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Absolutely love it!
So, when I finished reading this chapter I wondered who was the author of this again. Lord and behold it turns out that we may have met at BronyCon, if I remember your name you call yourself here.
Great story, while I do read some of your other stories, this one is my favourite.
~The other Canadian from the West
Scenes the fight between Max and Shining armor are why I love this story. I was laughing hard at their shenanigans. Keep up the good work.
There are a number of errors in this chapter, but I guess that's forgivable due to its length.
Nearly filler but with a few hints of upcoming story development. Delicious! When the story is this good; just the right amount of attention to detail, displaying such warmth, I can really sit back and enjoy it SO much despite it being mostly filler. A truly heart warming moment with good family. This was definitely a good chapter!
No, he stayed in Equestria because he doesn't give a fuck about his homeworld
Epic update! Enjoyed it a lot. Please update soon
Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
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I thought that sounded familiar.
Thanks for posting that for us.
Man... its 4 in the morning I should get to sleep.
*sees Your Human and You updated*
Fuck it... I'm going in.
Totally worth it. The tongue joke with Twilight's parents and the whole table scene were hysterical.
This chapter solidified this stories place at first on my favorites. I salute you sir.
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fantastic work you magnificent bastard.
3630049 That and there is a fairly good chance the spell would have dumped him in an ocean somewhere.
3630049 In his defense, getting randomly teleported around Earth is a genuinely bad idea. Maybe if Celestia's spell had a modicum of accuracy...
Sound from a sport reporter: "And the end of round two ended with two to one for Max! The First round ended with 12 to 10 for Max (there were the strikes counting). The total count is now:
Max: 14
Shining Armor: 11
"Hey, Shining! Do you want to team up against Max?"
3630033 as in BC? I'm from there. :P
I could not be any more happy than I am right now. Thank you for the awesome update really made my day
3630209 And that he's an idiot in general
Max begins a dance number and acting the words: "It's spring time for Hitler...."
My favourite chapter so far, it was great to see the chemistry of Max and Twilight's family and not to mention he isn't being an idiot in this one! Good to see Max acting like a rational human in the latest chapters and when he isn't it was an in universe reason why.
Ok one that was funny as fuck
two the loony tune refeance love it
and the mini food fight i can so see it round three the armor stikes back lol
Those nobles do get a bad rep, don't they?
you know what.. your story is freaking the shit out of me.. no joke..
so far this story is dead on with my life..
let me just say..
my name is also max... i used to work at maccers at the front counter in my youth.. and i have to massage my mothers back and neck because she has Chronic migraines. im starting to get really freaked out here man..
If you ever have him tell Twilight a musical, it must be Mel Brooks' Spanish Inquisition.
Hillarious chapter!
If there is one thing your dad loves more than family, it’s his cheese.”
true that
Good chapter, keep up the good work.
Dayuuum, keep up the excellent writing!
I just love how you portrayed Twilights Parents.
I really don't understand this so called 'hoof-language'. You say it's like sign language but it's not, it's not at all.
First: The language is auditory, thus making it useless for death people, second: sign language has different symbols for the letters, not the words. Because it's much easier to learn 26 letters than it is to learn the hundred-odd words you use in a single day, let alone the few thousand words there are.
So are you really telling me there is a different set of knocks for thousands of words? This is bull. There's no way something like that would exist because it would take forever to memorise, but apparently it only took Max here a few weeks.
Sign language, Morse code as well, have different combinations for different letters, not every, single, word. Therefore Max should be able to say whatever he wants. Trying to learn a few thousand different symbols for every word compared to only learning 26 (little more if you want numbers and grammatical symbols) is just silly.
3630056 3630059 The next chapter is in progress as we speak
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3631166 It's kinda like signing with a flag, along with a serious of taps and certain motions. It's a complex system that has the gestures and sounds mixed perfectly in a way that the author isn't intelligent (or creative) enough to explain...
This right here; just made the story for me.
You have no Idea how much I was smiling when I read this. I may have even had tears in my eyes. This story was great before and now after that one part it became amazing!! I am usually very wary of stories like this due to the fact of having very polarizing views on the ponies or humans. I.E. Ponies are the best, humans are weak... blah.
You gave Max the one thing most HIE writers forget to give their characters. WILL. He had to go through all the hardships and trials until he finally showed the unwavering and unstoppable Human Spirit. Max had enough and was putting his foot down regardless of the consequences.
I don't expect Max to be all Chuck Norris or Duke Nukem against the ponies. Just having the mindset to stand up for what he believes in against a world who seeks to control was just......
I can't say enough about this chapter... just.... wow....
Really looking forward to the next update!!!
~8chill
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That still doesn't explain how a death person is suppose to understand it.
1000 likes whoooooooooo
3631275 The deaf and the blind use it. It's a pony thing...
I seriously have no real idea of how to explain it. I know that's not a good thing for the author to say, but it's one of those poor story elements that I created with no real reason to it because I wasn't thinking. It's something I plan on going back and fixing once I finish the story, or once I actually have a legitimate explanation. Sorry that it's annoying you...
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3631304 For your insolence.
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(Also why would a blind person use it? They can just, I don't know, speak normally!)
3631319 I don't know if I should feel ashamed... or squee in delight for getting a Gibbs Head Slap...
3631327 Both. Though in this case ashamed takes the majority.
Because this is just a terrible element and serves like, no purpose at all.
Amazing as always. Keep it up!
3631318 dance dance so far my 1st fav story so lets hope this wont end to fast btw you like bananas
3631378 I looooooooove bananas!!!
3631318 America! Congrats on 1000 likes! Pinkie is pleased with your progress , there is much potential in you .
3630696 Great Luna from me when you come to Equestria (Luna is best Pony)
yessssssss, sooon your destiny will be complete ... consuela ...... a 1000 likes! you deserve some .... lemon pledge!
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!
All of the yes!
Awesome chapter!
I see the story title. I cannot wait to see the reactions.
Maybe he will even drop the bomb about his research..... Or maybe Cadance will just make it extremely awkward since Twilight has a crush on here Human....
Am I the only one kind of weirded out by Twilight's parents' lewd conversation that they made in front of their family?
Ok. Much better than I thought it would be! Simply excellent! I wonder if Cadance is pregnant?
In addition to that I need to say that the beginning was an excellent way to keep the background plot advancing as well.
I just have to say that this is one of those stories that you can't help but love... but hate so much! I am sitting here reading one the best FIM Fics ever crying over the fact that someone thought of this and it wasn't me!!! I am extremely jealous of your skill and creativity good sir!
Quite like your reasoning for random music. That was rather clever.
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I don't think you're thinking grand enough. Think what "Christmas Time in Hell" from South Park might do.