse."
But what happened with Max and Paul? WHAT BECAME OF THE FIGHT?
Not gonna lie, I didn't really like this whole 'Discord Unleashed' arc compared to the rest of the story, but this ending was really satisfying. Question: Are you gonna keep going with this story after this and focus on Slice of Life stuff, or are you gonna put this story to rest? Or better yet, are you thinking about coming up with a new arc? Oh wait, we're in S4 now. Guess the only villian you really could work with is Glimmer.
With Discord, he aint dead even if you have a body.
Substitute, you know he can.
As for Vinyl, I didnt think she liked the Classics that much.
I got you, under my skin.
Next up, Plundervines. Where Zecoras Japanime potion still doesnt work.
Season 4 premiere, except where Discord as a human and Canterlot got rekt
So Vinyl is a vampire now? Or a changeling?
7211457 "Ahh~ N-not so hard Vinyl~" Paul
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And then nothing sexual happened.
The End.
Now there's an interesting turn of events. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
He dead. What happen in ponyville?
7211312 They would be sent to an asylum.
7212200 Plunder Vines. And now the elements return to the tree of harmony
...I feel like I missed an axe fight somewhere... Odd, those usually aren't quiet enough to slip by... and where did that collar on Max come from...? Guess there's plenty to learn once he wakes up. I'll admit to the author's note: nope, didn't expect that one, well played. Should have, since the girls still have the Elements, meaning that plot line hadn't played out. Wonder how ole Tirek's doing...
It's a shame the Equestrians haven't found a way to communicate with the Terrans... nopony's tried a translating spell again? Sure, it didn't work on Max, but Max is weird, and most ponies didn't witness that failure anyway. Speaking of the Terrans, what happened with the ones who were helping the injured in the castle? Those seemed like the cooler heads of the bunch, hopefully they can be a louder voice of reason. In the end, hope it all works out and they don't end up teleported into the Pacific Ocean somewhere... sorry Luna, but that spell is really sketchy...
Oh, Paul... Max sided against you, his own kind (heh, whatever), because any human with half a brain knows it's not that simple. You worked for the military... weren't you fighting your own kind, too? It's about right and wrong, not race. How can you be so old and still such a simplistic child? Maybe I answered myself... you've gone senile as well as nucking futs. But at least you got your body back! And look, an old friend stopped by for a hug! Everything's coming up roses for Paul! Wait, that red isn't roses... well, still... Yay! Yeah... not much sympathy from me for him; what happened to him didn't justify any of what he did. I don't buy his story without confirmation anyway. There's three sides to any story: yours, theirs, and the truth. Not to mention... he got godhood out of the deal, and he can shapeshift. Okay, he didn't want the change. So what? He shifts back into a human, trolls the pony responsible for a few centuries (rather than the whole 'subjugate her race' nonsense) and gets on with his brand new godly existence. But nope... had to go brat god villain mode. For that reason, I hope Vinyl does just take a taste... we're not done with this guy just yet.
I was surprised to see the first part of the conflict wrapped so quickly, only to give way to another. It's a layer of complexity wrapped in a layer of simplicity... kudos. I thought the whole werewolf thing was going to be a bigger issue (what was up with that... seriously?...) Given his surprise, Paul didn't do something to reacquire his old body. So how'd that happen... and does he still have his powers, or is that aspect of him still locked in those new garden decorations? Looking forward to things to come.
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Vampire, and an ancient one at that. Primrose in the early chapter already told that Vinyl aura is extremely uncomfortable for a young vampire such as Primrose.
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Paul/vinyl?
I ship it
I find myself wondering what happens next: Discord seems to be dead--where is the ghost alicorn though?
Yes, put the paranoid humans in the dungeon. This will end well.
Well, it might. A nice game of charades might help convince them not to try to break out before the spell is ready, though.
7212070 Vampire, She is a unicorn so she could use some magic to alter her appearance in the similar ways a pony could say dye their coats or mains, If she had been a changeling every human around her would have been set off by her presence by what has become a cannon to story trait between changelings and humans, And as far as her cutie mark goes we don't know if it is her original one or if it's been altered though it is a mark that would fight with either of the two names given.
7212070 she has been a vamp the whole time she is the oldest if not one of the oldest vamps
Paul is dead.
Wait what about the AXE?
7212555 well, they can't be allowed to roam, and they can't stay there. No one can understand them, and they don't trust anyone. what else would you do with them?
Note to Self, NEVER Buck with Vinyl
Well i saw the Vinyl thing from the beginning, i thought we where father in the show but okay. I hope she doesn't kill Paul, honestly this leaves me wanting so much more. Too many loose ends, this is as bad as a cliffhanger.
Wow, that ending was dark, fitting, but really dark.
*Tastes the story sauce*
*Smacks lips several times*
......Perfecto
super chapter with a really good twist.