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YESSSS!!!! Its finally out!!!! Great chapter my friend. I'm confused on how the ponies understood the phone but not him... but screw miniscule bits of the fic that I question. You are an amazing writer. So just keep doing what your doing.
Max you beautiful man, a chapter on a Thursday... This makes studying for finals way better.
This can go two ways:
1. Max gets de-flowered.
2. Max walks out of the room with all the male humans clutching their go-nads.
oh damn
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I'm quite sure I changed that.
5900036 ...it's 'internally' in the GoogleDocs. I wonder what happened.
5899858 10,257'th, though! That one hasn't been used!
5900132 Eh, no. It's been heavily implied that Stacker is Derpy's cousin, not Rainbow's.
Two wonderful chapters. If I could give this story another like and favorite I would.
Aaand... Your Human And You and Lunar Rebirth are in the feature box again.
Welp... max is screwed.
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You are sooooo right. Finals week is kicking my butt and I needed a pick me up for my studying.
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That makes the whole "flying upside-down" thing much more sensible, eh?
... You have my most sincere sympathy Max, you really do. And I am certainly not having a laughing fit with my spittle flying everywhere right now, because that would be wrong.
On a side note, you should really consider making a story with these kinds of chapters in mind. What I mean is, basically putting little shorts and snippets together into a story, some that you wrote for fun or in your spare time and stuff that you can't put in the main story since it might not mix well or because the shorts you have in mind ignore some elements in canon. Like more pairings for Max for example...
But anyway, I think it might be pretty entertaining to read if the contents of the story are anything like The Sunbutt Saga either way, so I hope you'll at least consider it. Thanks.
What just happened?
2 Chapters? Bruhhhhhh I got school tomorrow.
5900238 screw school its reading time!!!
Oh shit......will Maxine be fucked so hard or will he/she escape into Rarity's clutches??
Then a loud "nope!" was heard, followed by the sound of a door opening and slamming, and a pained chirp.
5900238 I have holidays for 3 more days!
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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Everything in this story screams of poor communication
Maddening, but required
Ah well, 17 chapters in one sitting, time to take a break
"When a guy turns into a girl, he suddenly wants 80 dicks in him."
5900720 "with this said, it sounds like Max makes the same chirps as the equestrian humans so it is possible he can understand them."
Equestrian humans don't make chirps. The only one who did is the girl Max killed then. And that is because she was Terran.
cant stop laughing
good chapter.
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There are chimera, sea serpents, cows, minotaurs, gryphons and dragons who all speak the same language. And they all have radically different bodies from ponies, with different societies and hundreds of years of history, yet they speak perfect Equestrian just fine. And when the girls went into that other world in EQ, they all spoke the same language as the inhabitants, even though they were from another world. Just like how the Sirens did when they got banished the first time. So it stands to reason that due to the world's natural state of "harmony" which fills the land, everyone speaking the same language is how it's meant to be, and something else fiddled with humans to make them even less capable of speaking than cows. Now perhaps our brave hero lucked out, maybe he has a natural immunity. Or maybe Discord did it to mix things up. But the whole "from another world" might not inherently be a barrier given what we know of the land. Maybe all humans should be speaking Equestrian, but something prevents them the way it now does to our long suffering protagonist.
And you may argue "it's ridiculous to say that everyone would just speak the same language in the entire planet". But Tirek and the Changelings do and they're from other countries and, in the latter case, possibly another world given how Chrysalis speaks. A natural single language would be simple and elegant. And, again, tie into the idea of harmony. This is, after all, a land in which forces such as love and kindness are literal magical powers. It's not so much a stress.
Totally forgot what she did... This is great.
Are the interludes what happen after the story beacause max can talk in them
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From what I understand, yes.
(I think the author said so, but I had read the comment -which is a little blurry in my memory- over 4 months ago, so I can't be sure. But I definitely remember a comment along those lines.)
sweet
5900072 My guess? Celestia charged it with magic. Maybe if it had kept a full charge, they would have heard weird chirping noises.
Max - magic = Equestrian human language
Phone + magic = Equestrian pony language?
Perhaps (Careful children, the grow ups are doing some serious Starswirl Level theoretical magic here) Max + a powerful magical amulet that contains some of Twilight's magic = Max with Equestrian pony language?
I'll let Twilight do the calculations on that.
