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Ah, screamer type stories... Those always serve to make my day and ruin someone else's.
BWAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!! A perfect end to an awesome chapter! I can't think of much more to say. Thanks for an epic upload.
Aaand this is why you don't tell horror stories to an almost all-powerful being who raises the moon every night.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA trollestia strikes again!
Those were Okay creepypastas but this has to be the best one i've ever read
I've been lying down for hours now. It's 5:35 AM and there's not much I can do. You know what the worst part about my situation is? I'm in the same room with my parents. They keep looking at me, and I can't help but look back and try not to cry or scream. Their eyes are focused on me and their mouths are wide open. There's the strong scent of blood and I feel paralyzed with fear.
Here's the ehting, the second i make any hint that I'm not asleep anymore, I'm completely fucked. I will die and there's nobody around to save me. I've been trying ot think of a way out but the only idea I have is to rush for the door and run outside the front door and scream for help, hoping my neighbors hear me. It's risky, but if i stay here, I'll surely die. He's waiting for me to wake up and see his masterpiece.
You're probably wondering what's going on, I get ahead of myself sometimes.
About three hours ago, I heard screaming from the other side of the hosue, I got up and went to check on the noise before realizing I had to use the restroom, instead of doing the smart thing and investigating, I used the bathroom first. I could've gotten myself killed right then from my stupid actions. But I actually did my business and took a peek outside the bathroom. There was blood on the carpet. I got very worried and ran back to my rom, hiding under my sheets like the pussy I was. I tried to convince myself to go back to sleep, that it was just some really vivid dream or soemthing.
But I heard the bathroom door open. Like the terrified child I was, I peeked from under my blankets to see what was going on. I could see something dragging my dead parents into the room. It was not human, I can tel you that. It was hairless, with no eyes and no clothing, it walked like a caveman, with its back slouched as it dragged my parents. But this thing was much smarter than any caveman. It was aware of what it was doing.
It propped my dad up on the edge of my bed, and made him face me. It then sat my mother down in the chair and positioned her towards me as well. It then started rubbing its hands upon the wall, staining them with blood and then drew a circle with the devil's pentagram on it. This thing had made what it probably would call a masterpiece. To finish it off, it scribbled a message onto the wall that I could not read in the darkness.
It then positioned itself under my bed, waiting to strike.
The scariest thing now, my eyes have adjusted to the darkness since then and I can read the message on the wall. I don't want to look at it, because it's terrifying to think about. But I feel I need to see, before I'm killed.
I peek at the creature's masterpiece.
"I know you're awake."
yay weird endings i love them
Mien Gott... Dat ending.
SOOOOO AWESOME :D
Funniest chapter yet!
5/5 laughing Rainbows.
Top Lel.
>*I'd like to thank iloveportalz0r for editing this chapter.
Hey, what happened to Holy Macintosh? ;_;
Two things:
One: STOP MAKING ME LOOK BAD! All these 10k chapters are gonna make people look at me and think I'm lazy.
Two: I can't wait to get to this point in my story, because boy oh boy will Richard scare the shit outta the ponies... Max was at least good enough to make his Big Daddy suit less scary for them. Richard's the type that will go all-out, even getting in-character for his stunt....
3659510 was getting his laptop fixed at the time. I don't believe he edited this chapter, but I could be wrong...
3659515 I was just thinking to myself that with all these long chapters, I can't go back to shorter chapters without looking lazy as well...
BEST!!! ENDING!!! EVER!!! :D
Lawl. Great chapter.
scary nice
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This one has kept me awake entire nights before, and I am one twisted motherfucker.
Pretty good stories, even if you didn't make them.
My favorite was the mirror one.
And oh damn, that cliffhanger scene.
The closest thing to creepypasta I know is SCP Foundation, and that's kind of difficult to tell as a story Maybe I could tell them about Shalebridge Cradle, if I remembered enough.
And now it seems even Celestia isn't adverse to a little human loving Or she's just trolling
OH MY CELESTIA... Do continue.
Celestia is going to tell Twilight what happened and then Twilight is going to burst into flames from her blush.
3659539 Not sure, eh? Ask him about it
3659710 meh... I'll just credit him anyways.
