*Currently undergoing plot/grammatical edits. Any chapter labeled (Revised/Must Re-read) must be re-read, lest you be confused later on.*
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Alex Harper's life is one spent alone, until he's thrown into Equestria and, literally, crash-lands in Twilight Sparkle's library. In his search to return home, Alex finds that some of this land is much more enigmatic then he first thought. While some moments are spent learning about this new world and its inhabitants, others are much more eventful then what Alex expects. Then, there's that bitter hatred he receives from Princess Luna.
With trying to return to Earth, a psychotic businessman hellbent on driving him insane, and an alicorn princess that wants to almost stomp his bones into dust, Alex is going to have to be prepared for anything this world throws at him.
Characters include (not enough check boxes): Mane 6, Spike, Equestrian Princesses, Discord, various background ponies, and other OCs and stuff.
Takes place after "Keep Calm..." and before Twilight's coronation.
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It's a pretty good start, can't wait to read more.
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Not sure if I should be glad, sad, or just plain confused.
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Well. I found it funny, because you made it look like your character is going to get raped.
Well, in m non expert opinion I would say:
Success!!!
Great job for your first story. I'm also writing my first. I look coward to An update. Good job, keep it up
Foward damn auto correct
Definitely keeping an eye on this one
It probably isn't good for his head every time he hits the floor.
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I'm planning for him to receive a major concussion by the time the third chapter is over!
Sorry, I couldn't help it. Other than that, the story looks good.
Pretty sure I faved this not even a week ago... and yet I can't remember what it's about.
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That's a bad thing, right?
2546388Yeah. Means it didn't leave a lasting impression on me. Still following to see where it goes though.
It is best not to ask that kind of question because you will not like the answer afterwards.
Twilight's mane is not black. Why do people seems to think this.
So what is with the random hostility? This isn't going to be one of those fics is it?
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What question?
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What do you mean "one of those fics.?"
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One of those fics where Celestia, and maybe Luna, are extremely hostile to the human for either no reason, or a very dumb reason.
may i ask is Hart created like the doctor in anyway
(English accent, its bigger on the inside, brown unkempt mane and crazy)
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No, Witt is the pony that you're describing.
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so am i still correct
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I can only say: "Wait and see..."
More dammit!
I have no idea why but this story has caught my attention like so few others. Good chapter.
love it i have this twisted idea that this world is hell and the prison is are body so if we "jail break" aka suiside we get more time here
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Interesting theory...
hav a fav'n like
Why did no-one care that he committed suicide not a day before? That just feels ridiculously ooc for... pretty much everyone.
And who the heck is Witt?
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That's all I can say for now because it's too early for even myself to guess.
They know that Alex can't die and understand that he was overwhelmed with the sudden universe jump. That and Witt somehow knew that he was -quote, unquote- "immortal."
And Witt is... crazy.
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The reason for the cuffs will be revealed in the next chapter.
A story with a main character with the name Alex... I approve.
The name had been bouncing around in my head for weeks before I wrote it. It's a pretty kick-ass name.
2733133that makes two of us
d'know i think this is pretty good...
2569651 Color blind?
Wooooooo! its back!
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Yeah... sorry for the wait. I was planning on writing a completely different chapter, but I figured that I needed some extra transitioning. The next chapter is the one that I was originally planning on writing.
GO ALEX!!
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Discord: I'm still betting he'll lose.
Me: Shut up, Dis! We have to see him try!
Devilin: Yes. We must.
Me: WHERE THE #^@% DID DEVILIN COME FROM?!?!
*End Transmission*
hmmm
2194737 Love to read quotes without context. Makes em hilarious sometimes
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Read more. You're only basing this off of the first two chapters. You still have a bit of a ways to go.
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I'm going back to re-edit the entire story. The chapters that you're reading at the moment are original and have yet to be corrected. I'm focusing most of my work on re-polishing the story due to my own sloppy mistakes, inconsistencies, and unclear storytelling. I have bigger plans for the future of the fiction, so I need my hiatus time to flesh out more plot development and elements that replaced my original (as well as terrible and generic) idea.
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One, his name is spelled "W-I-T-T" Like... My aim is good, but my wit is deadly!
Two, Witt is actually friends with Twilight, as referenced in:
It may not be picked up on, easily, but Twilight is the only one that treats Witt respectfully. That should be a hint.
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His name is spelled W-I-T-T!!! There is no "H!!!" Sorry, it just needs to be right.
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WITT is going to have a chapter that goes into his backstory, but he was meant to appear vague and odd. Don't expect the chapter for a while, though, since I have to establish other character stories and develop them. Each character that I introduce will have their own backstory chapter(s) when the time comes. Hart will be first on the list, with other bits for different characters every so often. I know where I'm going with the fic. but you'll just have to enjoy the ride.
UPDATE!??!??!?!?!!?!??!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!?!??!?!????????
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I am aware that my hiatus has been quite extensive, but that's Writer's Block for you.
Update?
No update since 2014? R.I.P another H.I.E story