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Wondering when this was coming.
now THAT was some of the closure that I was looking for! Fantastic!
You made this go REAL deep. Maybe a little TOO deep. You answered a bunch of questions but then you started a bunch more. That's really frustrating. And let me guess, Twilight's pregnant now? Please don't tell me it's going to be some freaky hybrid!
Other than that, woohoo an update! And so many questions finally answered, so many things resolved! But now for all those new questions and things to think about....
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Wow, nearly forgot this story existed. Happy with the way things turn and and hopefully this little 'gift' will allow him to talk again.
Don't stop now, there's still more check boxes and a sequel to do.
Thank you for the new chapter.
*GASP* IT'S ALIVE!
Bwahaha, I love it when fics incorporate bits of G1 into G4 lore.
Waited sooo long to finish up the asylum part.
And now I have to wait to find out what happens next.
-Ru
P.S.
Love the tie-in with Gen One. Nice touch!
I'm guessing immortality is the gift. I think that since, I'm pretty sure, Twilight is immortal her explaining that he's immortal too would make sense. Either that, or maybe the ability to communicate verbally.
Also, using Megan was genius.
Off topic: anyone saw this yet?
So Max's great aunt encountered Harmony...
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Calling it now, Twiggles is preggers.
Why am I not surprised that he is some how related to Megan Williams. Poor Tirek is not going to like that development.
Wait.....
I couldn’t have done it without you, and as such, I’m gifting you a little, hmmm… surprise. Hopefully you’ll enjoy it.”
I blinked up at her. “A surprise? What do you mean?”
Her smile turned into a large smirk. “That… is for your mate to tell you.”
................................ oh my god i love it
stayclassy
Oh hell yeah this was awesome!!! Well done stranger well done.
Need more that was not enough, you only gave us a taste! Sure some questions were answered but I need more to fulfill my needs!!! Anyways awesome chapter really looking forward to the next update, I may just re-read what there is so far in the meantime, it's been a while since I had started reading this amazing story of yours.
Ain't dead yet, eh?
Wrapping up to be a satisfying, if somewhat clichéd ending. But hey, there's enough new here to be interesting!
Looking forward to the finale!
Ironically I was rereading this story when I saw it had been updated. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I am so ready for Max and twilight to see each other! Time for some feels!
So I guess Primula will be showing up here soon and probably get into stuff/highjinx with her Cousin Flurry Heart?
Oh, so she's Fluttershy.
Hmm.
Is he magic now?
I'm betting magic.
Yay, it updated again!
Though now I'll have to begin the wait for the next chapter. Every rose, 'ey?
Yeah to new update. Oh and that was a nice twist there, with the purple glow I thought it was twilight. Keep up the good work.
Hmm... the nigh-similarity between him and Discord, but clear distinctions. Him looking like Max. Him claiming them to be brothers like another surprise antagonist from that one anime. Who is the one character that would perfectly fit that description that has been showcased, albeit briefly?... Max's draconequus form.
Huh, do you think he was responsible for Max planning to cause mischief even after hearing the threat that he might get castrated, before coming to the realization that Twilight wasn't trying to be a jerk?
Maybe Riddick had a Havoc of his own... Maybe that's why Discord's such a moron in this version!
{Riddick: Huh, you know what? Maybe Fluttershy is right. Even if I was treated pretty badly back in the day, maybe I could take this opportunity to actually befriend everyone, and learn that Friendship is Ma-
Discord: Nah, they should all die, lul!
Riddick: Hmm, excellent point. I'll go do that instead! What could go wrong?
*The bulk of one fanfic later*
Riddick: I hate you right now.
Discord: Hey, look on the bright side. You're getting sucked off by Vinyl Scratch.
Riddick:... Okay, maybe it's worth it just for the pun.}
I'd hate to be Havoc right now. He's basically sabotaging himself with every action he does. He could've laid low so Max wouldn't suspect anything, but he didn't. He could've made things more hospitable for Max so he wouldn't resist as much, but he didn't. And now we've got him putting in his own Fixer Sue to make sure Max doesn't act out of line when that counteractively causes Max to act out.
It would appear that he has no real desire to ensure that Max stays put so he can get it on with a bookish horse girl. I'd say that he's really just doing this just to mess with him.
Huh, so now we're in the Animatrix. Cool.
No, if you're not even going to try to win the game you created, why should he abide by them in the first place?
Could be worse, at least they're not French words that serve as an interim between beating up ghosts, neurotics, and boxing babies.
