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YES! IT'S FINALLY HERE!
Edit: 90 live readers...
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Second edit: Finally finished reading, shit really went down. Now to wait for the next chapter.
Yeah... I'm pretty sure i'm gonna have to reread this entire sotry from the begining, because I'm completly lost, i'm not sure if i missed a chapter or something because I have no Idea who those human characters are. I can't say if this chapter is good or not because it doesn't make any sense to me from what little I remember of Max's story line and how they fit into it. If someone could give me the cliff note version that would be nice. My brain has derped
6459494 the human characters were introduced in the previous chapter.
edit: nvm, these are new humans.
Goddamit, that was an exciting chapter, but it was definitely not the one I was hoping for. I was hoping for one with Max. This... this was a little disappointing.
6459494 I think they're new characters that just got introduced.
6459506 Well, Blackie did say that a bunch of plot lines were going to start coming together, so the chances that some of the next few chapters won't contain Max is high.
Hey hey hey, my name is Dustin 8'D
Hahahaha... wait... is that the southern guy from the other chapter? or did you add me into the story 8'D
Ooooh man, I am starting to see something bigger going on here.
A facility that was warped to the land, a flag with stripes and stars... I am intrigued, interested, all of those other synonyms.
Lordy lordy! I love it!
Awesome update!
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssss
I thought at first that the royal sisters were turned into humans, in which case, I only had one thought.
I like where this is going
And then the disappointment.
Eh, still hit it right?
Huh, suddenly I'm reminded of Baigan from Final Fantasy IV.
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Not sure why, but I just am.
It's Thursday max. You are not one to keep promises
the wait for the next chapter is gonna kill me
Welp, given that it's been Twilight frequenting the throne room over the course of the search for Max, I'm willing to bet that she's going to be the one to find the nasty surprise waiting there in the next chapter or so.
Also, the stuff that was found in the now-exploded facility raises even more questions, and sparked another theory to add to my tinfoil-lined pile.
It's bugging the living crap out of me that I can't figure out what cipher you used.
Great chapter, as usual. Keep it up!
Don't take it personally, but I can't find it anything but hilarious that after all the waiting and the cliffhanger of the last chapter, the hiatus-breaking update is one that contains nothing but all the uninteresting side characters that I don't really care one whit about. That's just dropping the ball so hard it's only even funny anymore.
Hello!
Allow me to introduce myself
My name is
Shady
So nice to meet you
Goddammit, this is the cliffhangeriest of cliffhangers.
i can feel my interest in this story slipping away oh its almost gone but not yet at least to be honest my ntrest for this story started going away the moment he lost the ability to understand the ponies
6459602 Yeah, I figured that would be the general consensus when I uploaded the chapter, but it needed to happen or else the next couple of chapters wouldn't make sense.
6459699 Well, thank god I'm already 2,500 words into the next chapter then.
Transforming the sisters into monsters? Pods of dead humans? Remnants of America? You are going to have a LOT of explaining to do before I give you my like or dislike >ominous stare<
I mean this in the politest sense but YOU SWINE TOOTHED HARLOT, what's the cipher?! I demand to know!
also good update, NOT what I was expecting but good none the less
HARLOT
so much plot. i need a drink.
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I've always kind of just skipped over the non-main character parts of the story anyway, and so far it has really been easy enough to follow for me regardless. Still, though, true enough. That's just kind of how it goes sometimes. That doesn't mean I don't still think it's funny, though. I'm hoping the next one will be done soon, at least.
6459760 Yeah, I'm well aware that most people don't follow the "side quests" as it were. However, there are some things that Max just can't experience, and if I didn't show them, then everything would be even more confusing. I feel bad for releasing a chapter like this after such a long hiatus, but the next chapter should come out quicker. And it will have Max.
6459600 they're all 26 or less. I think it's a straight transcription cipher with a phase shift. Equine must be a decryption key.
Am I the only one who thought "Deathclaw! RUN!" from the initial description of the transformed princesses?
