Andrew was your ordinary, every-day, run-of-the-mill human. He had a boring job, nobody he could call a girlfriend, and basically, nothing to work with. One night, he comes home from yet another boring day of work and passes out in bed. Meanwhile, in the magical land of Equestria, Twilight Sparkle makes a wish upon a star. A wish to meet her soul mate. If only she knew what she was in for...
This story is cancelled, but it is being continued by a good friend of mine. Here's a link.
Chapters (13)
Naw no anons... also... Mature+Sex?
Didn't ya say Teen? EH? EH?
The feels!
And wow...this came out quickly.
1904907 dafuq? Let me change that...
Needs more clop.
1904914
Better... Teen+Sex...
1904911
ANON13 it's cause it's a good story.
I TRICKS THE WEBSITE IM 12 BITCH
Awesome
Really good work as usual seven. Have a mustache
1904933
dafuq?
How the hell can this have only 3 views with 9 comments?
1904959 me 12,this mature,I awesome,you not,understand?
1904974 I changed it, You aren't a trickster any more.
1904974
Not mature. Teen.
Also, I'm 15... I don't think Seven is over 18 either.
1904976 FUUUUUUUUCK
1904968
That's because Kishin and I already read it... hahaha
1904978 I'm 19 bruh
1904984
WHAT A FAIL
1904978
1904983I was referring to the fact that this story has more comments than views.
1904997
DONT LAUGH ANON13... YOU CHANGELING
1904998
Exactly.
1337+Satyr+IrishRanger=3
Also viewcounts are cached every 20 mins, it's in the FAQs.
1905003I don't think you're getting what I'm saying. There's 1337, you, kishin, irishranger, and satyr. All commenting. And only 3 views.
1905019
As I said
ON ANOTHER SITE, thought it was obvious.
And
Almost hit like because of Andrew playing DOOM. Looking forward to seeing how this pans out.
My judgement on this is reserved till I've read more.
1905031That's a bit messed up.
Seven, you still gotta tell me how it can have the sex tag and also be Teen.
1904934 It's not awesome
1905052 Sexual references
1905056
The FAQ says only when there's sex. References are usually said in the description but never tagged.
1905065 Okay, fine, I'll change it if it means that much to you...
1905071
I'm a faggot, deal with it.
Welp, besides the whole 'I'm lonely and my life is in shambles' stance on the human, I guess it seems okay thus far for an HiE. Those stereotypes should really be avoided, not the best thing to read first in a story. Especially with the general view on HiEs already.
Decent job thus far, shall have to wait to see what else you have planned.
Looking forward to the next chapter
There was, of course, no chance in Tartarus that I'd miss this one.
(Nifty opening, by the way.)
This story seems good. I got my eye on it.
I am eagerly looking forward to more! Also, did Pinkie find a way to break the walls of Space-time in order to call Andrew? Because no sane human would ever talk like that(jk I actually know a girl like that...my sister.
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i was there when he wrote it
Good start so far, i'm curious for more, i kinda like Twlight there are things of her that i can relate to.
Plus DOOM is mentioned, i love that game, especially the brutal version.
1905032
DOOM was made of pure awesome thus it is the yardstick everything else is measured against. (And now I really miss my zDOOM folder on the ex-pc)
And Twilight should really learn that you must be careful what you wish for, you just might get it. Oh well. Hopefully this guy won't get levitated and bucked in the jewels off the balcony like the last stallion. *Owch* (Hurts just thinking about it)
Hmm, this looks very promising. Certainly a different way to send a human into Equestria, but in a good way. I can't wait to see her reaction when she sees just what her special somepony is--or should I say somehuman... wait, what?
DOOM with a controller?
Oh, you just rustled this old codger's jimmies...
okay job. could use more. and obviously you need to make more chapters.
Good work. Looking forward to more in the future.
I tentitavely approve, but will withhold a thumb until I've read more.
As it stands though, both Twilight and Andrew sound like arrogant pricks. Everyone they don't like is stupid? That sounds both judgemental and infantile. Not to mention that to follow that logic (as stated in the story) to it's natural conclusion it means that everyone who is an intellectual equal or better dislikes Andrew and Twilight.
Last line is genuine fun, please update.
Ask and ye shall receive?
1906176 Well I have it on Xbox and PC, but I decided it' s easier to relax when sitting on a couch than at a desk.
1907342 Didn't mean for them to sound arrogant, but imagine if you use one big word and your date acts like you tried to explain theoretical physics. That's how dates for me always go.
1905495>>1905492>>1905032>>1906176 I say this because I mean it. DOOM is the best FPS game of all time, and maybe the best game ever made. The only game that comes close is Halo. Fuck Call of Duty.