There have been several requests for this untold chapter of Adam and Luna's lives, so here it is. For you, the wedding story of Adam and Luna
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NightInk
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I am loving this. Oh so much... question should I read this second or third?
2348012 It works best reading this second, but third is ok too. This is almost like a #1.5. It provides a little more background into Adam and Luna's life
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD/CELESTIA/LUNA/SPAGHETTI MONSTER DAT BOMBSHELL
I bet it's pshyco girl/? Or his parents
EDIT: maybe Luna and celestia's parents?
Not cool mom and dad not cool at all.
2351465 2351540 Haha close you guys, but it's not his parents. You'll have to just keep reading!
Awwww no twist?
2351592 Naw, not this time. Maybe in the third mainstream story!
I lost it right then.
Someone needs to make fan-art for him in a dress.
2352848 Lost it in a good way?
2353646 Lost as in I fell out of my chair laughing.
2353646 if your planning another sequel to this you've lost your chance to post it
2355502 Haha yeah, I'd consider that a good thing!
Will the story continue?
2570569 yup! Since it's so tough to get HiE stories up (as far as I know. I've been busy recently and haven't kept up), there'll be a bit of a break before the third actual adventure of Adam and Luna. Don't worry, though, it's coming!
Why would they want to live on earth if they will both live for thousands of years? That doesn't really happen on earth.
2612398 With how easy it is for them to go between worlds, it makes sense for them to try and stay in good contact, in touch,etc. with the people Adam knows on earth. Like you say, people comparitively dont live long on Earth, and once someone dies, it's tough to find where in the Crossroads they live. And really, you Don't want to be going to Ben every other week saying, "Hey, a buddy of mine just died. You seen him?"
After a while, it would make sense for them to live in Equesstria, yes, but for the time being Earth is ok too.
I've got tell you that damn near every chapter of your stories make crack a smile that hurts my face with the sheer size, and that all of your stories have been fantastic as of now. Except for mixing up the spellings of loose and lose, irritates me to no end. But other than that, I'm glad you wrote these stories, and hope you continue to for the foreseeable future.
2826136 That's great to hear!! I'm glad that I've been able to make at least a couple people laugh. I love writing these stories (though I hate editing them for spelling and grammar. Sorry about misspellings and that. I'll try to do better with that.) Half the fun for me is seeing how people respond, so yes there will be more on the way! Though I will say that I will probably not be posting new chapters for anything until at least the end of the summer. I don't have exceptional Internet, so I've been using this time to rewrite and retread my own unpublished work. But I'm still working and still trying to do good work. Thank you (and anyone else who has suffered through reading my stories
) very, very much!!
2871651 if you want, I can help proofread your chapters as an editor, it's up to you though
I found the story to be vary good. Adam and Luna have the best of both worlds. I do hope you write More about this Alternate Universe. I just love how he brings the best out of the ponys he is with. It does not mater if they are friend or foe. he has a positive influences on them. Keep up the good work. I look foreword to your next story.
For some reason I can't stop thinking he's going to skip around singing "I feel pretty" in that sundress....
Cliché confirmed! Not necessarily a bad thing, but the idea is not something that a majority of readers will go for. Human-turned-alicorn stories aren't usually well-received. Makes it seem like the human was a wimpy little bitch and had to be transformed into an OP alicorn for whatever reason (none are ever good).
I can honestly say that I didn't read any further when I saw that. And the human/Luna ship has been overdone to the point of exhaustion.
2352848 me to
XD what did he think would happen?
8209741
or something
idk maybe sprout tentacles
8766733
XD nice
So... Should we read this before Stars in the day or is optional?
If I recall correctly revolvers don't have manual safeties. Or at least any I've seen don't.
God is life. How could he not mess with it. Still though thanks for the chapter.