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The chapter was not that bad...
it furthered the story.
How mnay more chapters till he sees celly agan?
NEW CHAPTER! BEST BEGINNING OF THE WEEKEND!!
I couldn't find why you hate this Chapter. I like most the scene with Cheerilee and then with the Crusaders.
When I find that Human that did that to Sweetie Belle... I dont know WHAT I do but it will HURT!!!
If he won't save them i'll be disappoint. Sure, ponies are jerks to humans but their regular humans are just, well, animals. Those humans would run away alright. Our dude is not an animal, he's a person who have the responsibility to protect those small ones, even though it's kinda their fault for getting him in the trouble at the first place.
Why the hell doesn't he have a staff? It's an inconspicuous weapon that you can pass put as a walking aid. I'd get paranoid without some sort of self-defense tool. Sure, it might not be enough to take down the manticore, but still some buff to "balls" stat. Also, Twilight magicked his collar to act as alarm, why not cast some location spell on him and enchant some pendant to act as alarm if damaged/destroyed?
Poor Sweetie, this stuff is just wrong.
3397624 probably put down already, the same as with human who attacked one of the spa sisters.
3397527Your avatar implies otherwise.
This is looking more and more like something was done to the humans of Equestria to make them the way they are. I mean from his tests this chapter we learned a human is capable of remembering things and simple logic (demonstrated with the hand game and the fact that the human never got it wrong.) There are a few animals on earth capable of this level of problem solving but very few of them can do it right off the bat with no previous experience.
I'm banking on something erasing their long term memory and giving them animal like traits. Some kind of spell or enchantment, passed down hereditarily or maybe even AoE?
A lot of what's been desribed is contradictory and indicative of two different levels of intelligence. We have the humans in the early chapters described as sitting in their own waste (something only domesticated (only due to the confined spaces) or very dumb animals do.) it's a pretty basic instinct not to set in your own waste as it quickly causes disease.
Then we have the human in this chapter capable of memory and basic logic, like a very smart ape.
So far the only thing that makes sense is that they are being affected by something more than just "humans are animals in Equestria."
Anyone else got any theories?
always difficult to recover from a mauling. i sympathize with sweetie. damn thou, 3 manticores? thats just nuts
Because, even if we're supposedly mindless animals, our swag is too ridonkulous.
3397599 Soon. I'm actually outlining it right now...
3397633 Twilight actually forgot to get him a replacement collar, so no wards or spells. Oops...
3397683 Discord. It's always his fault.
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yeah seriously no idea why ponies want to rut with humans. but that moment with AJ gave me a bit of boner. probably because i'm into that kind of thing. human x any sapient being is supergood in my book.
3397792 It could be they're just desperate. I mean, the mare to stallion ratio is about 8 to 2. Plus, we're sexy, even as animals, we're sexy. Huge confidence booster if ya think about it.
No! Not Red!!! Oh well on with the story.
3397683 theory, Max arriving in equestria is slowly affecting all other humans, and humans that interact with him more have more of the effect hit them i.e. the red head, she had already kind of met him before she showed the ability to cry. also on another note FUCK YOU CLIFFHANGER KUVSHKLJOEIGFYUCMSCDJV
Normally I would stay away from a premise like that...
Hmmm....
Tracking... for now...
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so, um, can i... like horses that way then?
At least you're not as lazy as me, I haven't updated my number one story since May.
Also you spelled definitely wrong.
3397922 Ummm... whatever floats your boat bro. Humans in equestria and humans from earth share, at least, extremely similar looks. Put a suit on one of those humans and you could hardly tell the difference. Make a legitimate horse's coat purple...
Yeah... no. No lemon pledge.
fucking cliffhangers
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's cool. i understand that horses are animals. well then, better love the hell out of adorable imaginable sapient magical ponies!
3397966 that, for some reason, have an unfathomable lust for violent non-sapient humans...
Ponies are VERY kinky....I respect that.
