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Cracked Egg


Ascensionem Per Imaginatio

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This Project was supposed to be life changing for everyone, but all it did was change me.

Now I have no idea where I am, and I need to get back home.

Hopefully not as a Porygon-Z.

Credit to this person for the Porygon-Z and this person for the lab background in the picture.

I DO NOT OWN POKEMON, IT IS OWNED BY NINTENDO, PORYGON-Z OWNED BY THE SAME, ETC, ETC, WHY DO I KEEP FORGETTING THE CREDITS?!

(Sex tag added due to certain... things that are discussed.)

(Dark tag added just in case.)

(The tags are there for reasons that you'll understand.)

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Chapters (22)
Comments ( 125 )

17 types. These types are Normal, Fire, Fighting, Water, Flying, Grass, Poison, Electric, Psychic, Rock, Ice, Bug, Dragon, Ghost, Dark, Steel, and Fairy.

There's 18 types, you forgot Ground. Nice story though.

Ninja Edit: I was never here.

Comment posted by Cracked Egg deleted Aug 24th, 2015

Ninja Edit 2: Electric Boogaloo

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Right!

*empties entire inkwell onto a parchment and sets it on fire*

...this may take a while.

I don't know if you fixed it yet or not but you are using a Porygon Z but you types it as Porygon 2.

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I know.

That's the thing, in this story a Porygon-Z hasn't been discovered yet.

Or at the very least are not well known.

I'm trying to word this as carefully as I can.

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Ah, ok I thought you had described Porygon 2 as having no neck but I just checked to be sure and you didn't. My bad.

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It's k.

I'm confusing enough as it is.

Ninja Edit 3: Awakened DLC

On to the next chapter!

*searches up royalty free music*

...I wonder...

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Maybe, but considering they're both scientists...



Oh god what have I done?

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What?
Don't sit there!
keep writing!
If you want critisism then the only one you'll get with this chapter:
He halts between the library and the boutique but after he's done introversing he is at the library.
No metioning of strange looks when he suddenly stops in the middle of the road, nobody bumps in to him or tries to ask what's wron

well his name includes glitch so i guess his system glitched

did somepony find a way to put lots of adrenaline into his systems?

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I guess I rushed a little.

If they hardly reacted to Rainbow Dash crashing into him, then why would they react to that? He's just on a stroll as far as they can tell.

They also just moved around him.


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It was the Agility that did it. Trying to move faster than sound while stationary AND having a machine hooked up to you = recipe for disaster.

It was a matter of mental buildup, time, and circumstance.

Rekt.

Also, people are disliking and I have no idea why.

I need to know what's wrong here, besides obviously repeating the same thing every sentence or so.

Besides obviously repeating the same thing every sentence or so.

Every sentence or so.

Or so.

Missingno space seems trippy as hell.

Considering this guy came from the Pokemon universe, how does he know what a pegasus is? For that matter, how did he know Rainbow Dash's name?

On another note, good choice of music for the scene.

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There's a few kinks I'm ironing out in the plotline.

For now though, I'm going to be ever so often looking at the comments and cringing...

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On another note, it was a third-to-first person perspective that I use sometimes.

It's both grating on the brain, and counter-intuitive.

Sort of like saying, "You flipped the switch on the wall." Except it isn't you, it's the character, and the narrator is referring to the character as "you."

Homestuck shows this issue thoroughly and annoyingly, yet it's extremely popular anyway.

Then again, I have no such refuge in audacity.

This may take a while.

Missingno

It is Error
It is Glitch
It is the Missing Piece of the World





A cookie to anyone that gets the reference.

Changelings that... Feed of... Happiness maybe?

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Hah hah, heh heh, hoh hoh.

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Or something far more [REDACTED].

6435813 My second guess was cheese, is it cheese?

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Dammit, now I want it to be cheese!

6436416 I do know the original Changeling hive ate cheese, swiss was a delicacy

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Of course it is, their legs are made of it!

I'm..not sure... What to think of sepia
Kind off somewhat insane and a little pinkie...ish
But not in a way this is confusing but I liked the chapter nevertheless!

... Damn, last chapter...

God DAMN, that was humorous.

Oh, and you should know the drill with the others: "OH SWEET MOTHER OF GOD MAKE MORE!" :yay:

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"I AM IN PAIN!"

"WHO CARES, UPDATE!"

"OKAY!"

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