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Glad to hear it, then.
6459715 He'll get it back, y'know.
Eventually.
Maybe after half the world has been converted into zombies. or maybe he'll just have to learn it the hard way. :P
did he just turn luna and celestia inti neanerthals of alicirns?
I don't think you could make the Archmage any more cliche. You got the evil old archmage, the lust for revenge (WHOOOOO!?), getting rid of the rulers and taking power, the wicked beard and moustache, the laughably cliche "evil" dialogue ("you are no longer required"), among others painfully common tropes. I mean this guy is Emperor Palpatine level of evil.
......Jesus Christ
6459840 Hmmm, you're right. It's almost like it's... intentional.
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im gonna take a crack at it and say that teleportation from earth to equestria doesnt have an exact definition of time. so most likely if max or any human goes back to earth they would most likely not be back in their own time.
plot is getting kinda silly with that thou.
6459844 Intentionally cliche is still cliche. I understand that the Archmage was not meant to be the main villain here, and I fully expect to see him replaced real soon, possibly even next chapter. But unless you got a damn good explanation for why you ticked all the cliche villain boxes, I'm going to regard the Archmage as a very weak villain.
You haven't disappointed thus far, though, and I got faith in your ability to pull off an interesting twist as to why you wrote the Archmage like you did. I'll see you next chapter.
That zebra part
"Dude, I'm a fairy, let me in."
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After 500k words of story...a villain change?
...
*shrugs*
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It's like the Conversion Bereau in reverse.
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well there was a potion that changes your look for a time
I literally just had an audible gasp when I saw this at the top of my update queue....
6459560 Wait they're not humans? They sounded human aside from the elongated faces that I can't imagine.
The beginning of the end?
Y'know I should feel at least the tiniest bit upset over what the Archmage did, but I just can't help but be giddy at the prospect of werewolf ponies! I mean obviously they're not really werewolves, but it's close enough for me!
feels like we're coming close to an ending
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Either it's a cipher that's like: A=1, B=2
or
The numbers might reference something something from the chapters they pertain to.
I could be wrong though.
...
...
...I'm probably wrong aren't I.
6459560 I was thinking the Alicorn Sister's version of this: i.ytimg.com/vi/sXntqrsxZtY/maxresdefault.jpg
6460067 ok, I have ruled out basic slide transcription (both letters and numbers are in order, but a=/=1), and I have determined that Equine does not appear in the first message (Since the first and last letter are both 'e', it was easy to look for matching numbers with four other digits between them ex: 1 4 8 9 5 1, there are no such cases)
So I'm out of ideas... Unless someone wants to play around with the double character (23 23) and see if that turns up anything by testing various instances of double letters.
Part of the problem I'm having is that there are no spaces separating each word (if it's even that type of code). There could also be a number that represents the spaces... I give up for now, I'll try some more stuff tomorrow.
Btw, here are the messages for your easy decoding pleasure:
Equine 4,9,23,6,22,26,23,23,11,3,12,8,22,8,12,18,24,8,4
Alicorn 9,11,13,11,4,19,11,23,1,18,4,22,9,23,9,1
I believe those are right. Good luck everypony :)
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6460014 Sounded more like Werewolves. Very fast acting werewolves where even 1 scratch instantly turns you on the spot.
A number cypher? A fricken number cypher?!?...
Well I just had a flash back to every other chapter of "The Last Pony on Earth".
Couldn't crack them then, can't crack them now.
On the other hand I am ecstatic that this finally uploaded again.
Now for another two to three months before the next chapter.
Oh, and I'm guessing Max was not supposed to be hanging with Dustin.
...you expect me to buy that the Archmage can just do that to the Princesses of Equestria, the two most powerful ponies in the entire world?
Say it with me, ladies and gentlemen,.
BUUUUUUUULLCRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAP.
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just a few words
that was complete shit na kiddin that was awesome chapter been waitin for a while for this one to come out
cant wait for the net capter
keep up the good work and stay strong
hOLY SH!T