Do wishes come true or are they just false hopes and dreams? In this story our dear Princess Luna will begin to understand the reason why such a question even exists.
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Seems legit.
To me anyways
Good so far want more
How old is the human first
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I either want him to be around the age of 22 or 25. That way he doesn't seem too old or too young. I'm typing up the next chapter as we speek and I might be able to finish it tonight, but I'm waiting to see what people want in the next chapter. Is there anything you want in it or in any future chapters?
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Next chapter is coming up either late tonight or in the afternoon tomorrow.
Are u goin to make the ponies know what he is or will the princesses know
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I think you'll have to wait and see for the next chapter which will be out in the next 5 hours or tomorrow.
(I might be able to put it out in the next hour if more people read my stories. the more its read the faster I work.)
His name could be Simon or Paul or... thats all i can think of that will suitnhim for now
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Those are really good name. If you can think of anymore that would be a big help. I also need to find a last name for him too. what do you think it should be.
Sorry about my words im using a tablet gets anoying typing on it.
Any way he could be called Shining armor aswell. Lol
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It would make a great pony name, but I'm trying to keep it human. Is there any question you have for this story at all?
and thus a new holiday was born XD
U could use simon or paul
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How does Robert Simmon Howard sound. I'm still looking for a good last name, but howard was all I could come up with. Got any ideas?
Simon Alexander Green
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Why does that name sound so familiar
How does it sound you dont hear typing from someone elses device
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you know what meant. But it does seem familiar and if that name is already used then I can't use it. Got any other ideas?
To tell you the truthits my dads name lol
Daniel Gohnson
Sebastion messenger
Johner scott
Im also not sure if these names have been used
This is the start of a great story!!!
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John Scott is a character in a murder mystery book.
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Why thank you. And if you have ideas you want me to add in please ask. If you could get your friends to read this then that would also help. If you have any questions please ask me right away.
this is a great start. keep it up!
followin'
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Thank you and if you have any ideas on what the next chapter should have please tell me. Actually the next chapter will be up soon so I hope you enjoy it.
Does he remember who he is or is he going to forget everythimg?
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You're question will be answered real soon in the next chapter. I finally got it done, but I just lost 6 hous of sleep doing so. please let me know if i made any grammer mistakes because I'm way too tiried to even keep my eyes open.
I suck in english class so im only 15
U made him a bit of a smart ass. Lol that is funny
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lol that was funny i just might use that in a future chapter.
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Well I that wasn't what I originaly want, but It ended up being that way, because it made it easier to write the story that way. Just wait for the future chapter to come out I think. I think you will enjoy this greatly.
I'm now 1/6 of the way done with the next chapter. If you have anything you want to add please tell me now.
As long as he isn't some emotional idiot im good. Make him human, not some fan obsessed Brony. Make him Him Human.
Well he won't be an idiot, but I do promise to never turn him into a brony. If i did then everyone would hate this story. Is there anything else you want me to put in. Should he give celestia a nickname or should he rumble with the guards in the next chapter (or both).
Gems for Rarity because she has gems as a cutie mark
Appz for applejack because of her apples for a cutie mark
Baloons for pinkie pie as she has baloons for a cutie mark
I think i mis spelt baloons
Thats all i got for now
Amazing. I laughed so hard I was having to wipe my eyes! I would give you 5 mustaches for this piece of work,except I'm using my phone.
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Thank you. I was wondering which part made you laugh so hard. Also what do you think should happen in the next chapter.
here you can borrow these moustaches.
Starry ass for twilight
Honestly, I'm so un-creative I would probably just give you bad advice. But I would enjoy Ace meeting the mane six.....
P.S. Thank you for the mustaches as soon as I get on a computer,I will return the favor.
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LoL. I'll use something like that
Well, since no one else has offered, and this thing kicks ass, I shall be your editor!
and his real name? we'll come to that, in time...
as for mane 6 nicknames... Butterfly girl, fruitcake, miss diamond ass, flash(like the super hero) kellogs (Cus Applejacks are cereal, and that's what kellogs make) and bookworm. And maybe little wyvern for spike, Cus that's from ancient English mythology
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Really? are you sure. Well in that case can you please send me your email so I can give you my next chapter when I'm done with it.
Nice, I like this story so far. :P
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I'm on my phone.
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Really? what do you like about it so far? Do you have any ideas for future chapters?
Curse you windows 7, curse you to McDonald's!
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What happened?
I cough as I tell Wishing Star: "Windows 7...*cough...won't...*cough....let me post emotes! (than my body goes still"
*then
Looks good, but you're lacking a bit of punctuation here and there; just a tip.