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Sweet shit man.... 30K WORDS?!
Ponification? Eh, find out when I read I suppose. It is the only controversial thing I know of for fans of HiE... since HiE itself is controversial.
Third comment whot
29k words.... hehe, later.
Came out just in time. First day of my 31 day vacation. Reading time!
ITS HERE, ITS HERE! STRIKE UP THE BAND! IM SO EXCITED I COULD BLOW! HAND ME MY WHITE PANTS!
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Here you go bro! Lets, do this shit!
Wha... there was a FIRST season?
Lord almighty, the things I miss while I enjoy a story...
Well, cheers to the new season! A whopping 30k words to boot, too! (This coming from the guy that's successfully read an 800 page book in the span of 24hrs... What am I doing with my life, haha!)
29k chapter... Sorry but I'm turned on right now from that amount. Have strong need to read but have work in an hour... I'll have to restrain myself from reading... Dear Celestia this is hard
4782830 same here! just stoked that the next chapters out, i cant really concentrate, gotta go to work at 10
While I can see the ponification issue being controversial, in this case, it was presented in a plausible and believable manner, and at the end of the day, it was temporary anyway.
That being said...
Having read this chapter, and re-reading the one in which Max shows the gang his iPhone, I sincerely hope Twilight isn't thinking of using the Transformation Potion / the spell Celestia mentioned to turn herself into Max's ex in some misconstrued assumption that "well, she must be the kind of human Max would like".
From what we know of Twilight's character, it is an incredibly likely scenario, and with her skill in magic, it is not out of the realm of possibility that she would be able to succeed in transforming specifically into Max's ex, as opposed to whatever she would look like as a human as the potion/spell is likely supposed to do...
That said, such a scenario would make for an EXCELLENT chapter, just in time for Hearts and Hooves Day!
4782645 you know a story's gonna be good when theres a disclaimer
loved the new art, very good
Do you play Dargon Age? I see that you use Maker alot and assumed as such.
Yay new chapter, had no issue with the transformation, actually intrigued me quite a bit. Glad your feeling better.
By Profit, if you ship tease AGAIN, I will send you to Sparga and watch you be torn to shreds by my infested army. Just ask the FUCKING QUESTION!
4782853 thats why it is so hard to hold on and not to read
29K + he warns us that "shit" is gonna happen that not all people will like, IM GONNA LIKE IT, TO HELL WITH ANYONE WHO DOESN'T LIKE HIS WORK
but i have to wait
Yes... I almost cried at the end.
Just got to say, that is some great cover art .
I have not read the chapter yet but my heart is beating out of my chest out of worry. Ok, so you made some pretty bad OCs, some trivial banter, but this can't be worse than that right.... RIGHT!?
OK! slight panicking!
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I WAS RIGHT ABOUT ONE THING SO FAR!
Dear God this was a glorious chapter! And the feels at the end there man! The feels! It was truly worth the wait! We need more feels moments though. this one was beautiful but it felt rushed, not enough emphasis on it. Overal though, wonderful! Thanks!
30k words and one chapter...
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But by God it was worth the wait...
P.S. Cadance, you were so close. Just two more letters and the word 'you,' that's all we needed... Now if you'll excuse me.
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Ok, serious moment, then blame those retarded guards, it is their duty to guard Max, and instead they just let him go while they smoked weed or jerked off or something.
30k?!?!?!?! WTF?!?!? P.s nice new cover, I think its better than the last one And also second season? Why was I not aware of this?
i wonder if that list is a list of intelligent humans.
This... was a good chapter. I liked it.
The ponyfication wasn't all that bad for me but I felt kinda annoyed at the Discord one. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate it, just felt kinda... useless. What would have been funny as hell (but instead you went with dramatic) was that Max popped back into a human instantly... naked... in front of all those mare (and one stallion) to see.
I can see Shinning Armor now staring... then lowering his head in defeat.
Holy fuck done I... Actually forgot what I was going to say... Words... Bed... Glad your feeling better.
im just waiting for this to turn into planet of the apes but with humans. ALL HAIL CAES--I mean MAX!
realy great
New chapter?
30k words long?
Amazing storyline?
Oh mine god....oh mine god
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Yes! Just all my yes!
Awesome chapter. The waiting was totally worth it... even when I did not get any sleep.
You give a scientis how is capable to use magic like Twilight Sparkle a book about another scienetist how created new life with different body parts?
... sure, why not... nothing that could go wrong with that...
For this I give Max a double
All in all it was an epic chapter and I had a good laugh at some points. I was actually hoping for Shining and Dash to get Max in this dress^^ I wonder what Twilights reaction would be?
By the way, nice cover art^^
YES! YOU DID SOMETHING ORIGINAL! MY WORRIES ARE NOW GONE!.... (I hope)
Well... that was not jarate (jar based karate [aka a granade])... but a potion... and why did zecora's cousin have that... *thinks to another fan fic involving zecora being a pokemon and having a disguise of a zebra* well.. if it is like that, then it makes sense.
Well, sweet mother Theresa on the hood of a Mercedes Benz.
You gave us a 30 thousand word chapter.
And, even with all of that, you still find it within yourself to
TEASE THE EVER-LIVING DAYLIGHTS OUT OF US GOD FU**** DAMN IT YOU SON OF A *&@! WITH A BUCKET OF &%#@$#% AND &@!% IN A CASTLE FAR AWAY WHERE NO ONE WILL HEAR YOU &*!@$% &*&&@! *&&!^*&%@ !*&!*^#&.
Ahem. Good chapter.
I'm thinking the draconequus transformation had nothing to do with the potion, but was perhaps triggered by Cadence mentioning the L word
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Should be hooves.
I'm sure in Twi's perspective he should be saying "I'm such a good tease."
4782638 It's beautiful is it not?
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...dude you are the worst tease ever. JUST GIVE ME MY TWIMAX ALREADY! great chapter as usual btw
.... O-okay? That happened. I guess. Is the plot actually doing something now? I can't tell.
Ok... I can only read
"Twilight is in lo-" *INTERRUPTION*
So many times before it starts getting extremely. Annoying.
Best story ever
~JFK
Transformation = extra plot = longer story = moar epic chapters = 23 moar reasons why I love this story
Huh, that was your warning? Huh... I hate using Rage Faces but, this fits what I feel:
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Another great chapter, and a touching ending. Also the reason why I reacted very violently to Max transforming was for three reasons:
1. Un-originality: I mean, how many fics already exist where humans are turned into ponies? I know one that it's a diamond dog, but what about a griffin, dragon, draconequus (which you did, I love you more for that ) or even a brezzie!?
2. It just irks me for some reason, I don't know if I find it cheesy or stupid, it just feels wrong to me
3. PTSD: The last fic I read (which is the fic that-shall-not-be-named) when the human was turned into a pony... well to put it in 4chan terms:
>rape I was, very, very, VERY afraid of what you were going to do to Max.
(The only complaint I have is to change the wording of this message, I mean it sounds like your warning someone of a rape scene, gore-fest, blasphemic speeches, etc. I understand the warning, don't get me wrong, like the list explains there is a reason people don't like transformations of humans into ponies)
(now for the less serious part)
oh and...
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Imma kill you soon if you keep this shit up!
Max, learn from the sex master himself to get that mare! So here is a very SUBTLE message of what to do:
4783224 Nah, as a pony he has a Cutie Mark. This allowed him to manifest his super special talent... being a Chaos God.