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4111484 What chapter?
4111493 Oh goodness, you troll.
...Aussie Hard-Dick. Really. I thought that was just you messing with us and the link would go somewhere else, but nope, that's actually his name. I am honestly sort of impressed.
Yes...OH YES!!!!!
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The chapter after this one! As if that wasn't obvious
Ponies,They get terrified of something as simple as a phone,Because they too fear the unknown
You... you little shit... I can't stop reading this...
"Lol. It just my apple iPhone."
"You're...what?"
"Its mine. A piece of technology from my world. Oh hey, listen to this, watch too!"
*Plays DeathMetal music video*
"Pretty rad right?"
THE JOYS OF TECHNOLOGY!
Very nice chapter. I liked the interaction between Max and Primrose.
As a side note: I DEMAND MORE PRIMROSE!
Also the bits with Lyra are always so interesting, gives me a bit of time to try to connect all the pieces of this elaborate puzzle you've set up.
Keep up the great work!
He got his Ipod back!!!!
As soon as that phone showed up, this played in my head:
Oh shit Apple famboyism incoming
4111493 The one I'm going to smack you with.
For God's fucking sake, playing and toying with your readers with a carrot on a stick for so fucking long is gonna have consequences.
I hate you, your kind have a very special place in hell.
God damn I can't believe it... This is freaking frustrating.
Alright I want to be mad, really, but I just can't. You better whip up something Shakespeare would be jealous of soon otherwise I'll ... I'll..
...End up waiting for the next chapter again.
Oh sweet Luna I ship them so hard— Primrose and Max. And Twilight and Max. And Luna and Max. And Rainbow and Max.
Basically just please keep writing you're doing such an awfully good job I absolutely love it with all my heart I seriously read these the minute I realize the notification is there on my phone which is usually the moment I get it at around ten or ten thirty and I just love it so much thank you for making my life just that much more satisfying
Oh, god...
Celestia's like, "Please help; we don't know what this is, it could be a terrible thing of mass destruction!"
And Max is like, "Chill, babe, that's my Cellphone!"
And Celly's like: "Buh-Buh-Buh-Buh..."
And Twilight's all:
i hope he puts it in airplain mode or it will die soon.
took her a while to simply ask the weird human about the weird artifact!
*Everyone interprets his shock as the artifact being something dangerous.*
*Someone smashes his phone out of fear of it hurting him.*
"YOU'RE SAFE NOW MAX!"
*Max begins to cry.*
"DON'T WORRY MAX, WE'RE HERE FOR YOU!"
4111848 ...~god damn it, Luna~...
Awwww yussss. Now the real fun begins...
... Wow. I wish I could be mad at how you handled the whole cellphone thing and Celly getting uber worked up over it... But then you place any our governments in a similar possition with an alien artifact and I suppose something similar would happen, just without quite the level of panic. I mean, for all she knows that could be some kind of super-bomb or biomagical weapon or something that was just waiting to kill off or brutally injure her little ponies, and she's got no idea on how to deal with it.
She's probably going to flip shit she learns it's just a device built for entertainment and convenience by the folk in Max's world.
Meanwhile, Max is going to show Luna a Mario Land emulator and Gamer Luna will be canon.
First thing I would do when I got my phone back would be checking my email.
I can only imagine what Max will say first. Oh, the possibilities!
"Well... It looks like ponies fear the unknown too!"
"It's a bomb."
"Princesses, this is pretty much a hyper-advanced book. The only danger is that you might stay up too late."
"It's a transformation device. I use it to change into an armored superhero called Den-O."
"...BWAHAHAHAHA!"
"It's futuristic toilet paper."
"...Princesses, this is mine. It's a communication device that can also be used for storing information and playing games. It isn't harmful. At all."
"It's a sex toy."
