Whoa....

This is intense...

If he comes back from this without a scratch im unfavoriting. I don't care what you say you don't go through something like that without permenant disabilities

3299901 Without a scratch?! Please, the guy got the living hell beat out of him. There's going to be some lasting damage. "Magic" is never a good enough excuse to cure anything...

3299910 well can you blame me? have read half the hies on this site?

Damn that was good.

3299913 I have. That's why I'm informing you now; he'll have some damages. They might not be crippling or make him deformed, but I hate it when a story has the main character basically torn to shreds then come back 100% healed due to magic.

Although, I'm telling you now, it'll take a couple of chapters for it to show...

I wish I could thumb this up again.

At first I was like "Yay! A new chapter! "

But now I'm like "NOOOOOO!!!! "

Nice parody of The poet and the muse.

3299962 YES!!! That's 15 points to you, good sir, for knowing that reference!

I go to work for a few days, and now look what's happened.

3299965
Woo! I can use those on more muffins. :D

POTF is such a good band and Alan Wake is an amazing game. *nod*

3299976 At last! Someone who agrees with me!

3299990 And 15 points for you, for understanding THAT reference! I LOVE Seananners!

Question: How do they make the humans act violently in the first place?

Shame about the red head, had hoped that there would have been a arc there.

Keep up the good work and hope that the protagonist isn't to badly beat up.

3299986
Why isn't there a high five emoticon? D:

3300007 Oh well, have to make due with what we have I guess...

...(\

3300002 Same way they get dogs to act violently. All those loveable mutts we have living with us are actually wild animals that we've tamed. Beat them and treat them badly enough, and they'll tend to become more aggressive and violent. As one of the sayings go: "You kick a dog long enough, it bites back".

3300011
Indeed. /)
Works well enough.

blarg
all of the crime-bitches gonna be grounded

I'm surprised that not too many people mentioned the Alan Wake reference yet. Nice work

EDIT: That refresh button doesn't work well on tablets

id imagine they are not going to heal him fully with no scars.. he is a pet after all. he would probable get basic treatment and somepony will say to just put him down.. twiligh will scream at him. celestia will be called.. and his face and chest be ALL KINDS OF FUCKED UP!! but hey.. mares dig scars right?

That was intense. I eagerly await the next chapter, continue with your word related addictive sorcery.

Good chapter...

now I am even more anxious to see what happens next...

I don't know if I will be able to focus on anything else...

damn...

>3299965 nanners

Here comes the sun...

AH! SHES BURNING ME ALIVE

3300139 Ditto.

Holly mother of... ANYTHING that is AWESOME!!!

So... did he actually murder someone here? Chills, man.

eesh, that was intense

Most evil cliffhanger of all times.

3300281

I don't think the term 'murder' applies here. Self-defense is not, nor will ever be a crime.

3300376
If the girl was sapient, and being forced into fighting against her will, it's going to feel basically the same way to the main charachter when he finds out.

Please post another chapter quickly!

Death Penalty for all!

So many references!!!! I didn't realize Max took lessons from Morgan Freeman

Pretty good, I like the climax and the cliffhanger!

I look forward to the aftermath of this! Will Max be seen as dangerous now? Will Twilight's position as princess keep him from being put down? I can imagine that humans in this world are much like dogs in our world, so it would make sense to put one down if they ever 'tasted blood' so to speak. In order to save Max, will Twilight have to reveal that Max is intelligent? The questions are unending! Next time on Dragon-Ball Z...

love it!!! Never stop writing please.

It looks like Twilight's getting into sodomy as well

3300851 Why do you say that?

3300855 Sodomy is Human + an animal (like ponies in this case)

INTENSE!!!

I believe there was a movie that would also show the cruelty of his experience, I also have a deep seated hate for the Apple family in this part of the multiverse. (Okay not the whole family, just Big Mac..."
Live on and free our peoples!

3300921 Um...I don't want to cause a big fuss on the internet, but sodomy is "sexual intercourse involving anal or oral copulation". I believe the word you are looking for is "bestiality".

3300948 Oops, my bad

This is unacceptable!

NO ONE HAS POINTED OUT THIS REFRENCE YET!?
THIS IS-

3301006 That's fine. You just confused me because I was looking through the entire chapter, searching for a typo.

Perhaps a certain Alicorn should have a little meet and greet for those ring-masters.

"mr. Sh**? Meet missus Fan. Now hit her."

3299925 hmm....kinda like...dbz?