This story is about Martin, a 17 year old teenager that ends up in Equestria. The one responsible for all of this is Discord. There will be hardships to overcome and unknown plots by Discord to disrupt, but it will all boil down to one choice, The Choice.
Mesa gots prereader: Tsaukpaetra
Will add tags and ponies as they come up in the story.
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Keep up the good works
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thanks man.
good feedback encouraged me to write more
854535 Your wleocme,it was pretty good for your first time
And also thanks for favoriting my story
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the fav was no problem, when i see a story thats funny or good in any way, i do that.
856159 Well tihs story sure deserved an thumbs up for me :) keep on writing bro! i will watch you
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and thank you for watching me (god that sounds weird) and the like
Im gussing the u.k. doesn't have place going faster then mock 1 twice a week?
I assuming that the u.k. govment is almost as worthless as the one here in the states?
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I'm pretty sure they don't. and how could I know, I don't live in the UK, but in the Netherlands.
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You should look at the one here, in the Netherlands. I think it's somewhere at the bottom of the list.
2145577 made an ass out myself for assuming imsry for that i live on the u.s.a jets flying at high speed is kinda normal here
Favorited liked and followed GOOD STORY MOAR CHAPTERS PLZ
btw I hope Luna and Martin have a good date, they seem fit for each other, that is if they get that far
Did something hit him?
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question answered?
Why u Rick rolling us!!!
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I was in the mood.
You should fix the wall of text
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I'll do it now
EDIT: done, I just put some spaces and white lines in there, nothing more.
Love it
God i dislike pancakes so much(had them every morning as a kid) thay just dont taste good any more..
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You can drool over the other stuff on the table, like an sea of oatmeal and large pile of daffodil sandwiches.
2213674 what kind of oatmeal?
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Every single kind. With the Jumbo bottle of syrup, of course.
2213722 yes yes good good!
Curse you cliffhanger
That was dirty what you pulled ther... cliffhangers make me a sad panda..
im give ya a thumb up on ya comment it made lulz.
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That you're sad makes me happy
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Curse the one who curses the glorious cliffhangers
Looks like somepony needs to have a better handle at holding stuff with their hooves.
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Magic, i would think.
She is a princess, hooves are for the common ponies.
And.... he's fucked..
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I really, really hope you meant 'He's fucked.'
Because otherwise that would be creepy
2251597 well... thats awkward.
Martin x Luna for the win I dig the info you put in about the corrupted magic and Tia is going to be so screwed when Luna gets to her.
All in all awesome chapter short but awesome. Now on the next one.
I agree with the person under me luna never geting much love from anyone and i think see is best pony..in essence keep doing what your doingi.imgur.com/cm31v.jpg
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I agree with the person on top of me with whatever he is saying
Banana muffin
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Banana and walnut muffin
2265971 oooh challenge accepted... double chocolate chip muffin...
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Triple chocolate chip muffin and a large soda.
2266118 FUCK THAT! you win that'd kill... i bow
down to your grand muffion.
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Maybe I'll implement that in the next chapter, the muffin's i mean.
And then i shall crown Martin the muffin king.
2266157 ho ho that I'd pay to see.. i await your next chapter my king.
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You'd pay right... mmm...
Maybe we can do something with that
2266277 oh no... need that mony to fix my 360 be a gentleman and forget what i said please.
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The lovely red ring of death, good luck with that
2266309 bad disk drive it is a simple fix just gotta have it shipped to me.
I'd approve of past writings and stuff like that buuut the chapter felt shorter because of it so if your chapters are longer then I'll go for it.
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Chapters will always be this short, but i update almost every day.
So wait a few days and you got yourself a longer chapter.
Dude, seriously, work on your grammar, also, your description is too rushed and pretty flat... you need to slow it down a tad, and add more description....sights, smells, sounds, that sort of thing...
i am confused as to were the book came from... but i dont think i care. tis a good chapter keep it up.