Molly
3659727 butt wat if ur rong ;_;
3659737 Fine... I'll go double check...
Love Luna's reaction!
3659745 <3
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I love this story now, and there is nothing you can do to stop me from loving it, and when it described Max's costume, I fangasmed too.
Oh oh, I have a horror story too, it's a one-liner,
"She will find out what you masturbate to."
Man, I was expecting some SCP shit, or maybe Slenderman. Guess that woulda been too much for the ponies though.
Damn, he should've told them the story about the ugly barnacle that would have scared the hell out of them...though, I think it's probably too morbid for them.... since you know everybody died.
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Well, that went differently than expected.
That was better than expected!
Finishing with a scream is a nice touch. Startling the audience after sufficient suspense-building provides a very effective short-term scare.
That said, the first two are ill-suited to this kind of storytelling, as they rely entirely on existential horror and are short enough that there is no connection with the characters.
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ALL! MY!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!
And dat ending! Molestia AND trollestia all in one!!!!
3659624 hopefully
I rather prefer The Tale of The Monkey's Paw; a tale I learned a long time ago around a campfire while I was in the Boy Scouts.
Over a hundred years ago,a British couple of modest means lived in the industrial city of Manchester. The couple's only son had moved out of the house several years ago to work in one of the local factories, and the couple lived a quiet life. The husband's uncle had gone to India in his youth, and settled down in Delhi. He was in the habit of sending his favorite nephew odd trinkets and knickknacks, so it was no surprise when the couple received a package from Uncle. Inside, though, was a bit of a grisly object. It was a mummified paw from some kind of monkey on a leather thong. Along with the paw was a short letter, advising the husband that the paw was magical and when held would grant three wishes. However, while the magic would grant the wish, how it would grant the wish was uncontrollable. Deriding the note as a superstitious prank being played by the uncle, the couple jointly grasped the paw and wished for a million pounds. Thinking nothing more of it, the mother put the paw back in the box and put it away.
A few days later, the couple gets some horrifying news. Their son had been badly mangled and killed in an accident in the factory where he worked. A year ago, the son had taken out a life insurance policy in case of accident for a million pounds and named his parents the beneficiaries. The couple was devastated, but the mother took it especially hard, seeing it as her fault for making the wish. Day by day she grew more despondent and hysterical. Finally, one day she got a manic gleam in her eye. Before the husband could stop her, she ran to the box with the monkey's paw. Taking it out, she said in a loud, strident tone "I Wish My Son Was Returned To Me!" The husband was able to get her to put it down and led her back to her chair and hot her calmed down. While he was heating a teakettle of water to make some tea, he heard a faint, strange sound. Shuffle-TH-ump. Shuffle-TH-ump. It seemed to be getting louder, as if it was coming up the street. The mother jumped up and ran for the front door.
Shuffle-TH-ump. Shuffle-TH-ump. It sounded like it was getting louder, as if it was coming up the garden path. Suddenly realizing what it was and turning a deathly pale upon the realization, the husband took out the monkey's paw one last time and said "I Wish My Son Was Back Where He Belongs!" The monkey's paw flashed briefly and then crumbled into dust with the final wish. Just then the wife opened the front door to find...
A pile of blood-soaked bandages and funerary linens, still stained with soil.
I can't stop laughing. That was bloody priceless. My ribs hurt now
you know what the scariest part of this was? Celestia right at the end
You used my favorite scary story at the end. This makes me happy.
MUHHAHHAHAHAHAHUAHSUDHASUFHAUSAUISFHIAUHDFN
this need some cellysecks
RUN MAX! RUN FOR THE HILLS!
just keeps getting better and better. in fact i find myself looking through my favorites just to see if theres a new chapter. kinda wonderin what the endin is gonna lead to. :P
All I can say is Yes, very yes.
Spike had the BEST COSTUME!!!
But the first and the last scene was not less EPIC!!! I hope you start the next chapter not with a time jump but from the last scene in this Chapter. I want to read how Max is reacting about Celestias comment^^
And the Idea with the foalsitting service from Max was just AWESOME!!! (The cage remembers me when I had a babysitter...)
And now, excuse me please, I read the Chapter again now... and again... and again...