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That's going to fun later on.
Anyway, great chapter as usual. I can't wait for the next one.
Heh. I can't wait to figure out who this puppetmaster is.
'TIS GLORIOUS.
The colony died for some reason don't ask why
Praise not the sun, but the butt on which it resides. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
4504101 Damn... the moon was our best option.
4504104 Too much we're on the hype train for TLOU
I think Twilight should buy Max a cello(?) for Hearth's Warming.
Also, this was a very long chapter... Yet I was disappointed when it ended Keep up the good work! I foresee Max becoming some sort of Moses- or MLK-Jr-like figure for the humans.
Oooooooooooooooooooooooo
.... First.....
Excellent chapter by the way!
Twilight can be an idiot some times....
I still have no idea how you write this much this quickly this well. Just, wow.
Excellent chapter as usual!
*hyperventalates*
NEW CHAPTER YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!
I really like what you did with this "Kindness" POV. Definitely made me read it thoroughly and I have a couple theories as to who or what it is.
Looking forward to your next chapter
Soon enough, Max is just going to be one giant scar.
I'm guessing that those Pink and Yellow blurs were Fluttershy and Pinkie. My only question is, who the hell is speaking in third person towards the end?
I swear to the Maker or God of Pencils, if it's Discord, I'm going to flip my shit.
NOT FIRST :D
UPDATE! OHOHO!!!
Awesome new chapter! As aleays!
I wonder what this Zebra has given to Max... maybe a potipn that turns Max in a pony?
Well, I think Max deserves another visit in the Spa for the trouble he has get into lately.
The last scene with Fluttershy was just perfect^^
ok, so the voice isnt discord, or luna or celestia. clearly its someone that knows what the hell is going on thou! damn it and here i thought it was really luna. fluttershy, adorable as always
My blood is black you know.
Again an awsome chapter! I'm amused how this is the only fic that when I see an update, I drop everything, and read it. :D Can't wait more!
Did you ever read "my second life" by Coal Buck?
It's totally a ponification potion ain't it?
4504190 The pink and yellow blur is just Fluttershy, the pink comes from her mane and tail.
moa moa moa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
also fuck the sun parse the moon
You can see her stuff in the pic. Heads up their.
4504311 Thanks dude!
Octavia, and he used to play the cello.
Delicious encounters incoming!
4504269 Or a sexy times potion... Liquid Viagra. Or hell, maybe even R63 juice
+600 followers? Damn! In any case, loving the chapter and the story. They harp on him constantly but you know they do it out of love. I'm actually more concerned with the jar that was given to him... Well not so much concerned as I am curious. A jar with a liquid... Might it be?... No it couldn't be? Moonshine? Couldn't be. I look forward to finding out what it was. What does concern me is the ethereal being trying to grasp Max's attention.
Was this international????????
NO DAMN YOU! You can't give us more mystery hype and then go off and play Dark Souls like it was nothing
Praise the Sun!!
Curious to see who our unknown character is at the end.
I should have known that the town would blow up with buzzing about him surviving the infection. It's like hearing about a dog that survived rabies or something like that.
700 bits seems a bit steep in my opinion but oh well.
Yay update!!
Octavia? YES! FAVORITE PONY IS GOING TO BE IN THE STORY!
Oh please let her and Max get along well. xD
You might wanna remove that Celestia pic. I'm pretty sure I can spot some 'detailed anatomy' there.
-tsssh- Octavia incoming, prepare your body's. Over.-tsssh-
4504243 Guessing you're asking this because of the six-legged giant lizard named Sasha.
4504392 No, but it was intentional.
No! Blacken the cursed Sun! Praise be to the Moon!
4504558 I feel stupid.
4504586 I didn't think anyone could fall into stupidity... .... So sorry, these joke i'm making are at your expense, and for that I am sorry.
One of Desert Vagabond's pupils is slightly smaller than the other? IT'S DISCORD! He's pretending to be Zecora's cousin in order to give him that liquid!
I bet its an ingredient to make a potion that will temporarily let him talk. That would be so Awesome!
Great chapter, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
4504594 Pfft... I would need to fall out of insanity first.
4504604 I don't think you can just fall out of insanity... has anyone told you the definition of insanity?
4504626 To do something over and over and expecting different results.
jeez. I am sitting her waiting for twilight to confess her love and see what happens, and then I am still waiting. ugh.
An intriguing final scene...
Nitpick:
"close"
I WILL HEAL YOU!
Gotta love how everybody is expressing some degree of concern over Max, at least the ones who matter, anyway.
Also surprised that Lotus happened to be one of the ones who matter. Pleasantly of course. Also leads me to wondering where's the Fashion Pone at? Half-expected a fainting couch scene in the chapter... Not that I'm complaining: Lotus more than made up for it.
Now.... What's in that vial..?
Love your work mate, You should make Minotaur's see humans as a sort of 'Next of Kin', Don't you think that would be kind of cool. Add lots of tension, especially with the 'inhuman' conditions there kept in, especially if its going on in the pony lands etc. ... ........ no punns intended.