5900698 It's not really autistic, as it is a quirk. Some people chew on their nails, some play with their hair. Max chews on his lip and cheek when nervous or confused. It's a bad habit, not a sign of autism. Plus, during this chapter he suffers a slight panic attack brought about by a case of PTSD.
5900705 Usually when something bad happens, you tend to blame the person responsible for it, even if it wasn't entirely their fault. If you're out driving with your buddies, and your friend Dave says to take the highway, only for you to get stuck in a traffic jam, everyone in the car is probably going to blame Dave for their predicament. It isn't really Dave's fault, but he still gets blamed.
There was no way Celestia could have known what was going to happen with the Elements, but everyone still blames her. That doesn't mean that they are all mad at her. Tension is just high. Twilight's already apologized for her behavior, and Luna is just concerned that Celestia was too trigger happy. They still love her; they're just a little grumpy at the moment.
5900996 Max is a forgiving guy. It's in his nature.
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But If they think about it for a moment ; The elements actually worked and did what they wanted, getting rid of the bad chaos magic even if removing it also removed some of its positives like its translating.
Having them forgive her for taking a risk they all agreed to before hand, that Celestia talked to Max about and got his permission. That then worked out really well overall. But then still everyone saying Celestia is still a bad pony for taking risks, and she should never do it again?
The last things she said are
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That is not what a Pony who did the right thing that worked should be saying.
They love and forgive her sure ; but I don't think she has anything to apologize for.
#CelestiaDidNothingWrong #EveryOtherPonyIsDumb
5901940 True, and I agree that Celestia did nothing wrong, but you have to realize that you are thinking about it with a calm and collective mind. Max got blasted by the Elements, knocked across the room, and started chirping like an Equestrian human. This causes the others to freak out, Twilight especially, and, in a panic, she immediately blames the first thing that came to mind: Celestia. And they aren't saying that Celestia is a bad pony. Twilight's freaked over what happened to Max, making her emotional. Luna's upset because she believes that Celestia didn't think her plan through all the way.
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Just going to paste "I agree that Celestia did nothing wrong" over everyone's comments now
But honestly I can forgive them their freak outs and lashing out, its all very emotional. I just didn't want to see this as ignored going forward and left as something they all shouted at her for being wrong about.
Just reading the chapter they all keep talking down to Celestia right to the end. Until she's just in a puddle of self pity.
Celestia deserves a strong positive narrative moment.
5902289 It is true that she has an unfortunate name(), but a Windbreaker is actually a thin outer coat designed to resist wind chill and light rain.
5902078 and you know what happens when twilight gets stressed, explosions happen! Figuratively or otherwise
Saw this updated on my way home and when I got home my Hawaiian Baby Woodrose seeds had come in, tonights going to be a good night
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5903700 The plots moving, we just don't know where it's going at the moment. I mean, seriously. Something big happens in the last two chapters, and you complain that the plot isn't going anywhere? If the Coming Dawn and the Archmage's story arches are anything to go by, shits about to hit the fan real soon.
Either he's going to get seriously wrecked up the ass, va-jayjay, and mouth, or so many men are about to get fucked up. Hard.
5904192 Why not both?
5907846 I think it's more of a split personality.
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Great points! I guess in a way too EVERYTHING can talk. I've lived on a farm and I've seen animals under my care communicate with each other. Like chickens have over a hundred specific noises they make identifying food and dangerous predators that they have to teach their chicks. It's not instinctual.
Equestrian humans could be similar where they have a learned 'language', evident by the whistles and chirps, but like with chickens, we don't really hear words come out of it. Either Max can understand them cause it's instinctual or...he just can, or it's something he has to learn too. If anyone has EVER fostered an orphan puppy or a kitten and then introduced them later to their own kind, obviously theirs going to be misunderstandings. Either way, Max is going to have a hard time.
Story started with two plots moving at a run and ends with a plot about to be moved in a rythmic motion.
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Because one is something that I firmly believe no heterosexual guy wants to ever experience, and will fight like a demon of the highest (or lowest, depending on who you ask) order in order to prevent it from happening. He will either win, and preserve his manliness, or lose, get raped, and the curse of knowing a females side of pleasure is forever haunt his every waking thought in the dark recessed corners of his mind.
I'm left wondering if Max will be able to understand the local humans to a certain degree now...
5910449 I'm not saying his HAD to fit that description, I was simply agreeing that it made sense