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Excellent, now make more.
This was totally worth waking up at 6am for (because timezones)
So basically Max has magic cum? Or does he cum magic?
It wasn't rape, it was surprise sex.
You beautiful man... You posted it at midnight...
So much win I don't know where to start complimenting.
Does this mean if given enough time Max would gain his speech back due to all the chaos magic just sort of leaking out?
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Eeyup.
Remember one of the interludes with the prank?
That addressed the issue of last chapter wonderfully.
Well, fuck. Max and Armyguy are going to be pissed.
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Chaos Magic, affecting those closest to him. It seems to affect their judgement, would definitely explain why the guards are failing to be guard-like.
A casual attitude combined with just that little push explains most of it.
whew...that wont well...
I SEE A SLEEPER AGENT IN THA MAKIN'!
Man, the chapter was intense. Celestia and the girls disapproving of Twilight forcing herself on Max and Tempest discharging Max's guards due to their inability to protect Max from his misadventures were powerful scenes. Still, I wonder if Max would be capable of countering Celestia's arguments about his romance with Twilight and his defense of his guards because with his track record involving Celestia odds are that she would make him doubtful or stop him from risking himself all the time.
I sincerely hope that Avera, Ebony, and Primrose wind up being the ones to thwart the Archmage's assassination attempt, as that seems to be the only way they'll remain Max's guards.
And Max really does need to get this Chaos Magic thing under control. It seems to make Twilight ever so slightly terrifying.
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Like she needs the help.
i.imgur.com/WxwFS.jpg
Eesh! And then there are chapters where you really want to remind everyone that this story is absolutely fucking dark!!!
More please! Especially more adorably OP'd, insane, insatiably horny, insatiably bloodthirsty Sparklebutt please! I feel sorry for Max's bodyguards tho.
PS - Pissed Celestia is Scary Celestia...
Oh my gosh. So many things are coming together! It's 1:28 AM, so I won't discuss plot yet for spoilers reasons, but Holy crap! That cliffhanger... See, this is why I will be thinking about this story constantly until it is completed. Also, excellent villain. I wish we could have someone that devious in the show. I'm not saying that we need a murderer per say to square up against the mane six, but damn this is a wonderful character.
5295631 Absolutely! Max needs to start a petition to keep his guards using this defense.
5295566 First post? Nope, thanks for coming out though.
If his chaos magic leaking out is anything like radiation (especially alpha or positron), he will eventually decay over time. He's on the clock and nobody even knows it.
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So you're saying I didn't HAVE to be on the sexual offenders list?
seems someone has a god complex.
eh so sleepy but this was totally worth staying up all night i would do my usual thing where i talk about all the awesome things in this chapter but frankly im to tired and still have a story to write of my own so i will just say good job awesome chapter you still got me hooked on this and im looking forward to the next chapter.......... -passes out on key board-
Twilight's chaos rant in a nutshell: farm9.staticflickr.com/8335/8430927637_c2b7fa8b6a.jpg
OK now I don't have a clue where this is going... Still, I hope the next chapter will be published SMOOTHLY...please?
5295527 MR Max here is not your slave... ... ...but I still agree about what you said
132. That's how many simultaneous viewers there are in the MIDDLE OF THE FREAKING NIGHT just to read this. You certainly have loyal followers, fanatics even.... Oh wait, we're one of them!
Can't Max just buy his guards back? It's not like he's lacking the bits needed (thanks kindness.... )
Keep going! ;)
Oh wait, you just published on another of your stories as well, didn't you? Well, looks like sleep is for the weak tonight!
Who's the mare in the cell? I'm a bit spotty with who some of the characters are now...
I have to admit the segue between the Tempest Barrage scene into the Twilight scene was a bit jarring and bled a lot of sincerity out of Max's inner monologue.
Max: "My friends are in trouble because of my decisions! I must save them from... never mind. Marefiend's here. It's mushy time."
That said, I like how things are progressing and consequences to actions new and old are finally surfacing. Keep up the good work, sir!
5295823 And then there's the night shifters who are normally awake now but not supposed to be goofing off. Shh...
5295848 The guard that was captured during Archmage's rescue of Dark Flare and friends (tm) from the dungeons under Canterlot. During the Gala, IIRC?
5295697 Agreed. Also, pissed off, chaos Twi is horrifying!
A part of me will always feel that if/when the Archmage loses, no matter how much he suffers in the end, it will never be enough...
Where is 47 when you need him ?
Excellent chapter once again
Huh, if that's what I think that is. Max is in for quite the shock once he finds out.
Of course that probably would answer how the humans were even in Equestria in the first place.
5295823 or maybe people are from other countries....
and soon enough, by this rate, he'll have enough cash to buy himself an army
5295613 5295943 a Russian flag, huh. I wonder what's going on :D
troubled-waters Faggy watters is more accurate
I'm trying to remember where Melodic Wind first came into the story...
I read too much fanfiction on this site. Too many characters to keep track of...
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dissy summoned them then changed them...
Oh shit max is in trouble
5295958 Who says it's Russian? That banner could very well be star-spangled.
5296031 White, blue, red. Russian flag. Unless it's blue white and red, then it's French. Easy.
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Depends. Did the other person say they were okay with it afterwards? -_-
I have a feeling The Doctor is going to give Max his voice back...
Ah... I wish someone would love me as much as Twily does Max... and return that love as much as Max does.
Great story! Keep the good work going. I found only one error reading it.
"It was a chastised kiss, almost as if she was afraid to do anything else."
I think you meant a "chaste kiss." Which means a sexually reserved kiss. Unlike "chastised kiss," which means a punished or rebuked kiss...unless your into that kind of thing.
Well... that atleast ties up the last chapter with the double personality thing. Still a tad weird that resulted in Twilight Jekyll and Hyde Sparkle, but atleast it's explained things.
One thing I did note from the Archmage... Why is he saying 'God damn human'? Foreshadowing much? Of is that a typo in the heat of the story?
Interesting chapter. I like where the story is going. It sounds like Earth and Equestria may be more closely linked than anyone, even Princess Celestia, realize.
One flaw I did find, though:
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A rather interesting way to provide some consequences, and to continue various plot points. I am intrigued and curious as to how this shall continue.