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Lucky Seven

Abuse my love a thousand times, However hard I try, Heartbreaker; your time has come, Can't take your evil way ♫♫♫


After a mishap with the ghost portal, Danny Fenton finds himself stuck in the strange world of Equestria. The worst part? He's got enemies here, too.

Part 2 onwards will be written with the help of MissytheAngle!

Part 1 going through re-edits by Curify. This dude is awesome, I seriously can't say enough about his greatness as both an editor and a friend. Thanks, man.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 165 )

*Sees Danny Phantom Crossover* Instafave! Instalike! Have a cookie!

*patiently waits to see Danny fight Sirens/Sunset* Dis gon be good.

"Gonna catch em all cause he's Danny Phantom!"

This is pretty good so far. Though you made an error you might wanna fix. You said Danny was 14 but he's actually 16 by this point in time. Phantom Planet happened 2 years after the start of the series as 2 summer vacations went by in the movies, each a year apart in-universe. Other than that I don't see anything wrong. ^^

Btw as a guess, would the 3rd main character for this arc be Ember by chance seeing how he has the thermos still and never got to send her back to the Ghost Zone when the explosion happened? Only other guesses I can think of is Sunset and the one of the Dazzlings.

6149403 Maybe Ember joins forces with the Sirens. They're all about the hypno music biz after all

6149403 Thanks, it's been a while since I've watched the full series so that slipped by me.

6150179 Anytime there. ^^ This shall be fun, especially if Desiree appears later on. I could totally see the magic of friendship fixing up her life or afterlife I guess given what we know of her tragedy.

6150018 True that does sound like something she'd do. I wonder how she'd take a rainbow laser to the face from an alicorn spirit made of music though? And think the Rainbooms might have a chance of reforming Ember like they did Sunset?

6150329 Same with Ember possibly, her backstory is just as sad as Desiree's. It's a wonder those two are considered "villains" by so many people. In all reality, they lived very tragic lives and I can easily see why they're so bitter.

Excellent chapter, once again! It definitally sets it up to be a good story~

6150443 I'll just post what I found on the wiki.

According to one of the creators for the show, before she died, Ember was an unpopular high school-aged girl who had large dreams of becoming a rock star. One day a boy asked her out to the movies. She waited all night for him to show up, saying, "He's just running late." When morning came and he didn't show up, Ember went home. She was so exhausted that she fell asleep and didn't wake up when her house mysteriously caught fire. She died in the flames, which possibly gave her the name "Ember". Her song "Remember" is possibly based on the above events prior to her death.

6150339 That's true. Really they're only villains cause Ember wants to rule the world and attacks Amity Park at random times and Desiree tries to get revenge on Danny and take over, Other than that they're tragic misunderstood individuals that need a friend to help them. Plus Danny is kinda the one that made Desiree his enemy and a partial villain by attacking her during their first meeting. Talk about a screw up job starting out as the hero huh? He should've talked to her first instead of attacking since she wasn't actually doing anything wrong, just granting a child's wish. Ember though is just like any kind of teen that wants to be popular and has power. They think they can rule the world and don't think things through very well. It doesn't end well.

Who you gonna call? Wait... that can't be right.

Off to a bumpy start, but it got better once he was in Equestria. I'm curious to see where this goes!

*Ahem* (in snobbiest voice) I have deemed this entry worthy of my notice, and shall place it on my watch list to see if quality improves.

(Normal voice) but seriously, interesting concept. I'm eager to see where this goes, despite my usuall reads falling under the T section, E's have a way of surprising me with how deep they get.

6151032 I appreciate the honesty, and I'm glad you think so. My writing tends to be very average, or even below it, when I'm writing situations that rely on very specific pacing, so the portal scene was a challenge for me. I'm trying to improve with that kind of stuff though. Anyways, I hope you enjoy what I have in store!

I've been waiting for a Danny Phantom cross over for some time, though I didn't expect an EQG version. I shall watch with interest.

Eh. I'd like this better if he went to the regular equestria. The EQG universe is just less interesting to me, not to mention too similar to Danny Phantom. It stifles many possible jokes right from the start.

Not gonna dislike though, because it's not bad, just not for me.

6151236 Sad to hear that, but that was the point all along. The familiarity with the show itself is what makes this easier to write, and it allows me to draw more inspiration from the show as well.

But hey, I can understand why it's not in your interest. Thanks for the comment, though!

Jesus, do they just let ANYBODY enroll?

Regardless, you have my attention.

Yeah it's a pretty nifty series, it's been over for some plus years now but it still has a charm to it.

Lol getting a class is easy maybe endi.g up there has its benfits

6151542 Well I mean, it IS a public high school lol

But I mainly wrote that scene quickly because, well, spending like a thousand words explaining the process of signing up for school would be booooring

6152379 To be honest, that school is already shown in the movie to have strange standards. They even let a girl who had shown up just one or two days before win a school prize. It would probably work better if Danny finds it odd how easily the enrollment goes. Besides that, I look forward to seeing what you have in store with this story.

Strange I was thinking on making one of these myself only way different then what you got. I was thinking of having Danny and his family move to the EG world where he become friends with the human Mane Five and Sunset Shimmer. He also meets the Sirens and one of them fall for Danny. The other two see his ghost sees his ghost form as away to get their powers back.

Ms. Harshwinny was possessed, wasn't she?!! Also...

When I first saw this I was like "I GOTTA READ THIS!"

Aww poor Sonata. Nice update, looking forward to more.

Is it just me or I have a feeling that Ember McLain shall appear.

Nice story so far--hope to read more soon. :twilightsmile:

Also, good job on not having Danny reveal his secret immediately to the Rainbooms. Many an author would make the mistake of simply having the crossover characters tell who they were to each other just because.

Danny and Rainbow having good first impressions is perfectly normal, and believable. Also, looking forward to seeing how the villains react. If I recall Ember would be more akin to Chrysalis, wanting others to feel love, not hate. Wonder if the sirens would want her around or not... :trollestia:

Huh... Ember as one of the contestants in the battle of the bands... and she runs on similar principles as the Dazzlings. More fans, more power...

Hmmm, the story's starting to get interesting... :trollestia:

Hooray for the story not being dead! I was actually wondering about it last night. And here's to the next chapter coming out sooner! (he said, hope shining in his eyes, just itching to be stomped out)

Yep, get trust built between the seven of them before Danny goes spilling the beans about his powers.

Nice chapter. Well written so far. I look forward to the next one.

If worse comes to worse danny can use his strongest his movr on them, the ghostly whale.

Do you want to join my Diary of a Wimpy Kid Equestria Girls group? All I got was 4 members on my group. And No Stories so far because the authors I suggested them to my group haven't wrote any stories yet. So How bout you make a story and join my group, Can you do that please? :twilightsmile:

can't wait for more it'll be intristing actually because sunset is the person that will be trying to find out danny's secret during his time there being in good knolage of cutie marks knowing that all have a special talent and will try to find danny's

6492309 I'm coming along with an update right now. It should be posted tonight, if everything goes smoothly.

Wonderful writing style, easily pictured characters and scenery, flows nicely... Sounds good to me!

You already established that Equestria is the name of the world so making it the name of a nation (and not the only nation in the world either) doesn't really work.

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