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Crimmar


A working guy in Greece who has invested himself in the consumption of as many stories as he can gorge himself with. Yum!

Writing Status

Chapter 39 of the Lunar Guardsman
Posted.

Chapter 40 of the Lunar Guardsman
21k words so far. Done
Editing right now.
Needs sketch.

Chapter 15 of the The Twilight Years
Posted.

ALSO WORKING ON:
The City Under The Mountain
A Cadance/Lyra/Daring Do story. Horror mixed with adventure.

BLACK
Continuation/reboot of WHITE.

The Lonely Mother
Still in planning stages, a young woman finds one day that everyone else is gone. She spends weeks searching every house one by one, hoping to find a clue what happened to everyone else or her.
One day, she hears someone crying, and the second voice of a very young girl calling out for help...

My ideas/prompts are:
Night Light - Sharing a drink
Blueblood - A Mark's guidance
Twilight, Celestia - Night terrors
Shining Armor - to serve and protect
Spike - Birthday
Twilight - Fighting boredom
Night Light, Twilight Velvet - Establishing dominance
Feel free to let me know if you want me to work on one in particular or have your own suggestion.

Crimmar, Crimmar, where art thou?

For anyone caring, you can find me at Discord. I'm basically logged in all the time. My name is Crimmar#9985 and I am available to talk and trade fart jokes. If you need someone to talk to, for whatever reason, I'll gladly share what little time I have, text or call (if you can stand my accent). I am logged in the fimfiction server as well, so you could find me there as well. Just make sure you ping me or whatever to get my attention.

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Darkness fluttered across the camera lens, and iron glimmered for a moment. The owner of the camera fell. The camera kept recording, but not at the killer’s direction. At the sergeant’s direction Jackie noticed the reflection on one of the shards of glass. It was distorted by dirt and angle. An indistinct shape like a cloaked man stood over the corpse. It moved, as if it was looking around, and then the darkness or the cloak flapped harshly in a sudden wind, and the figure vanished. One moment it was there, the next it was not. The video went back to the last frame where the figure was visible. Text written in bright green at the bottom shared a terrifying info.

Aug
18th
2016

The Fourth Leviathan - Charybdis - · 10:48am Aug 18th, 2016

The Fourth Leviathan - Charybdis -

A thousand and one existences away, separated by a sliver of thought, an unimaginable distance away covered by a single bound, a world is dying.

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Thanks! She is. Full head of dark hair too. Haha! Hopefully, that won't be needed. Plan is to raise her so that I don't have to worry about her choice in boyfriends. But I've got a decent selections of hammers and other heavy metal tools (I'm a mechanic) as a backup. ;P

For right now, when she goes back, my mom will be watching her during the day. But I'd rather our families get to just be grandparents/aunts and uncles rather than having to be daycare. Plus, as much as I like working on cars, daddy and husband are my dream titles.

Yes, there will probably be more. 2 or 3 is the current plan.

Lol, no idea. Probably Pinkie, maybe Rainbow since she loves moving and kivking so much. Might get lucky with Luna though. ;)

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Congratulations on both your marriage and on the birth of your little girl! You really put a smile on my face, she's got to be adorable! Hey, don't go full Raegdan, papa-wolf mode on her when she's older, ay? Give her some leeway*.
*Said leeway doesn't have to include future boyfriends. Buy a big hammer. It's a better motivator even than guns.

And best of luck on your side project. I don't know if you have other options like parents or other family to mind for her, but nothing beats a mom being always there, and not just when being a baby. Also, first? I assume that means there will sequels? :rainbowkiss:

Quick question: Which pony do you think will end up being her favorite?

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Well, at least it's peach. Plus, gives you a great terrible response to "how's death?"

Fun times. At least stuff is actually getting done. I hate it when you feel like you are just busy for no reason. Hopefully you'll get some respite soon.

I'm sure the chapter will be great. They always are, but I'm sure a lot of that has to do with how much you do go back through and are willing to scrap stuff and start over.

Good, also busy, but in a different way. Got married in December, weren't able to actually find a house till late March, and just had our first baby 2 weeks ago. So while it's not just non-stop, it feels like there is always more stuff to do than I could ever have time for. That, and my wife and I are working on building up a side thing so she can stay home with the baby. Unfortunately, that won't be right away. But, can't complain. We did get a pretty decent rental for exactly what we had budgeted for (which we were losing hope on), and my wife and daughter are both healthy, so I'm really pretty blessed. :)

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...Yes, but it's okay. I turned myself into a lich. I used a peach jam container as my soul jar. It's not half-bad.
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Work has been intense and my free time has been severely limited, especially since we're taking the good weather as a chance to make major repairs at my home... and my teeth. It hasn't been that fun and I'm still not done. In between all that, I've only been able to get breaks of 20-30 mins at times and I used them mostly for relaxing rather than writing. I am actually writing now, but reading back the chapter showed severe weaknesses and I'm doing repairs more than I'm writing new stuff.