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Or he can ask the ponies to shock the phone for instant charge
So we have his dead phone back. I wonder if they can find a way to charge it with magic for power. Also, we're over 250k words in. Just have them freaking kiss already. How long are you going to string that relationship along. Sheesh, Max has to admit he likes her since Luna's world basically revealed that for everyone to easily see.
On a different note: I like the weird confusing babble that acts as prophesy. I like the title of "Oblivious king on his wooden throne." Now I just want to know why his throne is wooden. Ack, I'm going to go do research on the meaning of wood. CURSE YOU BUZZ LIGHTYEAR!...I mean CURSE YOU MAX!
*see's phone*
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But there is no internet in Equestria........
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
nooooooooooooooo.com/vader.jpg
4111953 But what if his phone is actually Frenzy from transformers?
Awesome he got his phone back. Perhaps they will can hear what Max sounds like by listening to his old voice mail message.
Also am I the only one who googled "Radeck" just to see if the author was pulling a fast one of some kind?
I got a Silence of The Lambs feel from Lyra. Had her tied up like Hanable Lecter
I laughed.
Priceless, just priceless.
Oh goodie. Now he can play flappy bird and return to having his soul crushed by it.
Maybe I am looking WAAAAAAY to into this, but I am thinking that this phone is actually a harbinger of doom, one that those of our world would never expect, the vehicle through which the master of the statues will make his commands. But what better way to call someone than a phone?
This is the second story I've read where the ponies freak out over a smartphone.
Now they shall know the extent of Human intelligence.
So basically it's almost confirmed that there are
9998 more sapient humans in Equestria.I just wonder why none of them surfaced so far. Or maybe they did and their masters know about their human-pets being intelligent, but simply reluctant to inform the government.
Wouldn't be surprised if Van is one of these intelligent humans.
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Well from the look of it, Max was labeled as 'oblivious king'
It possibly mean that he either be a leader of these 99 sentient human, just he don't realize it yet
Lol I was reading radeck as redneck.
can't wait for the next chapter!
As soon as i read tick tock goes the clock I thought of the episode in doctor who where it is April 22 5:02 pm forever and always, specifically the scheme where Winston Churchill, the holy roman emporer, whose. Capital is in London goes tick tock goes the clock the old song says. Then reread it and saw the master. Instantly thought of this guy:https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRpUiCVEWGuUHN48yL-YRPM4hmi3jtUUu1iiZgWWeCylyhDsDg
Remember him?
Great chapter, I especially like how you ended it. Laughter in: 3...2...1.........Whenever the next chapter comes out.
"Maybe so, but that doesn't mean that I'm wrong."
Lyra's hypothesis on the origin of humans may not actually be all-that far-off from the truth, seeing as how Max entered their world. I think Lyra and Twilight should collaborate on creating a book. Lyra can dictate, and Twilight can pen the words, as Lyra is strapped to a gurney. She may be mad, but her obsession can contribute to pony knowledge about humans.
Way to stroke the ego of the Princess of the Night, Max.
Plz hurry next part :D
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FUCKING FUCK, YOU FUCK!
Of COURSE you put the iPhone on a cliffhanger! And now, since you have Dinky and Locke and Lunar Rebirth going too, I'm probably gonna have to wait a month for the next update!
*Sigh* This is what I get for liking an author. They play with me. Like a cat plays with a little, dying mouse.
Seriously though, I'm only mad because I love you.
4112363 Give 'em some slack, and reel 'em in. Just give 'em some slack, and reel 'em in!
This gave me pause for a few minutes.
Max: How in the world am I getting 5 bars.....
Primrose: Magic?
Max gives a deadpaned look at primrose~
Twilight: This can revolutionize the world!
Celestia: What.... All this for a communication device.......
4112194 What confirms another sentient human?
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Flappy Bird was not around when Max got to Equestria. Angry Birds though, are total possibility.
Alright, why would Celestia plead Max to help her with a phone, and why would she be so worked up about it? She could just ask him, why all the drama?
Also... Stop dancing around and make them kiss already!
Anyway, great chapter!