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And thus it was that a meme came full circle. Brava.
Try telling that to ancient Scandinavians.
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So... the Flying Spaghetti Monster is a tree?
So basically:
{Harmony: Being God isn't easy. If you do too much, people will become dependent on you, and if you do nothing, they lose hope. You have to use a light touch, like a safecracker or a pickpocket.
Max: Or a guy who burns down a bar for the insurance money!
Harmony: Yes, if you make it look like an electrical thing. When you do things right, people won't be sure you've done anything at all.}
... That works too, I guess.
I'm vaguely reminded of the Quagsire from PMD: Gates to Infinity from her "hmmm's".
I have to say, I'm impressed. You handled an element of your work with swiftness and maturity. Well done.
Also, this has been a longtime coming, but... liked.
Max fell out of the map.
Everytime Harmony said hmmmm I was reminded of the Thermians from Galaxy Quest.
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Foiled!
If only I was awake when this chapter was out I'd be the first to make this comment...
Also, flying spaghetti monster confirmed God!
Hi, Im Ygdrasil, but I got more wood out of being a Horse.
Blame Maxs libido.
This felt like it was inspired by 2001: A Space Odessy, with Max essentially being the starchild, the blueprint for humanitys next evolution
Loved this chapter and i will wait for the next
Thank God Max got off The Boat.
We must prevent that last box from being checked. The Story is just getting good!
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Same!
Under 20 chapters I think and you should have things fully wrapped up...at least enough to conclude one story.
FOR ONE THOUSAND YEARS I HAVE SLUMBERED! WHO DARES TO-
Oh sh¡t! Your human and you updated?!
ALL HAS BEEN FORGIVEN!!
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I CALLED IT FIRST.I KNEW SHE WOULD BECOME pregnant .LOL
good job i still want another chapter
Heh. It's Cthulhu's cousin. The one who enjoys charity work and happy endings in her novels. Those two haven't talked to each other in eons.
I've told you so. Still it was great chapter, sometimes you need a good cliché after all.
please give us at least one more sexytime scene before it ends, one where Twilight is in control of her emotions. Something sweet.
MOAR
Good chapter! "Asylum" gives me more than my fill of ambiguous reality in an insane asylum. Good to see this one got wrapped up quickly.
Plus we got a ton of exposition, confirmation of what we suspected was happening (Equestrian humans getting more intelligent) and the surprise twist that some of the weird things happening are NOT Discord's fault!
And back to the waking world next chapter, I assume. Can't wait!
Whew, another chapter? Damn, what a chapter this was! Whew... honestly, I have no idea what to comment to this new update. It was great, I enjoyed it, it was certainly a trip! Baaaah... hmm...
That bit near the end was... very interesting I honestly wonder how this story is gonna end, I really do.
Good show, Max, good show.
8265529 Max's Draconaquis form, or whatever it was, wouldn't be one for playing by the so-called "rules" in his own "game" within the nightmare realm in which he had trapped Max, because HE is a cheater, so why should Max abide by those same "rules". Sure, it's not honorable, but sometimes in order to survive dangerous, and deadly scenarios, even ones within your own mind, you have to do what you can, and what you need to do in order to survive. In those instances, whether something is honorable, or morally correct goes right out the window. Max can feel lousy about whether he did a dishonorable, or immoral thing later once he wakes up, and speaks to Twilight about it, gaining her insight on the situation. I'm sure she would have some, since she's an egghead, and even if she doesn't off the top of her head, she'll read one of the many books in her library, or even go to the Canterlot Archives to try to find an answer. She's such a
NERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRD!!!!
So many answered questions here.
So much explained! I am a happy person now!
8266480 It's not about "honorableness" or "morally right", it's about being "completely and utterly idiotic" or being "halfway decent". If this were a poker game, Havoc would've shown his entire hand and call out the cards he drew on every single occasion, all while verbally listing his strategy in real time.
I don't really care if Max "cheated", it's just that "Chaosbringers", it seems, are fundamentally stupid. If Havoc isn't even going to try to win the game (morally, or immorally), why should he give a fuck if Max "cheats"?
So harmony was the ghost that was hunting him? Huh cool
I'm so glad the whole psychiatric hospital thing wasn't stretched longer. It was so confusing and oof nowhere that it made it difficult to read. But the swift wrap up and explanation made it all better and connected it marvelously to the rest of the story.
Great job with this chapter, can't wait to see what's to come