It was suppose to be a normal day of sky diving for two bored friends. But fate had other plans for our them, as they somehow traveled to an alternate universe. This not only proves the multiverse theory, but also leaves our friends bored, confused, and, worst of them all, hungry. how will they deal with this new odd possibly dangerous universe? Will they accept their new life? Or rage quit and destroy everything? Okay maybe not the destroying everything....yet. How will they react to the technicolor inhabitants? How will the inhabitants react to them? Why am I still asking these questions? Why are you still reading this description? Read the damn story already!
Warning: This story takes place at the beginning of season one. There will also be many bad jokes and puns. You've been warned.
A colaborative story with Xx -Sycro- xX Date Featured: 08/06/2013
Interesting, Thumb up and Fav to watch.
SHIT JUST GAT REAL BITCHES!!!!!!!!
2988038
DAMN STRAIGHT!!!
2988067 WE NEED FAYGO UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!
2988174
I ALREADY DRANK 4 LITERS!!!
2988193. THEN LETS DRINK MORE! IM HYPER AS FUCK RITE NAOW!
2988208 I GOT THE PIXY STIXS!!!
*30 seconds later*
fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/040/b/e/smosh_nyan_ian__gif_by_brookecphotography-d4p75ha.gif
2988222 *samething only with FAYGO Nyah cats in replace of the poptarts*
O-O
...... EE me gerd wtf?
2988236>>2988222 OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! FEATURED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is the third HIE story that involved skydiving....... i should go skydiving
The description makes this sound like an average Human in Equestria fanfiction.
2990524 well why not?
2990413 I want to go skydiving
2990524
Looks can be deceiving.
2990542 There are already enough average stories out there.
2990604 2990586 You know regular show? It wasn't regular
took me way too long to realize that sycro and spez were actual people on this site
2990613 Well, then, if it's anything like that.
encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT1Z5hLmkCXCjW-jiIGcFjq2Baai35nchreTgmYC3wsF5RQvbVs-A
i'm thinking of doing an ANGRY REVIEW of this story a couple of chapters into it
2990669 LOL
2990692 FUCKING DO IT!!!
29906951d4chan.org/images/thumb/4/49/Angry_Marine_Desktop.jpg/800px-Angry_Marine_Desktop.jpg
DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO!
media.desura.com/images/members/1/357/356444/AngryMarine9.jpg
images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20080902204437/aceattorney/images/3/3e/Takethat.gif
2990805 YEAH
holy shit this is hilarious.
oh my god. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
2991429 2991429 Those 'ass marks'
THEZ BEZ EVILZ
2991442 but... but I have ass mark too.
farm3.static.flickr.com/2569/3929562402_563e8e943a.jpg
2991508 AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
2991517 Is that a laugh
, scream of anger
, neither
, or both
2991527 Neither
2991534 Oaki
Well done soldier, the Imperium thanks you. But be warned, if you fuck up this fic, I will have you executed for heresy.
Hmmm this story? Awesome! Bronycon was fun also :P
2991848
You are blind to the holy light of the God-Emperor.
*BLAM*
2991871 HA! I just got back from skydiving a few hours ago, then I check the box and here is this story about some skydivers! Too funny, too funny. Definitely will read this later.
2992223 Whoah, woops, somehow I did a comment reply to you on accident
. My bad dude. I just went to post it on the story is all. Derp moment 
Where the next chapter?!?!?
persephonemagazine.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/so_much_win.png?1103ba
imageshack.us/a/img33/5764/likethischapter.jpg
In other words, I would like a new chapter soon :3
2991871
HE IS A DAEMON FROM THE WARP!
CLEANSE WITH HOLY PROMETHIUM!
Hmmm, I don't exactly know what to make of this with only one chapter so far. It's not overly generic, but it's not incredibly original. It didn't seem rushed, but there was a quicker progression than most HiE fics I've read. There were also noticeable grammatical errors and mistakes of the like, but nothing that killed it for me. There's really nothing else for me to say other than I like it. I would suggest going over each chapter thoroughly to minimize any errors, but other than that i'll give you a like and a fav. to see where this goes.
This is so f***ing awesome, Imma stab a face!
...not yours. I need yours to get me moar o' 'dis.
Such an awesome trollfic! Hie, AU, typos, grammar mistakes, bad description... This is beautiful trash. How long did you actually have to practice to write so bad? Really loving it. Site needs more trolls like this.
How would this be different from the show, lol?
2994173 Show me at least 3 examples of the things you just described is wrong with the story. Or else you will be marked by me as a Troll.
2994454 Idk
I should of said, "This will be more crazy than the show."
Well, you have my attention now. So take my like and twirl on it.
2994477
It's Hie
It's AU
Typos?
-> supposed.
Grammar?
Double quotation marks, Missed capital letters. No commas at the end of dialogue sentences.
Bad description? The synopsis.
Trollfic is trollfic. Anything else for you, sunshine?
At first I thought this was going to be terrible (no offence).
But this is bloody brilliant!
Hurry up and write more!
2994629 Oh ok, you have proven your point. Still pretty decent though.
I noticed that "shouldn't of" needs to be "shouldn't have". Any would, could, should, etc. needs to be followed with either have or the contraction "'ve".
I would do as Iron Maiden sad and