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NEW CHAPTER!!!!!
#puts on sunglasses#
Better get reading...
Discord acting normal? Things are worse than I thought.
Also when I first read about the crater I expected a line mentioning a strange hammer...
One does not just sleep off B-dubs wings. Unless you've been hospitalized, you have not consumed enough of those delicious bits of heaven.
I also have to admit, I was kind of hoping that Max would start doing some "big brother" type stuff to Armor, like say a nuggie or a wet willy during his little duel. I can just imagine Cadence's response
<YAY! Breeze is back!
Good chapter!
Waiiiit.
Twenty years...this makes no sense. You keep trying to cast humans as kind of an equivalent to CHIMPS in this world, with the "cannot swim" thing...
EXCEPT THE AVERAGE LIFESPAN FOR A CHIMPANZEE IS 40 TO 45 YEARS. How in the hell can the average lifespan for humans be 20 in this world?! That doesn't make ANY biological sense for them to barely last longer than a HORSE!
Hodor dodor bodor
ze breeze wants ze hyooman fer herself.
Yay! Update!
Loved the small "fight" between Max and SA.
yay sunny is back!
As always, as expected, a helluva chapter, man.
Outta boy!
Lovin the Twilight's POV.
Waitin' for another chapter.
Keep it up bro!
3198477 Awwww...does someone want spoilers to the story already?
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Even THAT is a plot point? Really? (Looks confused)
I would like to add something though...focusing on Twilight's life from her perspective was not just heartwarming and allowed us to see more into her psyche...it was a good change of pace that allows us to see the same story but from a different and interesting perspective. You might want to do more like these.
I like the scene with Shining Armor and Max hitting eacht other in the Background.
Cant wait to hear more about Sunny Breeze.
And Discord acting normal?
IT'S THE APOCOLYPSE!!!
Yay sunny returns!
loved the whole rough housing going on between shinning and max
My face everytime a new chapter comes out>>>24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mdyywkPhtk1rnhw2fo1_500.png
After Twilight's little "episode", all I could think of was this:
Uhh... Is that the mare from the first few chapters? The one that sold him to Celestia?
3200209 Yes...yes it is...
Hmmm, Sunny Breeze returns the plot thikens.
3198366 Whoever likes this story, if they be worthy, shall gain the request for...Moar
MOOOAAAR!
Gawd I love this story! It's the only story that I constantly check for new chapters on
So are the humans cavemen or just slightly under evolved?
3201549 Yes. Yes...
Nice cover image!
3203789 Thanks! Made it myself.
dude this chapter had laughing like crazy! moar moar moar!!!
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3201984 Yes it does seem like that doesn't it? Facial structure and all that from the descriptions given to us would or should indicate that the humans here are Cro-Magnons rather than unintelligent 'Planet of the Apes' homo sapiens. Though I'm not so sure about the teeth though, I can't remember what the dental structure for Cro-Magnons were supposed to be like.
So far this story is quite interesting. i read it all in an hour, so far it was pretty good, though there were some errors, and in a case or two i couldn't understand what you were trying to say. Still, i could care less for grammar. So far it is pretty good, but is twilight an alicorn or no? But I am enjoying the story immensely (though i hope discord isn't mixed up in this... Give him a break :(.. and for the love of god dont say anything)
I foresee Luna finding out that he is intelligent in the near future.
i get the feeling that discord is trying to free humans in some way shape or form.. maybe to cause chaos or just because. hes also probably the one who took max from his world and dumped him here to help/. discord prob took his voice so he coudlent easily be spotted as an intelligent human so max can work subtly to his own goals.. the humans you describe sound like early man.. maybe 2 to 3 thousand years ago.. im also freaking the fuck out because my name is max and i feel like im just reading my future :P
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That could be due to several reasons, many fics include a certain magical field. What if for example this field has seeped into these humans by means of what ever degraded their brains and has caused them to age rapidly?
It could be becouse of the food their given. Maybe the humanfood (similair to dogfood) is actually a tad poisonous to them to increase sales.
Or we are dealing with a whole different sub-species of humans unique to this realm.
Who knows, all i know is that Twi would have a fieldday researching the causes
With the description of the Equestrian Humans so far, im willing to bet that they are actually, in fact, Neanderthals
Or maybe they are ponies, cosplaying as humans... CONSPIRACY!
If this story ends the way I think it will, it'll be one of the best stories ever :) t/\i/\m/\e
So he likes ponies treating him like an animal?
I'm a bit confused here, the way you describe Shining Armor jabbing Max in the side, it sounds like nothing more than a love tap. Then you turn around and say that he was hitting hard enough to bruise his sides? Is Max's skin made out of tissue paper or something?
3261288 When you are wrestling on the ground, you tend to bump into stuff that causes bruises. Twilight just assumes it's because of Shining Armor.
Sunny Breeze.
Discord.
Luna (known to be involved before given description and talent.)
Max. (Duh.)
Crazy female woman outside Sugarcube Corner. (Amorphous hive mind humanity?)
This was a big chapter. Do not get me wrong (I meant informational wise.). I am riveted to this story. Just in a single conversation (that did not seem forced) you helped tie together so much that was suspected.
If this goes on Hiatus I will have to do something bad. How much peanut butter do you think I can force into a mailbox? Surely I can increase it's density somehow (Freezing it first then grinding it up into powder... Brilliant! Muahahahahahahaha!). Or maybe that would be more effective in a glovebox..... Hmm.....Further research is needed,
PS: I am waiting for the conspiracy of his intelligence to widen..... Preferably without Blueblood. He creeps me out.
PPS: I hope eventually the romance will come to a happy end here. They seem nice together.
"I wanted you to ride with me like a normal pony; like the intelligent creature you are." Ufffff hit me, right in the plums.
Many happy Twilight's to you.
The first few paragraphs of this chapter totally confused me, then I realized we had switched to Twilight's perspective and I felt like a "Human"
I think the feelings I had at this was surprise. Bloody hell man, I thought Max had been in the world for years there!
The running gag of this story, I see !
*Mom, with a capital M.
Discord brought him to Equestria, I'm sure!
I predict jealous girlfriend mode for twilight when max and sunny get along.
3635748 i went back a chapter cause i though i skipped a few
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Oh yes, me too. I knew I was on the right chapter, but those first few lines confused me to know end. I was sitting there, staring at my screen all like "Uhhh... How long has Max been in Equestrian, again?" And then I read the next little bit and it made sense, but I REALLY wish that it was made clear from the start that this would be in Twilight's perspective.
oof, wasn't expecting that! well done
The S&S? Hrnmmm s&s sounds familiar almost like SS....... F@$K ITS ZE GESTOPO AND THEYRE SS TROOPAHS RUNNNN!!!!!
I want the recipe for Twilights omelet. I enjoy cooking.
I consider myself very tolerating, but I would have hit him back after the first time... but okay...
Also, can anyone be a dear and give me the recipe of the lasagna Twilights mother made? It sounded delicious.
Well, if someone would get off their ass and actually help track down that thing in the ether and didn't just complain about the air in the ether, we would find... the air... there is no air in the ether... of course!
Yay, Sunny Breeze is back! But this will obviously cause tension, oh fucking joy.