3397924 Thanks...I no spell correct while running on 3 cans of Monster and no sleep
3397975 weird part is, wouldn't humans have a significally smaller "parts" compared to ponies? while i can think that might be pleasurable for stallions, i doubt that mares could settle for something smaller that moderate unless they're really desperate. also i shuddered at that moment with Blueblood at the beginning. i really don't want to know about him
stuffing his hoersdick in mans' buttholes.Dammit
Awwwww, Reading about what happend to poor Little Sweetie Bell nearly broke my heart.
3397996 Okay...time to gross everyone out.
The average horse is around 7 feet from hoof to head. The average size horse dick, when excited, is around 18 inches. The ponies in Your Human and You are around 3 1/2 feet tall from hoof to head. That's half the height, so the average dick size would be around 9 inches.
Humans, on average, are 5.6 inches in length. On average. That means size can vary. Same with ponies.
...I have really got to stop looking this shit up
SO new Chapter every week huh?
AWSOME!!!
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thankyou for not making me do the calculations.
still, Blueblood and those poor human buttholes
Hey, I give you points for at least ACKNOWLEDGING, in-story, things that don't make sense about the humans in Equestria and about...well, uh, pony-human relations that are pretty much bestiality...having your main character doing real research about humans and their history in Equestria is a step in the right direction. Do not be TOO hard on yourself. You appear to have finally found a "groove" in how you're writing this.
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So I'm the size of a po--
I mean... uhhh.... HEY LOOK, HALLEY'S COMET!
I hope he didn't just leave the crusaders and spike there like that.
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I had made something that roughly resembled a miniature backpack, only in reverse. Instead of going on my back, it sat comfortably on my stomach and was easy to reach, even with a shirt on.
So he made a fannypack, is that what you are trying to say?
And now would be a good time to make use of his newly found combat experience.
Go for the eyes(giant eyes = giant weak spot), the back legs (those seem weak as hell) and the tail (A scorpion tail doesn't do well if bent the wrong way).
Also, I really want Max to pick up Sweetie Belle and place her on his head.
Ps. It was probably blueblood that set the whole thing up. Even if that is incorrect, make sure to kill him off.
Man, Max has the worst luck. Also, Sweetie Belle needs some serious cuddles.
Bah, this chapter was fine, and Sweetie Bell's fear was delicious.
3398423 in my headcanon Scootaloo is my fav headgear
be throwing him into the pit of horny humans.
Death by Snoo-Snoo...
Or Poontah!
3398322 also that. just forgot to write it.
3398499 A pegasus is most likely lighter than a unicorn and an earthpony.
But Scoots doesn't really need positive attention from a human.
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maybe not in this story, but she's kinda mostly an orphan in fanon.
3398524 I am well aware, but I think being traumatized and losing half your eye sight trumps being an orphan. At least being an orphan in Equestria.
ps. BB needs to be torn so wide open that Lunas moon fits inside of him.
>I stretched, making my back popping several times
>They would even hunted “wild” humans as game
>There was no records of a griffon keeping a human
>and you’re punishment might not be as severe
Some errorz 4 u
*Max is never gonna get home because he's always going to be recovering from an attack from here on out.*
Being Max is suffering.
3397875 Did you even read the previous chapters?
3400372 Phone...what phone? I don't know what you are talking about...
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As I read the last chapter there still was a slimmer of hope that she survived. The main character wasn't 100 % sure that he killed her. As I pointed out in the comment in the last chapter choking someone to death with your hands is hard.
This is one of the reasons that quite a few serial killers used this, because it meant that the victim had a smaller chance of dying and can wake up so the sadistic ritual can be repeated.
I probably put more into it than there reasonably could be, but both in this story and 'chains' I feel that it could be a very interesting angle that there was a human romantic interest. This could also give Twilight some competition since the isn't any from the other ponies.
I still love both stories, just have a bad habit to see and hope for a story angles that isn't there.
3397996 They are not horses bro. They are more anatomically similar to a Shetland pony. Not a full grown horse... I'm not gonna check the 'size' of a Shetland pony.
3398066 Umm... And you have to take into account of the difference in shape between a horse and a humans-
Goddamnit now you got me doing it!
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people are calculating magical ponies' genetals size ITT.
my work here is done.
3401721 Congratulations.
3404685 I didn't make it clear for a reason, because I just couldn't decide...but if I had to choose, he pissed...