• Published 16th Oct 2012
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Day One - Miniscule Literary



A man surviving in a cartoon world. Its not as easy as one might think.

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BONUS: Alternate Ending!

We join our heroes in their epic final confrontation against the demented Queen Chrysalis. Celestia and what remained of the Elements of Harmony would fight to take back Ponyville, but it would seem that all was lost. With hostages and numbers on their side, the changelings had little to fear.

"Queen Christmas!" Celestia called as they approached, watching as the changelings parted to reveal their wicked queen. "Ponyville belongs to the ponies, its in the name and everything!"

"Princess Celery, you've finally joined us!" the evil queen of the changelings exclaimed with a harsh laugh, echoed by her many minions. "I don't have to listen to you! Queens are higher rank than Princesses!" she retorted as she pushed one changeling off the stairs with a hoof.

As the two played a vicious game of wits, David, the lone human in Equestria, cowered helplessly behind some crates. He was so tired of being picked on by his pretty pony neighbors. He just wanted those stupid changelings to die.

"Woah I can feel my fingers," Dave gasped as he felt a sudden surge of power. He had pushed past the mental and physical barriers preventing him from realizing his true potential as a real being inside a fictional world. It was like a lucid dream, except real but also not because its a cartoon. It was totally trippy.

"This is totally trippy!" Dan roared as he shot upward with a surge of energy. The ponies and changelings looked up with confusion, some scowling, some clearly jealous.

"Dude. Denny, I didn't know you could fly," Celestia declared as she watched him spiral gracefully in the sky above, her face twisted into a scowl. "I have wings and I can't fly."

"I have the power of a god!" Demetry yelled as he did a figure eight in the air arse-first. "I'm going to transform these changelings into a bar of soap."

The changelings gasped. "All of us?!"

"Every single one."

Dale began circling the changelings threateningly as the trail of sparks coming from his backside became blood red in color. The poor creatures watched on in terror.

"But we're a people of peace, Damion!" Queen Chrysalis cried in horror as she watched Derek circle ever closer to where they were standing.

"Woah," Donald gasped as he suddenly came to a stop. "Are you serious?"

"Yeah."

"Oh shit," Douglas cried as he slammed face-first into the ground, his hands grasping at his hair. "I've been such a dick."

"Yeah kinda," Chrysalis agreed, while Princess Celestia and her friends nodded along.

"How have I been so blind," Drew lamented as he slowly stood on his head. "I won't ever bother you again!"

And then he was a cactus.

THE END.

Author's Note:

Best read to this music.

Comments ( 116 )
guang #2 · Dec 22nd, 2012 · · 1 ·

Alternate ending huh? I want my money back you didn't change a thing. :raritydespair:

I liked this one better

I'm just going to say: "Awesome Ending " and leave....

Awesome Ending. :pinkiecrazy:
*Leaves*

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Not to worry! I have refurbished the new ending and have made it completely unique!

Best. Ending. Humanly. Possible. Yeah!:rainbowlaugh:

"This is totally trippy!" Dan roared

Totally trippy indeed.... Pass me the coke... NOT THAT COKE!! The soda, geez...

Oh god that was so.............................. just no :eeyup:

meh

wow

1837650 Much better now. Ten out of ten. :rainbowlaugh:

David, what have you done?! You've changed the universe!

You've created a Reality-Paradox!

Darn you Cel-celebr-...Celery! :twilightangry2:

... un-faved.

If this is you trying to appease those of us who thought the other ending sucked, well, uh... :facehoof:

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Nothing like that at all.

Just a little joke. Complete and utter satire.

I liked both endings to be honest.

1837723

If this is complete randomness, then I might as well go along for a second...

*buzz*

Ooh, sorry, I'm afraid this ending is not a fruit, you lose 4 letters.


In all seriousness, though, after actually bothering to read this ending, it actually was a bit funny.

Day One Updated :yay: wait what? :rainbowhuh:

But why wasn't David a cactus all along? :raritydespair:

I think this ending is an improvement.

1837723
Troll-Tastic alternate ending!

Well.... That was a fun alternate ending.

Come for the update, stay for the ka-ka-ka- carrot cake.

I...um....wow.
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There are no words.

In this chat, butthurt bronies not able to take a joke 'n' not being able to accept an authors choices for his own story. Well played bro

I'M A FILLY AND WHAT AM I READING

Wow, I'm trippin' balls already.

*nods once* Men.... *begins nodding more* are crazy.... :heart:

Best ending ever.

That's.......better:rainbowderp:

:rainbowderp:

Didn't find it that funny. :ajbemused:

holy shit that was amazing

Comment posted by Pulsar Glow deleted Dec 22nd, 2012

Finally an ending worthy of our eyes!

(on a serius note: still want a good ending :pinkiesad2: )

This is better. I'm serious it is.

Seriously. I didn't like the original ending, but... to be honest. This ending, as a big ol' "Hey! Thats what I wrote, and thats my ideas" and just giving a ridiculous ending... makes me giggle. Thanks for sticking to your guns! (even if I didnt enjoy it) Good on ya! :D

I find it really hilarious that David's name kept changeling.

:twilightoops:...I feel like protonjon when his koopa shell turned into a key in one of his rom hacks... I really wish I knew which one it was...

....So you took the bullshit ending, and ripped off of Dragonball P? Seriously?
Is it a matter of you being too lazy for a real ending, or do you just like harvesting downvotes? :facehoof:

1838725 The downvotes three days ago were about 70.

Comment posted by Tome Turner deleted Dec 22nd, 2012

did anyone see the comment that got deleted. All I want to know is why it got deleted.

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