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ZephyrStrife


Aug
28th
2018

Reworking · 3:23am Aug 28th, 2018

Thank you to those who have been interested in my story about Eribia, I am loathe to say that I haven't had any inspiration for her in a while... it's actually something that has been in my mind for some time now and I wish to announce that I am planning a bit of a rewrite for the story, perhaps the whole thing... perhaps not... likely the whole thing since I want to start fresh without any extra problems to work with.

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2903489
Finished chapter 2. Still good and my interest is piqued for now. I'm not seeing any problems so far with pacing. The characters are entertaining to read about and Brendon's inner monologue makes me chuckle because of how much it reminds me of my own.

2903488
No problem! I do have to admit, the first chapter was my weakest of the whole thing. But I hope you enjoy the rest.

2903405
So far I've simply bookmarked it to keep track of the story. I have not yet made a full decision on whether I enjoy it or not. I usually try to get a few chapters in before making that decision since it can be difficult to gauge a story just from the first chapter alone. So far, I like the story... but I don't have any specific things to point out.

Thank so much for the add! It honestly means a lot to me. If you want, please leave me a comment on what you like about it, or even what you don't. No worries if you don't. Either way, you have a good day!

2617846
no problem, it was a good read and I really enjoyed it

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