Kinda getting a theme here, huh?

How you've been, man? All good?

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Are you dead now?

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Goddammit, I'm not dead! I just had to have to rewrite a chapter over and over and it wasn't until the fifth time that I was actually happy with it. That's about 20k words that went down the toilet! I'm done with chapter 45, but I want to finish up 46 as well in case I need to mess around with it before I get to editing them both and all.
#excuses #coveringmyass #totallydeservetheroastingthough

And I don't cower. I lurk.

2591412
A moment of silence, comrades...

We've lost him, my brothers. Crimmar now spends his days cowering in a small corner while wearing his VRHMD.

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No i seriously was not paying attention to the author.
Eeeeeyes it was in the difference. I really was not expecting that.

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It was the difference in tones, wasn't it?

YOU MADE LUNAR GUARDSMEN!!!? Okay im officially dumbstruck. I was not paying attention to who made that book and i stumbled onto you from Eldritch Horrors or whatever it was abduct a orange yokel.

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You can be sure that you aren't the only one :twilightsheepish: That came quite out of left field!

I find it amusing how your latest updates have sparked a quickly devolving debate on child discipline in the comments xD

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Oh there we go! haha sorry about that

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That's probably because you have the View Mature option turned to off. Look at the top menu next to the Fimfiction logo. If you hover over the "settings" option the "View Mature" option will pop out. Turn that sucker on and you will be able to find the story in search, shelves, my user page, and stories.

What happened to the Lunar Guardsman? I can't find the story anywhere on fimfic now? O_o

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Thought we would pm this. Ok a few good quotes. At least my oc isnt a red and black alicorn, so i at least have that going for me.

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Your character is still a total Gary Stu. Look at the Stu-ness of those quotes, mate. You're Stu-ing up the place with your Stu!

Here are a few more suitable quotes for Mr Edge I can think up off the top of my noggin:


"She is my princess! It is my duty and obligation to provide her mine aid whilst I am yet able to stand! I'll hear it only from her, and not until she sayeth I am unfit will I concede."

"Fret thee not, friend. Such privation is par the course in mine own experience in the ranks of the Lunar Guard. 'Twill become more bearable as the days pass."

"For all thy bluster, for all thy posturing, at the end of the day thou cower at the first sign of danger. And thou sayest thou art a stallion! Look thyself over in the mirror and decide whether this be the profession for thee."

"Wherefore doth my princess forsake me? Where have I erred? I have been nothing but loyal and duteous. I must see her face again, to know that I am not alone in this strange new world..."

"Well, when I am not... was not in my forge, I partook of tea and cakes on the hearth. There wasn't much to my life outside of smithing, but I never minded that. I reveled in it, in fact. And those quiet moments between projects, fleeting as they were, were the most soothing in memory. I truly wish I had appreciated them more."

"I must say, I understand the basics of the weapons I craft, but I am by no means a master in the art of warfare. I forge weapons; I do not fight with them."

"Prithee, hold this. See how the hilt is heavier than the head? In a mace, that is no good. Thou cannot make a proper swing. Reheat the furnace; this one is a failure."

"My skills were among the best of their time, I assure thee. But with so much having changed... I shall take to smithing once more with fervor; then, I shall be the best of two millennia!"

"This here axe shall be henceforth named 'Sunny', in memory of my treasured work and my family, rest their souls."


Notice that being 'cool' is not the focus. Instead, building up sympathetic qualities (losing his family and naming his axe after his mother; waking up a thousand years into the future; a stubborn refusal to give in to the circumstances; etc.) and displaying a vulnerable side is what makes him bearable as opposed to the weapon-wanking and cries for senseless violence.

Hey if you have the time, can i toss a few ideas, a few flaws and quirks in my character with you, to addon or point out in the stories duration, just so everyone doesn't think my oc is a gary stu.

Catchphrases
1) I can fix anything as long as its not a steaming pile of slag.
2) Anything can be a weapon, because sometimes you just have to make do.
3) My tomahawk has a name, its hawky.
4) Steel smash.
5) some may say a wepon is only as good as the one who weilds it. In truth the weapon and weilder must be equal one and the same, if your weapon fails, then you failed first, for you should know your weapons imperfections so you can use it to your advantage, in order to trully be one in mind, body and soul.
Some flaws in my character are basically being antisocial, and lack of a sense of humor, all he thinks is how to be the best soldier possible, so he lacks a more organic side, and is more like a machine. If you have any input id like to hear it.

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